Story seems good and different, quite interesting. Its way too short right now anyway.
I wonder why Emily chaged her hair and makeup before "tragedy". From a Dev perspective whats the point? And whats with the red highlights?
Renders are not the best of the industry and couldnt tell the age difference between mother and daughter.
POV affection doesnt work, maybe its cheaper, but again, silly POV faces are not wholesome.
I expected more emotion , i mean, a loved one dies and all you can see of their suffering and struggle is some subtle depressed face. I think seeking comfort on each other is basic.
Sex is ok but almost meaningless, cause its just given to you:
1 is your wife
Other one throws herself at you and the other one happens to be handling your penis and for some reason (stupid fanservice) she ends up with her shirt wet and ,of course, no bra.
2 stars for the Thriller-ish story but it needs fixing cause im not even seeing the grief. But theres potential. Lets hope for the best
I wonder why Emily chaged her hair and makeup before "tragedy". From a Dev perspective whats the point? And whats with the red highlights?
Renders are not the best of the industry and couldnt tell the age difference between mother and daughter.
POV affection doesnt work, maybe its cheaper, but again, silly POV faces are not wholesome.
I expected more emotion , i mean, a loved one dies and all you can see of their suffering and struggle is some subtle depressed face. I think seeking comfort on each other is basic.
Sex is ok but almost meaningless, cause its just given to you:
1 is your wife
Other one throws herself at you and the other one happens to be handling your penis and for some reason (stupid fanservice) she ends up with her shirt wet and ,of course, no bra.
2 stars for the Thriller-ish story but it needs fixing cause im not even seeing the grief. But theres potential. Lets hope for the best