VN Ren'Py Drunk Tales [Demo v1.0] [Clamier]

[Clamier]

Looks like AI CG to me...

Nope it`s not. Fresh art from lines to color. I will share some of it for tiers in future updates.

 

[I-Love-Adventure]

nice game thank you

 

[Clamier]

Why is there this weird aura around the characters? Looks almost like they've been cut out of images.

I tried to create “inn lighting” with this aura, so that it would feel more like the characters were indoors rather than just pictures in the background. I need to work on that some more

 

[Clamier]

i think you shoud make 8 types of body 1 fat,2 slim,4 muscle,5fit,6chuby,

I wanted to test the very idea in this demo, so I'll add more body varieties in future updates

 

[Clamier]

Interesting start of the game, now the inn has a name, nice introduktion.
What would I expect?
slightly more illustrations, the other characters at least hinted at (the son, the squire, the drinkers)

I'll be adding more illustrations gradually so that I don't go out of my update budget. That's the main reason why I didn't add Victoria's son, the squire or those drunkards. Of course, if more people subscribe to our patreon, we can increase the number of characters and art in the updates.

 

[Raanafur]

I tried to create “inn lighting” with this aura, so that it would feel more like the characters were indoors rather than just pictures in the background. I need to work on that some more

From a perspective of someone who knows jackshit about art or anything similar to it, it kinda looks too bright maybe?
Like with my original comment, it seems like the characters are cut out of images that had them depicted outside but with poorly cropped edges (mostly the first preview where this is noticeable).

 

[CypherR]

Well, I'll say I respect that the dev is seems to be here looking for feedback and constructive criticism. First release, says demo, seems short but interested so think I'll give it a try.

Anyway Thanks on the release. Good luck on the progression of this game dev.

 

[Clamier]

From a perspective of someone who knows jackshit about art or anything similar to it, it kinda looks too bright maybe?
Like with my original comment, it seems like the characters are cut out of images that had them depicted outside but with poorly cropped edges (mostly the first preview where this is noticeable).

I've already talked to the artist about it. We'll fix it.

 

[Clamier]

Well, I'll say I respect that the dev is seems to be here looking for feedback and constructive criticism. First release, says demo, seems short but interested so think I'll give it a try.

Anyway Thanks on the release. Good luck on the progression of this game dev.

Thanks, I wanted to check out the very idea, but I already have basic notes about the whole game world, so I will gradually expand the updates.

 

[Titablue]

Thank for sharing

 

[Djskayoser]

Tavern games, my favourite