Others Abandoned Dungeon Ravager [v0.1.6] [Adeptus Celeng]

[Trigard]

I liked, the game was quite pleasant, but it would be good as if there was a tutorial.

The project seems interesting. Well, I keep my fingers crossed and I'm going back here behind some time

If someone interests similar games, you have two here:
https://f95zone.to/threads/future-fragments-v0-49-hentaiwriter.1550/

https://f95zone.to/threads/setalia-the-demon-realm-updated-save-for-1-2.80545/

 

[ProgramRefrain]

Smooth demo OP. Movement felt good. Controls are kinda weird. I don't mind using arrow keys and space for movement, but shift and enter for attack and defend are a tad weird. I might suggest the classic Z,X,C combo for jump/attack/defend, or the option to remap. Also the enemies are impossible to escape from when on you, so maybe increase the invincibility time after being hit or have the mobs stop when they land a hit. Looking forward to more though!

 

[KingRocket]

There are naked prisoner girls where the plaver can save

Yes, i'm sure the Imperial populace will be glad that they are saved by the benevolent Drukhari, who only have these poor folks' best interest in mind.

 

[JenMistress]

Sorry for the trouble, can you please try this link instead?

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Hope this will fix the problem.

Just like the others, I too am having that same problem, even with those links as well.

 

[Scotty Boyo]

so do the robots bang ya or something? or is it a relatively clean game?

 

[Adeptus Celeng]

Smooth demo OP. Movement felt good. Controls are kinda weird. I don't mind using arrow keys and space for movement, but shift and enter for attack and defend are a tad weird. I might suggest the classic Z,X,C combo for jump/attack/defend, or the option to remap. Also the enemies are impossible to escape from when on you, so maybe increase the invincibility time after being hit or have the mobs stop when they land a hit. Looking forward to more though!

With the "shift" key for the attack, i always have the "remanent key" that appear. ^^

Well, that was an interesting control scheme...

Who puts attack on shift and defend (which is highly ineffective) on enter? At the start it confused me so much I thought this was a 'run & dodge' type, especially since both WASD and arrow keys work for movement...

Got it! I'll soon fix the control button!

 

[Adeptus Celeng]

Just like the others, I too am having that same problem, even with those links as well.

To be honest, this problem is very confusing for me because some of you can run the program just fine and some encounters this error. I've tried to download the links from 2 different PC at my home and the game works just fine (successfully installed and played) every single time.

So, I'm gonna ask my other dev friends how to solve this issue, and let me get back to you once I figure out why. would appreaciate it a lot if someone in this forum can share how to fix this as well.

Really sorry about this.

 

[Adeptus Celeng]

I liked, the game was quite pleasant, but it would be good as if there was a tutorial.

The project seems interesting. Well, I keep my fingers crossed and I'm going back here behind some time

If someone interests similar games, you have two here:
https://f95zone.to/threads/future-fragments-v0-49-hentaiwriter.1550/

https://f95zone.to/threads/setalia-the-demon-realm-updated-save-for-1-2.80545/

Noted! I'll add tutorial and prelude scenes on my next update!

 

[Adeptus Celeng]

so do the robots bang ya or something? or is it a relatively clean game?

Right now the content is short because I've just finished making the game last month. In this demo, the Drukhari will save some naked girls who are captured by the automatons because she wanna have them to become her slave.

In the next update, I'll add more Hentai scenes into it and add more enemies. I gotta be very careful in making the story context because I wanna avoid rape and such, but I still want the game to be sexy. Feel free to share your ideas and what you wanna see in this game.

 

[KOMBATzone]

good job ! a catlevania kind game

 

[MrNcode]

>Making a game involving Drukhari
>Wanting to avoid rape
I uh... I got some bad news for ya, buddy!

 

[Adeptus Celeng]

>Making a game involving Drukhari
>Wanting to avoid rape
I uh... I got some bad news for ya, buddy!

Lol! Let me just try... Hopefully I can.. haha...

 

[WirelessW]

>Dark Eldar
>Mild BDSM

Mild? If I'm playing as a Dark Eldar I better be able to do some messed up shit to people.

 

[icollectsouls]

To be honest, this problem is very confusing for me because some of you can run the program just fine and some encounters this error. I've tried to download the links from 2 different PC at my home and the game works just fine (successfully installed and played) every single time.

So, I'm gonna ask my other dev friends how to solve this issue, and let me get back to you once I figure out why. would appreaciate it a lot if someone in this forum can share how to fix this as well.

Really sorry about this.

I'm not sure what could have possibly changed, but the game just... started working for me? Went and retried the nopy download, expecting it to not work again and see if I could try and diagnose the issue from my end, but I clicked it and it just started working fine out of nowhere. I'm even able to close the game and open it again with no issue, too.
So with that being said, here's my thoughts on the demo after I've actually been able to play it!

• Control scheme is a little funky, though that's already been noted.
• Enemies can hit you a little too rapidly once they've already hit you once; more invincibility after getting hit would be nice, but I also think these flying drones with turrets should really use a projectile attack - preferably one that's simple and easy to get around. Giving Liriteh's whip attack just a liiiiittle more knockback would also be a small-but-effective change.
• Blocking feels pretty useless, especially if it doesn't do anything to push back enemies hitting you. The block could also use some "reinforcement" to the way it looks, it just doesn't "feel" good (at least for me) to only block with the arms (even if they've got gauntlets on), especially in a sci-fantasy setting. Maybe if it made some kind of shield/barrier/force-field appear? Would especially feel good to block enemy attacks like that, maybe even parry a melee attack or reflect a projectile if you timed it right.
• Understandably, this is only a demo but the lack of actual sexy stuff beyond nudity made it hard to expect what will be in the full game, even with the tags on this site giving a vague idea. The lesbian tag in particular felt like it was taunting me when Liriteh couldn't do anything with the freed girls.
• This is probably going to be a complaint very specific to me, and it's completely understandable if you ignored this; as someone who's not really into Warhammer 40k at all, I can't say having this be a fan-game set in the universe/setting/series draws me in too much. Hell, I don't even really like porn fan-games of media that I'm a fan of. I'd rather play something with an original setting/characters/concepts, even if they're not exactly "unique." That being said, in its current state, nothing in the game jumps out at me as feeling particularly reminiscent of 40k, at least from my minimal exposure to the series? Without any in-game plot it just feels like an elf (or elf-like) lady with a whip taking out robots in a fairly generic dungeon. Don't know if my interest will retain if you give the game more 40k stuff but, ehh, maybe I can just ignore it for the porn.

Found a couple little collision errors. Both can be found in this screen:

• If you jump into a semi-solid platform (like the one above, but I've found that it can happen on any of them) in such a way that you don't land on it, but the upper half of your body is above it, you can end up "sliding" along them with the character's head in a pretty humorous fashion. Only seems to happen when you move left.
• If you jump into the side of that blocky platform on the top-right and continue to hold right, you get a weird error where the character reaches the bottom and "snaps" onto the platform below.

 

[Quintilus]

Okay, what blight drone of a nurgle do in a hentai game?

Symbolism?

 

[Adeptus Celeng]

I'm not sure what could have possibly changed, but the game just... started working for me? Went and retried the nopy download, expecting it to not work again and see if I could try and diagnose the issue from my end, but I clicked it and it just started working fine out of nowhere. I'm even able to close the game and open it again with no issue, too.
So with that being said, here's my thoughts on the demo after I've actually been able to play it!

• Control scheme is a little funky, though that's already been noted.
• Enemies can hit you a little too rapidly once they've already hit you once; more invincibility after getting hit would be nice, but I also think these flying drones with turrets should really use a projectile attack - preferably one that's simple and easy to get around. Giving Liriteh's whip attack just a liiiiittle more knockback would also be a small-but-effective change.
• Blocking feels pretty useless, especially if it doesn't do anything to push back enemies hitting you. The block could also use some "reinforcement" to the way it looks, it just doesn't "feel" good (at least for me) to only block with the arms (even if they've got gauntlets on), especially in a sci-fantasy setting. Maybe if it made some kind of shield/barrier/force-field appear? Would especially feel good to block enemy attacks like that, maybe even parry a melee attack or reflect a projectile if you timed it right.
• Understandably, this is only a demo but the lack of actual sexy stuff beyond nudity made it hard to expect what will be in the full game, even with the tags on this site giving a vague idea. The lesbian tag in particular felt like it was taunting me when Liriteh couldn't do anything with the freed girls.
• This is probably going to be a complaint very specific to me, and it's completely understandable if you ignored this; as someone who's not really into Warhammer 40k at all, I can't say having this be a fan-game set in the universe/setting/series draws me in too much. Hell, I don't even really like porn fan-games of media that I'm a fan of. I'd rather play something with an original setting/characters/concepts, even if they're not exactly "unique." That being said, in its current state, nothing in the game jumps out at me as feeling particularly reminiscent of 40k, at least from my minimal exposure to the series? Without any in-game plot it just feels like an elf (or elf-like) lady with a whip taking out robots in a fairly generic dungeon. Don't know if my interest will retain if you give the game more 40k stuff but, ehh, maybe I can just ignore it for the porn.

Found a couple little collision errors. Both can be found in this screen:
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• If you jump into a semi-solid platform (like the one above, but I've found that it can happen on any of them) in such a way that you don't land on it, but the upper half of your body is above it, you can end up "sliding" along them with the character's head in a pretty humorous fashion. Only seems to happen when you move left.
• If you jump into the side of that blocky platform on the top-right and continue to hold right, you get a weird error where the character reaches the bottom and "snaps" onto the platform below.

Thank you for your comments and feedbacks, these will help me improve the game demo in the next couple of weeks
things that I can promise you are:

• A better key mapping for the Movements and Interactions
• More Lewd materials for the demo (cutscenes and ingame interactions)
• A more balanced fighting/combat (blocking, hitting & evading the drones)

My goal is to have at least an updated playable prototype demo every month where I add more contents and fix some glitches and errors.

 

[JewishOven420YoloSwag]

My thoughts on this demo:

The combat needs some work. Enemies shouldn't have I-frames, period. This is because the player has a cooldown on how often they can attack. You can't just mash the button and the character will attack as fast as you can mash. Which is good.

But enemies have I-frames, and the window for those frames is actually longer than the cooldown on the player's attack. So even if you were a perfect player and attacked as soon as the cooldown was released, you'd miss, because the enemy is still invincible. Which is bad.

Enemies appear to be able to respawn, which is strange for a platformer, especially because enemies don't have a leash range, and can chase you down to the ends of the earth. Having both of these mechanics together is bad for obvious reasons. Pick one or the other.

The tags on this game confuse me. There's no BDSM in this game, as far as I can tell. I'm pretty sure I got to the end of the stage and I just found a brick wall. There are no animations involving the women you rescue, or the character. You could make the argument that the women you rescue are tied up, but that's not BDSM, that's just bondage.

It might seem like I'm bashing the game, but I'm not. With a bit of polish and some actual content, it would be on par with a game like Future Fragments in my opinion. The groundwork is there, now you just gotta build it up.

 

[Adeptus Celeng]

My thoughts on this demo:

The combat needs some work. Enemies shouldn't have I-frames, period. This is because the player has a cooldown on how often they can attack. You can't just mash the button and the character will attack as fast as you can mash. Which is good.

But enemies have I-frames, and the window for those frames is actually longer than the cooldown on the player's attack. So even if you were a perfect player and attacked as soon as the cooldown was released, you'd miss, because the enemy is still invincible. Which is bad.

Enemies appear to be able to respawn, which is strange for a platformer, especially because enemies don't have a leash range, and can chase you down to the ends of the earth. Having both of these mechanics together is bad for obvious reasons. Pick one or the other.

The tags on this game confuse me. There's no BDSM in this game, as far as I can tell. I'm pretty sure I got to the end of the stage and I just found a brick wall. There are no animations involving the women you rescue, or the character. You could make the argument that the women you rescue are tied up, but that's not BDSM, that's just bondage.

It might seem like I'm bashing the game, but I'm not. With a bit of polish and some actual content, it would be on par with a game like Future Fragments in my opinion. The groundwork is there, now you just gotta build it up.

Yes, we still need to balance the combat mechanics (the Invincibility frame issue for instance)
Also BDSM content will be added AS SOON AS POSSIBLE, we are still working on the art assets XD...

 

[SAM s-300]

Hope did you not get sticky keys popping up when you test it yourself?

 

[Sasha SHS]

How to save next to naked women and are there any erotic scenes?