Ren'Py Doors [v0.3.3 Part 2] [The Neuron Project]

[MrDL]

Okay, I'm sure this has been brought up several times but I'm only just starting this and finally getting through way too much exposition at the start, I see the mother here and I have to ask.


What is with the creepy loli-like head looking like Gollum in some shots on an adult body? Guess at least I guess I know who the preview shots are now but this and the first preview shots look way worse than the other models, especially the one in the shower from the intro exposition dump.

 

[AnimeHentaiGamer]

more ntr please. the sharing of the older sister in sauna was hot. hope we can share or ntr the blue hair girl.

 

[Perry1980]

There is not a whole lot there to judge yet, but I'll give it a shot.

Problem: Characters lack a default name. This part must be fixed.

Characters: The character models are fine. I like redheads and there are a lot in this game, and some are cute.

Drunk Driver: This guy has my greatest sympathies. Honestly, the biggest victim in this story.

Protagonist: Dumb 11-year-old kid that likes to dream, and walk into the street while looking at his phone not looking out for cars.

Dad: Seems like a good guy... so long as you tell him that you liked riding the bike without training wheels and him letting go was fine and you are all happy. If you answer with that you didn't like that... You know him asking the opinion of a child, and answer honestly this guy turns into such a shitty little bitch walking away all sour faced... Then protagonist is all like "how can I be so stupid I'm sorry"... So basically this guy seems like a good parent so long as you tell him what he wants to hear.

Big Sister: She is cute, barely know shit about her.

Little Bro & Sis

Twins? Highlander Syndrome? They got a syndrome that don't let them age, or just the borther does? Sister seems to get upset no matter what you say and is supposed ot be a genius.

Mom: You don't even interact with her. Apparently you are waking up and don't see dream of her, and she is like "OH MY GOD!" when your eyes open. Screaming in the face of the person who just got out of a coma...

Problem: If it's ever made possible to bone the younger redhead girls the game will not be allowed on this site. Apparently Loli is ONLY legal if in 2d not 3d here for some reason. So you can gangbang a bunch of 2nd graders if it's 2d, but you might get in trouble for 10th graders in 3d. Strange double standard. As a solution to this problem for you... Maybe make it so when you got hit by that car it put you in a coma for like 10 years... You would wake up at age 21. Your big sis, and little sis would be acceptable age ranges. Then you can have an excuse for acting like an immature horny preteen.

Exposition: You ramble on a lot about doors... With how much you talk about doors in this there better be some magical doors in this. By answering 2 at the one dream door you meat some hot centaur chick from some fantasy land. It appears almost everything in this version is a part of a dream state.

Problem: Sometimes it appears you follow character perspectives that are not the protagonist. For instance, you followed the perspective of the drunk driver that ran over the stupid 11 year old protagonist walking into the street while looking at his phone. You like follow his whole day... Guy goes into work. He gets fired... His co workers are giving high fives like "fuck that guy, glad he is gone..." So... He is like hell, I'll go have a drink to drown my sorrows.... Goes home from work early... Finds his life long best friend fucking his wife.... in the ass. Is not okay with this... Walks out the door gets back in his car... and if it was ever okay for a man to have a drink now is the time, so the guy goes to have a few beers instead of jumping off a bridge.... So he gets back in his car and then he is all eyes full of tears having the worst day ever and it gets even worse when some stupid child (protagonist) walks out into the middle of the street not at a cross walk, without looking anywhere but at his phone... Then BAM kid gets slammed into by the car driven by a drunk... a drunk that managed to stay in his lines the entire time kinda impressive. Also the car has New York plates so this takes place in New York...

That whole guys day should be removed. It's unnecisary and confusing information. Just show the kid walking into the street getting hit by a car. The driver did NOT need to be drunk, and this could literally happen to any driver, even a good sober driver. The kid is 100% at fault... but knowing how the law is this guy is now in prison getting raped in the ass by Big Black Bubba as a "Child killer"... The absolute worst thing you can do to ruin a story is to follow the perspective of someone other than the protagonist.This guy has it far worse than the protagonist. He lost his wife, job, freedom, best friend, and surely a lot of his money and resources and freedom, and it's not like he is shown doing anything bad or sinister so we can be like, "fuck that guy he deserved it." Protagonist is just having some dreams, gonna wake up all good after his coma. Personally I'm more concerned about the so called drunk driver.

Problem: Sometimes you use too many words, or too big of words like you busted out a thesaurus to get your point across. For instance, one line is:


"My first life ended whit the help of a mind-boggling balance between stupidity and bad luck."
"The adversity came in the guise of a drunk driver who drank himself to oblivion because he had a very, very bad day."

Instead of all that wording, it could have instead been written as something like:

"My life was permanently altered after a car accident that put me into a coma."

Not sure about this game yet. It could be very good, or shit. Time will tell.

i actually like the info concerning the huy, but some just want to fap.
And its funny your complaining about the long monologue and complain about it with such a long tedious comment on the dev. You basically repeated the intro of the game to let us know its too much and unnecessary. So unnecessary to repeat it.

 

[MrDL]

Riley is kind of homely but fine for a first/trainer girlfriend but this...


This is terrifying.
EDIT: I go a little further and get an actually intended jump scare.

Do we find out who that was behind the desk?

EDIT2: Oh, that's probably either Miss Zonberg from "Ending 1" or Stefany.

i actually like the info concerning the huy, but some just want to fap.
And its funny your complaining about the long monologue and complain about it with such a long tedious comment on the dev. You basically repeated the intro of the game to let us know its too much and unnecessary. So unnecessary to repeat it.

You realize that post is going on three years old, right?

 

[Seanly]

How am I missing all of the content? I played through to the hottub scene after the bday, got blueballed. Then MC is in bed and wants to peek on sisters but nothing happens.

 

[Ifartedtoolong]

Nothing happens with the sisters but will with the brother if you peek and I'm not sure if you have to be on his route or not.

 

[britej88]

walk mod would b nice, or maybe a blue sign on one door, a red one on another and an orange one on the third lol depicting content routes

 

[MrDL]

Okay, just got the MC home, mom looks a little better here but face structure still doesn't look right close up, specifically the jawline. Some issues maybe with expressions might make it worse.

The dad's model reminded me of Luke Wilson and thus I named him Luke.

walk mod would b nice, or maybe a blue sign on one door, a red one on another and an orange one on the third lol depicting content routes

It's kind of amazing there's not even a text/pdf walkthrough for how long this game has been around.

 

[Ifartedtoolong]

That's because it was abandoned for a long time and this is the 2nd update since it started back up.

 

[MrDL]

That's because it was abandoned for a long time and this is the 2nd update since it started back up.

Might be why it took my so long to check it out. Dev should probably take some time and improve some of the models, especially the mom and Riley.


EDIT: I might take it back on the mom looking better part. Went to the hospital and she's got some serious giraffe neck. Face still looks like it was meant for a smaller/slimmer, younger model. At least it cements that it's probably the assistant/Miss Zonberg behind the desk.

 

[absalon1977]

There is a link too a walkthrough on page 44 its one update behind though, with that you should be able too get the scene in the hot tub, but its actually not that difficult the problem with getting the scene is that the first trigger is ages ago, when the mc first get home you need too hug your sister after that just do everything you can too get closer too her, the hot tub also have a start route for the younger sister but you can only do one route, nothing happends with her at that point but the new update have a short non sexual scene with her if you do everything right. The walkthough is a bit of a mess but at least its easier too figure out triggers for routes.

 

[nn2017]

Good

 

[Raziel_8]

If I followed the chain of choices correctly lol. Also involved is getting the password to your "brother's" tablet, which also leads to the chain of events. Those events set the variable to get final choices, which boils down to this:
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Now...any tail-chasing man would think, "you know what, I wanna go hang out with those hot gingers..." Well, it looks like you walk into an even instead.

EDIT: OH, but you won't get those choices if you don't hug and don't go to the hospital.

Ok i tried, i saw no lesbian scene that is true.
Althought it does seem that the mother and older sister in a relationship either way and the Gina probably also being involved with other girls like that blond doctor, or so it seems.

I'm not sure what lesbian club the poster before spoke thought, can't remember seeing or hearing about it, but than i skipped some parts couse the game feels really bloated at some parts.

The thing which annoyed me most, beside Gina/mom relationship (suspected), is Riley...i rejected her at every single opportunity, but the game doesn't seem to care

 

[MrDL]

There is a link too a walkthrough on page 44 its one update behind though, with that you should be able too get the scene in the hot tub, but its actually not that difficult the problem with getting the scene is that the first trigger is ages ago, when the mc first get home you need too hug your sister after that just do everything you can too get closer too her, the hot tub also have a start route for the younger sister but you can only do one route, nothing happends with her at that point but the new update have a short non sexual scene with her if you do everything right. The walkthough is a bit of a mess but at least its easier too figure out triggers for routes.

Giving a page number isn't that helpful when others have different numbers of posts per page, a post number, link to the post or just quoting the post would be helpful. It was embarrassingly on what's my current last page with 100 posts per page but it's an easy to overlook post. I overlooked a lot because I've made some of the same comments that have been made more than once, including the same image examples.

For anyone wanting a walkthrough, you can DL it from here. It's one version behind.

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What everyone is looking for.

 

[varage]

more ntr please. the sharing of the older sister in sauna was hot. hope we can share or ntr the blue hair girl.

You already do when her dad finger bangs her while you are flirting with her mom at the pool lol. in second to last scene of game on that route.

 

[kaken]

virus on incest patch...

 

[Raziel_8]

You already do when her dad finger bangs her while you are flirting with her mom at the pool lol. in second to last scene of game on that route.

This game really needs clear paths, espcialy with sharing/ntr...

 

[BobYu94]

what is the password?

 

[GetOutOfMyLab]

You already do when her dad finger bangs her while you are flirting with her mom at the pool lol. in second to last scene of game on that route.

What? I just looked through all the images and there is no such scene.

what is the password?

For the brother's tablet? Try: GAME OVER

I didn't try this myself, just looked at the code.

 

[Raziel_8]

What? I just looked through all the images and there is no such scene.

There is...althought it is not clear what really happens, coud just be that her dad gives a darn good massage

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