RPGM Duskthrone: The Forsaken Realm [v0.02] [SuckylittleD]

[Febui]

bro wrote a whole essay wtf

The only good reason to post early development builds of a game is to get feedback. But I can condense the funnier parts for you:
The premier good-girl type, Elira, when experiencing sex for the first time, pisses all over the player, then says "Hehe! The look on your face when I started peeing on you! Priceless." as the "acrid odor of urine" soaks into the sheets.
You find a young boy man pear creature that has been groomed and molested by his aunt and then, even if you're a usually paragon guy, tell him that he's only good for sex, he's not a real man, and that he was asking for it by having such a cute ass. And that you bet he'll enjoy being a cocksleeve and that you'll show him what a boy like him is made for. And he loves it and you fuck. It's so fucked up, I love it.

 

[Belphegor007]

There is a weird bug where sometimes the sex animations don't play and only text appear. Closing out and restarting the game fixes it though.

 

[Thanna]

There is a weird bug where sometimes the sex animations don't play and only text appear. Closing out and restarting the game fixes it though.

Bro i have Restarted the game and start as Admin and it Works fine! Try it! I hope it works when noti have a second path how it can Work! With MTool and Translate with Bing!

 

[starrail123]

Great game so far! A little work on the Gallery and maybe cumming scenes would be nice but so far the story is pretty cute to follow and I like everyone distinct personality. Good job!(Nvm there are a few cumming scenes)

 

[Raoddik]

Intro is still too heavy on combat while combat is at its most boring.

Yea, it's, honestly I find combat boring in most rpg makers games, but thankfully you can turn off battle animation, set speed to fastest and turn auto battle on and you will not lose at all.

I was getting ready to also post my take but this one sums it pretty well. For me the biggest problem still is how fast character development happens. Also Harry model seems to be lack some things in some animations. (it's female model in most isn't it? That's why he is naked in sprite but have pants in animations?)

Still like the theme and overall concept, it have potential but need a lot of work.

 

[Febui]

For me the biggest problem still is how fast character development happens.

It's a really big problem in older AI language models, they like to dip into summary and gloss over huge swaths of story. In version 0.01, I though it was just a placeholder to be like "I think I can make something, here are the broad strokes of what I'm doing" and then Sucky would go back in and actually expound on what happens during a reconstructing the town arc, rather than moving right away into something new.
And the sex scenes are all bad AI slop that invents beds that aren't there and so on.

To then make v0.02 do the exact same thing all over again and timeskip the entire story is really silly.
I could imagine Sucky rewriting the first arc to still be mostly glossed over but twice as long, and rather than much character progression, people have just come around to think he's really important and going to make a difference without having gotten quite too personal yet because he is initially closed off. Then you can get into character development slowly while still having the timeskip and sacrifice nothing.
Could even lean a bit into him being closed off and Elira having a crush but not having been able to get close, making room for a lot of the NTR potential I laid out in both my critiques.
There's bones to this.
But AI is really bad at planning and characterization. Awful at characterization. Sucky has to pull away from leaning so hard on AI to write characters or it'll keep being undeveloped and inconsistent.