Ren'Py Edges of Adulthood [v0.1] [D-san]

[hu lover]

But the puzzle should be an element of the game itself, not an exercise you have to go through to figure out if there's even anything in the game that interests you. The overview should be where the dev entices the player to want to find out more about the game; noninformative boilerplate just doesn't do that.

good point.

 

[hu lover]

thank you to those who gave positive feedback to this thread.

 

[MommaSin]

Only clicked on this because of the robot from love death and robots was on the cover

 

[Saki-saki]

Hi! If it wasn't for your review, I wouldn't have known the translation was shoddy and not in the author's style! We have now verified this with the help of another translator. We are already working on it, please leave your criticism in the future as well! This points to errors by inexperience and other problems I am not aware of, thank you!