Allright, you can already notice from the very start that this dev has some experience under his belt.
At the beginning of the intro, nice back ground music and sound effects, off to a good start!
Writing style and quality is nice and easy to read. Though on some lighter back grounds, the text itself is sometimes a little harder to read.
The character of the mc is very compasionate albeit in his own way. He doesn't care about racism or that he's being shunned by human-kind for being "an elf lover".
Also the story itself presents an interesting philosophical and metaphysical question; What is faith? Is faith blindly following the oracles of gods? Or is faith tested by adversary and suffering?
In summary; This is a very good initial release. Albeit a little short, the quality itself makes more than up for it. The story is very interesting and got me hooked pretty good. Looking forward to future updates for sure!
If I could give half stars, I would've given this 4.5 out of 5, since I don't think that little detail with the text should cost 1 entire star =P