The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs... The version this review is based on is Ch. 2 Part 3...
First I want to mention that I could not keep going through this VN/Game, as it was highly confusing, and began to become far more annoying then entertaining... As a warning, this review may go into some spoiler territory...
The visuals are a mixed bag... The characters are a mix of ones I've not seen before, a few customized ones (like the female centaur), and ones I kind of recognize from other VN/Games... They are of low to moderate quality... The backdrops were a mix match of original ones, and a few I've already seen before...
The script is where I became annoyed the most... It is a mix of long winded attempts at poetic description mixed with some occasional broken English, miss used words, a huge lack of proper punctuation to set the story telling pace, along with some occasional spelling/grammar errors... You can tell the writer/s are attempting to use a lot of stylized descriptions (somewhat poetic in nature perhaps), in how they are telling you the story and so on, but then they would occasionally throw in a few normal sentences, then back to rather long sentences of more attempted prose... There were also some made up words, or perhaps just misinterpreted words from a non-english version perhaps? It was hard to tell...
Initially the writer/s are trying to go through this rather long symbolism of how doors represent choice in life... But it kept droning on far longer then it needed to, because once that part was over, the doors were never referred to again, that I experienced... Then when you think it's about to go into some actual story plot, it's more attempts at long poetic verse to explain the mind set (or at least that is how I was interpreting it) of the male protagonist, who I guess dies based off the visuals? It was really hard to tell...
Following all that you get to a mini-game in the form of a riddle, that if you fail to properly answer (you type out the answer) you are then given a choice to skip it, try over again, or just make another path choice? What path choice? You are never presented with a path choice, so I was even more confused at that point... Anyhow, I decided to skip it, which then lead to what I first thought was heaven perhaps? Followed by a moment, where I think the writer was trying to say subconscious, but instead used subcushion? Again, more confusion... But instead of what most folks picture as heaven, it ended up being more like a very green high-fantasy scene, with a female centaur that wasn't all that great looking... She just begins threatening the protagonist with hate in her eyes... Was it really necessary to do the very lengthy camera panning (that you couldn't skip) as though it was trying to present this sexy half real looking horse, beginning at the hooves, then up to a oddly thin fantasy woman upper torso, aiming a bow and arrow at you? I was just so totally confused and lost...
Then it quickly switches, without any given reason, to a scene with the protagonists dad, after a brief amount of more long winded stylized story background about his family... You then get a scene, with his father when he was a child, and you are asked if you enjoyed riding the bike after crashing it? I went with No, and there was this look of dread from the father... He runs away as though he was in danger... Then you whisk off to what I guess is another flashback, this time with his sister when they were young, where the story telling and dialogue sounded a bit artificial... With the protagonist beginning to sound a bit like a jerk...
All this stuff just keeps getting thrown at you... No clue why, or what it had to do with anything up to that point... So here I was, maybe 30+ minutes into this VN, and I still had no real idea, what was actually going on... I began to feel a need to skip through the text... As it was far more long winded in it's attempts to drive home key points, which you had no idea what their purpose was... On some occasions I had to read it more then once due to all the text issues I mentioned already... I was reading all this stuff, and still had no clue what the plot was going to really be... Or how, what I was seeing and reading, tied in to the door stuff in the very beginning... It was like someone was having an ever changing random dream, and I was just unluckily being yanked along as it changed and altered...
There finally came a point where I just had enough, as there didn't seem to be an end in sight, where I would get past all this long winded attempts at poetic stylized writing, and get to some sense of plot and meaningful story telling, that made sense...
I also ran into some game breaking choices, like with the sister, the very first choice crashes the VN to the Error Screen, even though you can ROLLBACK to get back to the choice screen... That first choice always errors out...
There was an erotic still image in the beginning about the doors, but the event just involved a few different camera angle positions of the same image... I almost think it was just there as an enticement to get donations, more then something meaningful to all the door stuff...
Overall, I do feel like the writer is really attempting to tell this detailed introduction, with lots of poetic style frill... Sometimes attempting to use some big words, even when they were probably the wrong words... But the chosen style, mixed with all the other text issues, made it hard to read much of the time... And it began to wear down on me, becoming a bit too cumbersome... Some of the points could have been made with fewer words, and less attempt at trying to sound so flamboyant and/or flashy... Especially over a very lengthy introduction, that seems to just go on and on...
Perhaps some folks may like it, and normally I don't mind hard to read writing too much (you should try reading Ray Bradbury's Martial Chronicles)... But it felt like it was going nowhere, taking far too long to get to a point that wasn't so confusing/pointless (such as the centaur event)... I was only holding on as long as I did, in hopes of getting to see some actual story telling in the present day of the protagonist... But I eventually just quit reading/playing it... As it appeared up to that point, that even if it got past all the flashback stuff and confusion, the story telling format was still going to be just as hard to read and be just as wordy...
I do wish the developer/s the best of luck on this one, but I think it needs a lot of work if it's really going to shine or keep peoples interest past the first few minutes of reading... I have no plans to revisit this one for the moment...