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I agree some of the MC's inner monologue is off-putting.
-MC has been in a violent accident, learns his kid is dead, freaks out and has to be sedated, and immediately after coming to is checking out nurses.
-Later at his house, he questions if he is developing feelings for his caretaker after having known her for all of about forty seconds.
There were other moments but those two stuck out to me.
-MC has been in a violent accident, learns his kid is dead, freaks out and has to be sedated, and immediately after coming to is checking out nurses.
-Later at his house, he questions if he is developing feelings for his caretaker after having known her for all of about forty seconds.
There were other moments but those two stuck out to me.
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