VN Ren'Py Ecstasy's Eclipse v.0.0.1 Public Demo by Yz (Android & PC)

[yz.vn_]

So you have choices in sexual encounters but the story is basically just a KN? I don't know what kind of feedback you expect to get from this demo. There is nothing to demo other than a random optional scene. Everyone already seems like a perv as well. Nothing wrong with that I guess, most people will drool over it. From what I've seen it just looks like yet another mindless fuck fest. There are also no choices during that scene.

Those pauses don't do anything but make the player click way more times than they need to. If you are going to put like ten images in a row that need to be manually clicked past it would probably be better to just use a pause(number). There also seem to be a lot of descriptive text. I don't need to be told that the girl is starting to do something lewd to the MC. I'm looking right at it.

Fair criticism from an outside perspective. But since I've uploaded that demo, a lot of things had been taken into consideration and changed. What you saw will be very different from the final output I assure you.

That sex scene on the demo was supposedly a "dream sequence" before the game starts but obviously I'll be removing that. I've posted it on my other dev updates that I'll lock that scene and will only be accessible through a cheat code once the game officially debuts.

About the descriptive texts. I do admit that it may still need some working to be done with because I've noticed that I can't settle with first person or third person dialogues. So there's that. But if you don't like descriptive texts, that may be your personal preference though.

I'm still experimenting at the time and I'll still be experimenting up until the very end. See what works and what doesn't. Anyways thanks for the feedback. I appreciate the engagement.

 

[Skeltom]

Fair criticism from an outside perspective. But since I've uploaded that demo, a lot of things had been taken into consideration and changed. What you saw will be very different from the final output I assure you.

That sex scene on the demo was supposedly a "dream sequence" before the game starts but obviously I'll be removing that. I've posted it on my other dev updates that I'll lock that scene and will only be accessible through a cheat code once the game officially debuts.

About the descriptive texts. I do admit that it may still need some working to be done with because I've noticed that I can't settle with first person or third person dialogues. So there's that. But if you don't like descriptive texts, that may be your personal preference though.

I'm still experimenting at the time and I'll still be experimenting up until the very end. See what works and what doesn't. Anyways thanks for the feedback. I appreciate the engagement.

Yeah, it is a pet peeve of mine. I'm a pretty firm believer in "show don't tell", these are "Visual" Novels but a lot of devs seem to forget that and only use half of the medium. I can't speak for anyone else but the draw for me with insest is that they/her are reluctant and then eventually give in over time. Otherwise she just feels like any other NPC.

 

[yz.vn_]

Yeah, it is a pet peeve of mine. I'm a pretty firm believer in "show don't tell"

I agree, I try my best to attempt to do that. I'll keep track of it once I start writing again.

I can't speak for anyone else but the draw for me with insest is that they/her are reluctant and then eventually give in over time.

Ahh so you like games where you have to grind the relationship out before having any real intercourse with the Mom or Sister?

Sounds fair. I actually haven't given this a lot of thought. My main focus are the 3 main girls Sabrina, Jasmine, and Clara

I'm gonna spoil a little bit here but for the first few chapters, I'll be focusing on the corruption of the main character, everything else plays out normally. There will be some scenes where there will be a weird sexual tension between the MC and his family but he doesn't acknowledge it much. Up until he changes. Then the side-stories can play out.

Like for example, this one I'm already planning to write as soon as I finish Chapter 1. Where the MC and the sister plays video games and bets all the time where it starts innocently at first up until the MC gets devious and "claims" the sister's breasts as his own because she lost the bet. And then when breakfast comes, the MC planned to pretend that he's craving milk and asks the mom to serve him some. Then proceeds to suck his sister's breasts under the table while she pleads him to stop because it feels weird.

Anyway that's just what my thoughts are on the matter. It's a different trope for the mother though.

 

[Skeltom]

Ahh so you like games where you have to grind the relationship out before having any real intercourse with the Mom or Sister?

I'm not sure grind is the right word. I like build up, if you can just jump into anyone's pants from the get go it bores me. I'd just watch porn if all I wanted was a quick fap.

Going by your approach to the scene with the sister I'm thinking this one is not for me. Not only does it sound non-optional it also feels like a pretty forced kink. Also pretty rapey if I'm being honest. Maybe I'm just not following your train of thought.

 

[yz.vn_]

I'm not sure grind is the right word. I like build up, if you can just jump into anyone's pants from the get go it bores me. I'd just watch porn if all I wanted was a quick fap.

Going by your approach to the scene with the sister I'm thinking this one is not for me. Not only does it sound non-optional it also feels like a pretty forced kink. Also pretty rapey if I'm being honest. Maybe I'm just not following your train of thought.

Well it's not really forced. Obviously saying it here by word won't be enough to justify the scene I came up with. It lacks the build up leading to why it happened. It's not like it's gonna happen out of nowhere. But if you feel like you don't like what I'm making then sure, I respect that.

Also about build up, yeah I understand the appeal. If my game was centered about incest I would take my time and develop the dynamic more. But now you gave me a food for thought. I was actually thinking about making the content focus on the little sister for the first update but now I'm probably gonna try and "build it up" more before that. It really depends on how I feel like things should go by on my story though.

Anyways, there's that. I won't convince anyone to like what I'd write, we all have our preferences. It just happens that if you don't like what I'm making then someone else will so I'm not really complaining.

 

[yz.vn_]

You know what fine, you actually gave me a brilliant idea x)

Not sure why it never crossed my mind before but sure. I'll make the sister and the mother a love interest. Initially I was only thinking of it as a familial bond with incest but now you've convinced me. I think it'd be much sweeter that way.

 

[Skeltom]

You know what fine, you actually gave me a brilliant idea x)

Not sure why it never crossed my mind before but sure. I'll make the sister and the mother a love interest. Initially I was only thinking of it as a familial bond with incest but now you've convinced me. I think it'd be much sweeter that way.

So they were never meant to be LIs but there was still going to be incest? I can't say I understand that at all. Was it just to fill out a kink or what? Just some side piece that happens to be related?

 

[yz.vn_]

I can't say I understand that at all. Was it just to fill out a kink or what? Just some side piece that happens to be related?

Well the area they're living in is laced with a powerful sex drug that brings out the intimate desires of a person vulnerably. They will feel some sexual tension around each other because of some silly little accidents until those accidents become intentional and they've come to desire physical contact more than ever.

For the sister, she's morbidly curious about the sexual stuff but she doesn't fully engage with it although she's been naughty a couple of times by spying on her brother. They're very close don't get me wrong. They're practically bestfriends. But of course she wouldn't wanna just let him suck on her breasts because it's her first time even though it feels really good. Not with their mother around anyways.

Also they don't have to be a romantic partner to have "fun" you know?

 

[Skeltom]

Well the area they're living in is laced with a powerful sex drug that brings out the intimate desires of a person vulnerably. They will feel some sexual tension around each other because of some silly little accidents until those accidents become intentional and they've come to desire physical contact more than ever.

For the sister, she's morbidly curious about the sexual stuff but she doesn't fully engage with it although she's been naughty a couple of times by spying on her brother. They're very close don't get me wrong. They're practically bestfriends. But of course she wouldn't wanna just let him suck on her breasts because it's her first time even though it feels really good.

Also they don't have to be a romantic partner to have "fun" you know?

So does the game actually have LIs or were they all planned like that? On that topic, are there any romance paths planed or is it just going to be a "How often can I get my dick wet and with who?" situation? If that's what you are going for then fine, but it would feel very shallow to me personally. The sex drug thing kinda feels like a blunt instrument to justify anything sexual that happens to. They want to do it "just because".

True they don't have to be a romantic partner to do the deed but like I said it would make them just some side character to add to the kink list. You can sleep with your family, full stop.

 

[yz.vn_]

So does the game actually have LIs or were they all planned like that? On that topic, are there any romance paths planed or is it just going to be a "How often can I get my dick wet and with who?" situation? If that's what you are going for then fine, but it would feel very shallow to me personally. The sex drug thing kinda feels like a blunt instrument to justify anything sexual that happens to. They want to do it "just because".

So there's a total of 9 initial girls from when I first started the development of this game. I've broken it down, obviously I can make them all a romantic interest but I chose not to because I don't want this to become another game where you just take in everyone and everything under your wing. Some will remain as close friends with benefits.

3 of these girls will become MAJOR love interests. Which means they're wife material. With the mom and sis being an exception because they'd be higher than that. The rest will become lovers.

It would take me ages to explain everything so here's the short and straight forward answer. Yes there will be romance for every female character, it depends on the dynamic. There will also be drama ahead so being with them has its own hurdles. Eventually you will get to spend enough time with these characters and consider it a date. Simple as that. You get your dick wet if they want it or they're pleased.

Anyways if you're still feeling like you really don't like what this is just mute the thread bro

I had to go in-depth just to explain to you, I mean in the end of the day it shouldn't and never will be that deep. Just enjoy it or leave it be. Have a nice day.

 

[Skeltom]

So there's a total of 9 initial girls from when I first started the development of this game. I've broken it down, obviously I can make them all a romantic interest but I chose not to because I don't want this to become another game where you just take in everyone and everything under your wing. Some will remain as close friends with benefits.

3 of these girls will become MAJOR love interests. Which means they're wife material. With the mom and sis being an exception because they'd be higher than that. The rest will become lovers.

It would take me ages to explain everything so here's the short and straight forward answer. Yes there will be romance for every female character, it depends on the dynamic. There will also be drama ahead so being with them has its own hurdles. Eventually you will get to spend enough time with these characters and consider it a date. Simple as that. You get your dick wet if they want it or they're pleased.

Anyways if you're still feeling like you really don't like what this is just mute the thread bro

I had to go in-depth just to explain to you, I mean in the end of the day it shouldn't and never will be that deep. Just enjoy it or leave it be. Have a nice day.

Fair enough. Keep in mind though that you made the thread asking for feedback. You're inviting people to ask questions and give opinions what did you expect would happen?

 

[yz.vn_]

Fair enough. Keep in mind though that you made the thread asking for feedback. You're inviting people to ask questions and give opinions what did you expect would happen?

This isn't feedback anymore. No one engages with a conversation nitpicking every minor detail about a porn game being developed. I've responded to your questions fair and square and there's no reason to continue engaging with the conversation when you made it clear that this game is not for you.

Like I said, I'm not forcing anyone or to convince them to like my game. You do you. If you think my game is shallow then just play other games that feel otherwise. My results will dictate my success and I can't be convinced otherwise.

Now would you be so kind to mute the thread because I want people to see my updates instead of this pointless talking. I'm not gonna conform to every single nitpick because you feel like the game is not good enough, feels shallow because of the drugs.

I mean, what do you expect, it's a corruption game lol. It's definitely more logical than a demon incarnate making your character wanna bang everything with a hole.

 

[Skeltom]

This isn't feedback anymore. No one engages with a conversation nitpicking every minor detail about a porn game being developed. I've responded to your questions fair and square and there's no reason to continue engaging with the conversation when you made it clear that this game is not for you.

Like I said, I'm not forcing anyone or to convince them to like my game. You do you. If you think my game is shallow then just play other games that feel otherwise. My results will dictate my success and I can't be convinced otherwise.

Now would you be so kind to mute the thread because I want people to see my updates instead of this pointless talking. I'm not gonna conform to every single nitpick because you feel like the game is not good enough, feels shallow because of the drugs.

I mean, what do you expect, it's a corruption game lol. It's definitely more logical than a demon incarnate making your character wanna bang everything with a damn hole.

Real mature. You can carry on a conversation as long as it's going to be good for the game but if it's anything else you get offended over personal opinions. News flash, not everyone is going to be head over heels for your game. You should accept that.

 

[yz.vn_]

Real mature. You can carry on a conversation as long as it's going to be good for the game but if it's anything else you get offended over personal opinions. News flash, not everyone is going to be head over heels for your game. You should accept that.

Look buddy, I came here knowing all that. I'm not offended but I'm more annoyed by the fact that you're judging a game you haven't really played yet and but keep on complaining about it without providing any real solution whatsoever.

But fine, sure I lost my cool there. Just mute the thread, I think we're done here.

 

[yz.vn_]

Ecstasy's Eclipse Character Teasers DEV UPDATE 04.18.24

Meet the girls!
~

SABRINA THORNE
An eccentric girl and one of the University's scholars!
She's recently transferred to your classroom because of an undisclosed event.


JASMINE FINCH
Trendy despite being sporty~
She loves Kpop, Anime, and Sports while also being one of the University's elite! Talk about brain and brawns.


???
There's not much detail to be disclosed in this character right now.
Please wait for the future updates~


LYRA ASHCROFT
Despite giving birth at the young age of 19, she's been an excellent single parent.
She's a smart and secure woman that chose to pursue having a family by herself without dating any man on her entire life.


IRIEL ASHCROFT
The cutest and most adored girl in EE~
Iriel is your sister and your best friend. She's the sweetest cinnamon roll and loves spending time with you a lot <3


SOFIA FINCH
Quite possibly the naughtiest little minx
She will do anything to get what she wants. And what she wants is right in front of her.


RUE RIOT
Another one of the University's elite students~
She may not look like friendly but wait until you get to know her personally


ELAINE ROSÉNOVA
Top 1 student of the whole town!
She's always serious and cold but there's probably some secrets she's keeping to herself


AELLA THORNE
Sabrina's Aunt and the principal of the University!
Rumors say that she's just as crazy if not 10 times crazier than her niece!


OPHELIA BLACKHART
Cold as Ice!
There's currently no disclosed information about her, please look forward to the future updates!
​

~
DEV NOTE
For now, these are the current love interests you will be able to meet in the game!
I hope you're just as excited as I am.

There's a few more characters I haven't introduced in this post. NPCs and side characters that will all play a part on the story!

.
Stay tuned for more development updates!

 

[Mountain Guy]

Ecstasy's Eclipse Character Teasers DEV UPDATE 04.18.23

Meet the girls!
~

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SABRINA THORNE
An eccentric girl and one of the University's scholars!
She's recently transferred to your classroom because of an undisclosed event.

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JASMINE FINCH
Trendy despite being sporty~
She loves Kpop, Anime, and Sports while also being one of the University's elite! Talk about brain and brawns.

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???
There's not much detail to be disclosed in this character right now.
Please wait for the future updates~

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LYRA ASHCROFT
Despite giving birth at the young age of 19, she's been an excellent single parent.
She's a smart and secure woman that chose to pursue having a family by herself without dating any man on her entire life.

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IRIEL ASHCROFT
The cutest and most adored girl in EE~
Iriel is your sister and your best friend. She's the sweetest cinnamon roll and loves spending time with you a lot <3

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SOFIA FINCH
Quite possibly the naughtiest little minx
She will do anything to get what she wants. And what she wants is right in front of her.

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RUE RIOT
Another one of the University's elite students~
She may not look like friendly but wait until you get to know her personally

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ELAINE ROSÉNOVA
Top 1 student of the whole town!
She's always serious and cold but there's probably some secrets she's keeping to herself

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AELLA THORNE
Sabrina's Aunt and the principal of the University!
Rumors say that she's just as crazy if not 10 time crazier than her niece!

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OPHELIA BLACKHART
Cold as Ice!
There's currently no disclosed information about her, please look forward to the future updates!
​

~
DEV NOTE
For now, these are the current love interests you will be able to meet in the game!
I hope you're just as excited as I am.

There's a few more characters I haven't introduced in this post. NPCs and side characters that will all play a part on the story!

.
Stay tuned for more development updates!

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[Mountain Guy]

So, only these 10 or you are planning for more??

 

[yz.vn_]

So, only these 10 or you are planning for more??

Well for now yes, in the future I might add some more characters but they won't be playing any major role like these main girls. But who knows, the cast might grow a bit more. I did plan to move the story in place to place.

 

[Black Moon]

Yazen_ wow girls look great
Keep up the good work man,your teaser is killing me though

 

[yz.vn_]

Yazen_ wow girls look great
Keep up the good work man,your teaser is killing me though

Haha, don't worry man, it's not just you. I've been dying to start working on my game again even though I have my exam week going xD

I'm still working some bits and pieces here. Next week, I'm sure I'll be able to focus more into the development.