VN Ren'Py Echoes of Deceit [Ch. 6] [RumTechFeel]

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RumTechFeel

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I just played this game so I decided to give my feedback.
The game seems promising and I am anxious for the next version. But please don’t ruin it by making the game go through mind control, humiliation of the husband or making the wife like a total bitch who fucks everyone easily.
I think that slow corruption of the wife by a handsome and womanizing guy is what makes you want to play it, especially when the husband finds out the true step by step, without enjoying being cheated.
That’s my opinion.
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Hi, thanks for playing, one thing I can say for sure is that there will be no mind control or QOS stuff. The wife will have a big part in the story but I will also focus on other developments. My goal is to tell a story that is at least roughly comprehensible. Currently, I am working on Chapter 2 so stay tuned.
 

DanteJaeger

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Hi, thanks for playing, one thing I can say for sure is that there will be no mind control or QOS stuff. The wife will have a big part in the story but I will also focus on other developments. My goal is to tell a story that is at least roughly comprehensible. Currently, I am working on Chapter 2 so stay tuned.
I was going to say exactly the same thing. My advice to you is to continue like this, because devs who turn their games into meaningless cuckold/BBC end up not being able to finish their games.

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All of them nhentai. I think you will be more successful if you follow this route but if you don't believe me just play a few of ntr games on this site you'll understand. Good luck. By the way when wife says appa.. party good job that one. That's why i recommended some hentai to look up.
 
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DanteJaeger

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I believe that Hentai porn with their line of thought does not align with the mass of Western players, the two mentalities on understanding a relationship are completely opposite. but this is my little thought, true, I criticized the first chapter, but not because I'm bad, but because starting with a game where everything is almost written, or at least it seems, takes away the pleasure of continuing. But I'm always happy if DEV proves me wrong with the next updates
I think just the opposite. Corruption of the spouse is already present in almost every game. Right at the beginning of the game, his wife is corrupt and the husband does not know this. That is unique. I think netorare games are misunderstood. In my opinion, there should definitely be a male character. Suspicion/oblivious husband must. You have to discover little by little. Western devs often do not understand the cuckold and netorare genres. I don't wanna give other game names out of respect to the dev, but there are not five good netorare games in total on the site. Example for this new trend telephone games. Each of them was almost a carbon copy of each other and eventually they all became cuckold game. In my opinion dev has made a good start, we will see how long he/she can maintain the suspicion/oblivious/excitement.
 

DanteJaeger

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I respect your opinion, but you see, the terms NTR or NTS are still used, I prefer instead to have the definition of what the game represents, we're talking about porn games, betrayals or whatever, but as you yourself said, there are by now myriads of carbon copies, but the point is not whether the wife is already a slut at the beginning, or will become one, what defines the different way, it is how MC's character is created, this is the center of the game, it is not easy to create, as mentioned, the masses copied and pasted with standard models, all Mc idiots, that's the point, we must not focus the plot on the wife, but on MC and his way of interacting in the game. I may be wrong, but for me, the real point is to create a convincing MC, not a super man, a man with strengths and weaknesses, not a super idiot, where the wife fucks with someone, Mc is behind the door, listens to noises etc. but instead of finding out things, he turns and runs away.
You are absolutely right in what you say. I think we have a difference of opinion with you here.
1.I think the husband should not realize until the end that his wife is cheating on him
2.That his wife is cheating on him, but he should secretly like it and not tell his wife about it. So the wife should not know that the husband knows that he is cheating.

The dev also prepared the infrastructure for this. After the phone call, it offers 2 options. In one of them, he doesn't believe that his wife is cheating, in the other, he goes and checks the office but doesn't say anything to his wife. He has conflict inside but secretly enjoys it. But I totally agree with you that he shouldn't end up being a loser. Husband must always in control.
 
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robrize2169

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damn another cheating whore of a wife game. it's obvious she's cheating. she is gaslighting him and blaming him for losing his job when he was fucked over by his employer. now she is off on a trip with the guy she is fucking and covers it by gaslighting him and telling him she won't be home for a few days. perfect time for the mc to change the locks and start the divorce process and put her out on the streets where she belongs. and start banging all the women he knows and after the divorce is final, then send her the vids of him getting over her.
and i do hope that the mc gets to fuck his wife's sister too.
 
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cnwjr

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Game has potential. However, for me, the bad engrish makes it nearly impossible to stomach.
 

demidemon

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I was going to say exactly the same thing. My advice to you is to continue like this, because devs who turn their games into meaningless cuckold/BBC end up not being able to finish their games.

1. 487137
2. 386050
3. 335641

All of them nhentai. I think you will be more successful if you follow this route but if you don't believe me just play a few of ntr games on this site you'll understand. Good luck. By the way when wife says appa.. party good job that one. That's why i recommended some hentai to look up.
I honestly think its quite disrespectful to tell an author what kind of story he should write. Even if you are doing this for a good cause, its better to just let the dev tell the story they wanted to tell.

You can give feedback like why you like or hate certain scenes in the game but its best not to suggest a very detailed plot unless the dev asks for ideas.
 

desmosome

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Hey, can you please address the rollback issue? When you roll back during texting, it rolls back the whole thing.
 

RumTechFeel

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Hey, can you please address the rollback issue? When you roll back during texting, it rolls back the whole thing.
Hi, thanks for your input.
I am aware of the problem but have not yet found a suitable solution. I will try to solve the problem in the next updates.
Bye, RTF
 

RumTechFeel

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The new update will be live today, I hope you enjoy it.
If you find some bugs please keep me posted.
The next update should be available around the 29. Oktober (public acess later)
Cheers, RTF
 

TFurguson69

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This is not an interactive game. It is a novel. And should have that tag. There was maybe 5 questions.
 
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