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Didn't do much this week, aside from this character, there would be 1 more character
This one is the boss of floor 4.
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I finished all 3 stat CGs, I didn't work on the game as much, working on my commissions at the moment.
the picture I made, this one actually has 5 times the resolution... of the game resolution.
It lost a lot of details but I guess I can just pack it in artbook later.
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Originally I had this as a floor but then I find that this is a bit too broken for her place[But it does tell something about her]
 

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Making variants of face for mermage after putting the dialogues in the game in chapter 2.
Also sprite for the snake girl.
I'm still busy making fanart to get exposure so maybe I can get more supporter/commissioner
 

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I wrote more of the script and have my editor putting dialogues in the game[implementing].
I finished the main quests script for the chapter 3, 2 more main chapters and a lot of side quests later.
ATM it's 90k+ words, I bet a lot of people are going to skip a lot of dialogues.
Here are some pictures that I made this week.
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Develop note [4/20/2025]
Mage form
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Implemented
Events in the game for Chapter 2
Finished the writing on Chapter 3[not yet in the game]

Had been some busy weeks on commissions and fan arts[for exposure]
as it has nothing to do with the game, I will drop the link of my twitter here.


I also read something after I took 3 days break, got to learn some color theory here and there.
experiment on things and now the mage is the result of that. Hope you like my new color technique.
 
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I'm posting this in case that I wouldn't be able to post anything here again.
I have blood infection from failed dentist operation and I'm going in and out of hospital lately.
If I don't post anything for 2 months, you can assume that I die.
As I don't have money to get any proper treatment.
World is unfair and yeah, whatever, it is what it is.
I hope I survive but not many people did from sepsis.
 
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I'm posting this in case that I wouldn't be able to post anything here again.
I have blood infection from failed dentist operation and I'm going in and out of hospital lately.
If I don't post anything for 2 months, you can assume that I die.
As I don't have money to get any proper treatment.
World is unfair and yeah, whatever, it is what it is.
I hope I survive but not many people did from sepsis.
Everything's gonna be alright brother
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Get well soon(y)
 

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As my editor[text] said that this is creepy.
I think the hand is too extreme...
I will have to redesign her.
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I redesigned her pose a bit, I probably drew her hands too big. this time I would even put most of her hands in the boob.
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Still didn't like it so I made another angle.
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It's quite hard to write things for people without telling them exactly what's happening.
My editor kept saying I should always treat player as a retard that can't make conclusion for themselves...
I have to state everything that's happening and this make the writing even slower.
 

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I'm going to cool down my head before I went for the gun and end it all.
- I don't have stable income
- I don't have time
- I can't even focus
I have to work on my own commission to get money to go by
I have to work on my own exposure, that's another day go by
and making game?
I have to write, making CG and then putting hours in to the game making event, map, variable and all the damn things I have to remember putting in the game after weeks of not in RPGmaker. has to spend 3 days until I remember where I put the damn thing in the game and go back to my commission to make money to go by.
 

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It's quite hard to write things for people without telling them exactly what's happening.
My editor kept saying I should always treat player as a retard that can't make conclusion for themselves...
I have to state everything that's happening and this make the writing even slower.
Let me tell you, there are players will all kinds of intellect. But more importantly, there are players will all kinds of attention levels. Although porn games tend to distract people from thinking too deeply, so you shouldn't expect too much attention from players. Depending on the game, it's fine if the players don't understand some things, but please reserve it for stuff that is supposed to be tricky to understand, like relationship nuance or workings of a stardrive.

As for writing, I recommend not trying to get it right for the first time. Write at speed that you're comfortable with, get to the end or some major point, and then re-read what you wrote, and see what can be improved. At least, that's what professional writers on Quora recommend, and it seems like a good idea for me.

Also, I'd like to say that I'm glad you're still alive and that infection did not take you. Maybe you should take it easy for a while, and remember why you started making this game in the first place.
 

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Let me tell you, there are players will all kinds of intellect. But more importantly, there are players will all kinds of attention levels. Although porn games tend to distract people from thinking too deeply, so you shouldn't expect too much attention from players. Depending on the game, it's fine if the players don't understand some things, but please reserve it for stuff that is supposed to be tricky to understand, like relationship nuance or workings of a stardrive.

As for writing, I recommend not trying to get it right for the first time. Write at speed that you're comfortable with, get to the end or some major point, and then re-read what you wrote, and see what can be improved. At least, that's what professional writers on Quora recommend, and it seems like a good idea for me.

Also, I'd like to say that I'm glad you're still alive and that infection did not take you. Maybe you should take it easy for a while, and remember why you started making this game in the first place.
The editor quit.