Hmm, not a fan of the feminine appearance of the MC, but he is an elf, so it isn't exactly that much of an issue if he wasn't so short. I think him being taller would be better since the elf races do generally have a more fair appearance but are usually on the taller side in most renditions.
I usually hate mini-games in these, but the two here were actually not bad.
I would suggest changing the controls for the maze, though. It isn't intuitive when you are at a T junction that clicking on the left arrow would take you to the left path but clicking back after that would put you back at your previous position in the T junction. Normally it should have put you in the right part of the T junction facing the left part. The white background of the movement controls kind of causes a bit of visual overwhelming lighting that darkens the rest of the screen in contrast. This should be toned down and/or the background should have some more ambient lighting to compensate.
The min-games and maze being skippable is a welcome addition and is something all VNs should include, so thanks for that.
Otherwise, not too much content, but still a good bit for a first release. Looks interesting so far.