VN Ren'Py Dungeon Core Master [Demo] [Artoonu]

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Adult-Only Fantasy Visual Novel featuring 3 girls, a variety of choices, comedy, and sex in an exciting story with different endings!​

Thread Updated: 2023-10-31
Release Date: 2023-10-31
Developer: Artoonu - - -
Censored: No
Version: Demo
OS: Windows, Linux
Language: English
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Dwarin

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Love the concept, do enjoy the occasional LitRPG novel with dungeon cores, but there really isn't enough here aside from the two very brief sex scenes (including earfucking? wtf? the scene looks like he just trepanned her with his cock, she isn't drooling because of orgasm but because his cock just punched a whole in the language center of her brain.) and a very brief hint at who the characters are.

The art style is good, it seems to actually be in English, and has a concept that appeals to me. Will check back but not enough in this demo to really have an informed opinion of what the actual game will be like.
 
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Ah yes, this guy.
One of those 'quantity over quality' types who pollute steam with quickly thrown together shit.
Takes decent concepts he probably found in manga, and never makes anything good with any of them.
Now i get the actual reason behind him complaining about steam banning AI art way back, even easier to mass-produce shit with AI after all. :whistle::coffee:
Meh, Its hard to find quality cyoa games like ravager.
 

artoonu

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Ah yes, this guy.
One of those 'quantity over quality' types who pollute steam with quickly thrown together shit.
Takes decent concepts he probably found in manga, and never makes anything good with any of them.
Now i get the actual reason behind him complaining about steam banning AI art way back, even easier to mass-produce shit with AI after all. :whistle::coffee:
Dev here!

Could you please elaborate on "Takes decent concepts (...) and never makes anything good with any of them."? Most feedback I get is "I fapped" or "Music too loud" so I can't even understand what to improve. I'd appreciate it.

I used to make quality SFW games, roughly one a year, sales were worse and worse with Valve changing algorithm and punishing indie devs. Someone joked "Make furry porn, sells bonkers!"... I made one for shits and giggles and well, it worked. Why I'm not making bigger games now - it's risky. I have to write a full-length novel and hope it sells enough to make up for development. I keep thinking about it, I'm slowly making bigger projects, to see what works. If this one does well, I'm considering taking a dive into a more ambitious project.
Of bigger projects, "Retired Hero Gets Slaves" was a success. Then "The Hero gives up! ... Wait, what!?" was a flop, I can only guess why, probably art style wasn't a good choice and/or I fucked up at the title and concept. That's an example of the risk I mentioned. If I knew I could make hit after hit, I'd be making longer, quality games.

As for AI - they sold ridiculously well and allowed me to make scenarios I wouldn't be able to otherwise. At least I wasn't making puzzles. Aaaaand it also ensured me my art is probably shit for most people (to those who like it - Thanks! I'm constantly trying to improve!).

Love the concept, do enjoy the occasional LitRPG novel with dungeon cores, but there really isn't enough here aside from the two very brief sex scenes (including earfucking? wtf? the scene looks like he just trepanned her with his cock, she isn't drooling because of orgasm but because his cock just punched a whole in the language center of her brain.) and a very brief hint at who the characters are.

The art style is good, it seems to actually be in English, and has a concept that appeals to me. Will check back but not enough in this demo to really have an informed opinion of what the actual game will be like.
It's a demo in the old-sense demo, just a teaser. The full version will be released on Steam soon with more content. It's classic VN formula this time - common route and then it splits into 3 endings, one for each character.
 

harem.king

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the scene looks like he just trepanned her with his cock
I laughed.
I believe you meant lobotomized.
Trepanation is cutting a hole in the skull WITHOUT cutting the brain.
although technically it is not a lobotomy either since he is not scrambling her frontal lobe
 

♍VoidTraveler

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At least I wasn't making puzzles.
Okay maybe i was a little too harsh, 'tis a bad habit to say exactly what i think which often burns.
But honestly, at this point you're not much better than those puzzle spammers on steam.
Nobody can make a hit with every work so don't even dream that you can, but at least they have the balls to try and aim for it.
You seem to have lost yours somewhere. :whistle::coffee:
By not risking and always doing the same damn thing you'll never learn anything, thus, you curb your own potential.
You will not find a magical fairy here who will tell you that magical cooking recipe which will bury you in tons of cash, create your own recipes, you're the cook after all.

Also i can't believe you think 'retired hero gets slaves' was a success, did you even read my and other people's reviews of it?
https://f95zone.to/threads/retired-hero-gets-slaves-final-artoonu.139374/br-reviews
The sole fact that you got very few reviews to begin with, implies that it's so shit that nobody even wants to bother reviewing it.

Anyways, best i can recommend right now is to play some of the famous games here and learn from them.
This will at least give you some ideas on how to improve.
For example why don't you give Ravager, mentioned by 'SomeRandom', a shot?
Thoroughly play this game and consider, think long and hard about what it is that makes it so much better than anything you've made.
I'm sure the results of this little exploration dip will be quite beneficial for you long-term.

If you still learn nothing after playing those games that are infinitely better than any of yours then... perhaps you're simply not cut out for this game devving thing. In which case maybe you should concentrate on improving your art, since you do seem to have some potential in that area. And then find work as a hired artist, drawing for games others make. Good artists are always in demand after all. :whistle::coffee:

Adios! I hope one day you'll manage to make me write a 5 star review of your game, and not only me but everyone else as well.
We'll see. :cool::coffee:
 
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SornasOrteal

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I like Artoonu's art. Maybe it's not the most technically skilled, but it's cute and charming. I can't bring myself to support anyone who uses AI art, though. Especially if the only reason they stopped is because "I'm not allowed to sell it," rather than realizing the ethical issues.
 

♍VoidTraveler

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rather than realizing the ethical issues.
Only there are no such issues.
Any artist can pick up AI, study it, and incorporate it into their workflow. (I strongly recommend this to any artist.)
If they still refuse then that is their problem, the world will simply step right over them and leave them behind.
After all, AI is here to stay. :whistle::coffee:
 
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its charming, but it has little essence to it, that is the core issue. And of the games that do have a spark deep within them, most tend to fail or their authors disappear because the project is too ambitious, leading to many half completed games with thousands of comments on f95.
 

Anonymous272929

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This art style remind me of Konosuba, especially Megumin.

Where the white part of eyes in the bottom isn't separated with black line.
 

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Dungeon Core Master
The title is huge clickbait because when I read it, I thought it was game about playing as the Dungeon
Embark on a journey to clear the Dungeon! Avoid traps, reach the center, discover ancient secrets, and try to return safely!
but instead of playing as the Dungeon like the name suggests you play as the invaders trying to raid it which is a HUGE let down.