This novel is good. I like how the plot slowly flows, the very short scenes at first were off putting but then I got used to them and found them beneficial for the storyline and I like the pace everything is having.
My only problem and BIG problem is how little cared the part of the script when it comes to character dialogs are polished. 'Time is of the essence' is a phrase overly abused by many characters and it's not something people usually use when talking.... Put care and nuance in dialog, dialog express a lot about a character they can't all speak the same nor use the same prebaked phrases all the time.