His face doesn't match up with the body. The baby face is kinda off-puttingThese two
seem to have a similarly retarded face.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
No incest tag, though?
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Alright dev, the premise is good - but you REALLY should rework the MCs face. He looks like a retard in every single scene.
If hes supposed to be a fighter whos taken a lot of hits, he should have heavier features, like a brick jaw, heavy brow ridges, heavy cheekbones, and a wide/crooked nose. Maybe some couiflower ears, but that might be hard to animate.
Right now he looks like a retarded child in a mans body - at least give him a beard to cover up his soft goofy face.
Also, make his eyes smaller - they are way too large, like an anime characters.
If hes supposed to be a fighter whos taken a lot of hits, he should have heavier features, like a brick jaw, heavy brow ridges, heavy cheekbones, and a wide/crooked nose. Maybe some couiflower ears, but that might be hard to animate.
Right now he looks like a retarded child in a mans body - at least give him a beard to cover up his soft goofy face.
Also, make his eyes smaller - they are way too large, like an anime characters.
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Is this by any chance inspired in Kemono Michi? Better yet, will we have the possibility of suplexing the shit out of the kingdom?
C'mon guys, no need to be mean just because MC has an extra chromosome.
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Thank you all for your feedback! It immensely helps in shaping the game to be more enjoyable for you, the player.
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So it's a prologue so there isn't a lot of feedback I can give, given the length of it. The premise is straight forward, it's an like an isekai but not in the traditional format as the MC and sister are both alive, but in another realm so I like the unique take on it. I didn't notice any grammatical errors on the first run, the renders are nice, there wasn't any choices so who knows how impactful decision making will be, and the realm you go too looks interesting along with the mystery around the sister.
As for the cons, the major one is how the MC looks, I get he is a fighter, but all the veins makes him look roided out and weird, and the face needs work. I can't take the roided man with what looks like lip filters seriously, at all. Also knowing what the planned tags are would be nice to know, I assume harem given whats in the spoiler
As for the cons, the major one is how the MC looks, I get he is a fighter, but all the veins makes him look roided out and weird, and the face needs work. I can't take the roided man with what looks like lip filters seriously, at all. Also knowing what the planned tags are would be nice to know, I assume harem given whats in the spoiler
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