Pretty good, dystopia, scifi, superpowers, hot chicks, interesting worldbuilding and story. So far so good, just wish it had lasted longer.
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Like many, I've also enjoyed the start and can't wait for the next update. The only thing I would like to point out, the delay between reading the text seems a bit short. I know there is a text speed slider, but on all AVNs I play I put it on instant, I can't stand the typing, and there always enough time to read it completely. However, in this case I can barely read 2 lines before it transitions to the next dialog/text.
Does the game will have a lot of choices and does the choices will matter for the game or its a linear path? How many girls the game will have? how many chapters will the game have?
SpyderArachnid
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I mean, it makes sense. He's only heard bad things about psions and that's it. Then, the item he is working on to save his dad, and the money he has been saving to pay for his dad's treatment, all get stolen by two psions. All while she literally mind-fucked him, while they robbed him blind. Makes it worse that he was just trying to help her out of the kindness of his heart, and she turned and did that to him.
So yeah, he has some pretty deep seeded hatred for psions at the moment. lol
Wolfram99
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Im fine with MC's hatred, what is weird that the two randos he met take it with such stride whatever he is spewing.
SpyderArachnid
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Well Onessa saw his mind and felt his feelings, so she knows how he feels and what happened to him. She understands his hatred at the moment. But she didn't just bend over and take it. When they were in the car, she went off on him about what her life was like, to give the MC some perspective.
And Anya, she is just along for the ride to see how this plot thickens lol.
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If the situation was where the MC and psionic girl were equal then it would be fine, like if they were just talking on the bench, but in this instance the girls were doing a massive favor to the MC in getting him to a place where he can get help.
SpyderArachnid
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Yeah, I get that, but the MC is in a bad place right now. Yeah, they are doing him a huge favor by taking him to this place, but the MC is still livid about what literally just happened a few minutes ago.
That's his life's work that was stolen. That's all his money gone. That was all being used to save his father's life. Now he has no money to pay for his father's treatment and the thing that was going to save him, is gone as well. If he can't get that back, his father could die. Time is the MC's enemy at the moment, and he is freaking out and not in the best state of mind.
So, I understand him for being snappy, regardless of the fact that they are willing to help him out. MC is in full panic mode.