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Lurcher1
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Don't get me wrong. The other girls are fun. But you made a rod for your own back there. Shouldn't have made her so likeable!
I will send her back to Elven woods and force her to cut grass and chop trees.
She won't be so fun after that anymore, Elves hate destroying nature.Too bad Eliot intends to burn half the Elleria. Get fked Lyria.
Raziel_8
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Still...Lyria > Aria (maybe should have made Aria a cute elve)I will send her back to Elven woods and force her to cut grass and chop trees.
Too bad Eliot intends to burn half the Elleria. Get fked Lyria.
With the important part out of the way, i'm most curious about the relationship with Eris, she is the most interesting among the girls...Aria has her solid place after Lyria, there was also that blonde one, but i forgot her name...
longjohngold
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This was well made and I like a nice fantasy romp... but I did have a couple issues with it.
Strongly feels like every choice is pointless, most of the convo ones are just the same thing phrased 2 ways... and there's no choices for the important stuff like if you'd want to get with the elf lady or not, if you were truly joining Eris or just lying about joining up with her... I was kinda annoyed that the MC was always going to be really curt with the elf, even after hooking up with her, and there being no control over it at all. Then in the later parts it corrected this not by giving impactful choices, but by there being none at all. So yeah, this is my primary grievance.
It's weird that the character is repeatedly called Magnus, including by people they're close to, when that's just their surname (and not the part you can choose, so might be immersion breaking)... for a while it threw me thinking it was incorrectly using the default until I remembered he had a surname.
The convos sometimes felt a little off too, like people trying to be too cryptic or poetic or something and it just came off a little ehh, but that mighta been on purpose to convey their personalities or some such... but did make me somewhat lose interest in the dialogue in places.
The sex scenes were a bit flash in the pan, is the best way I could describe it.
I hope we get a bit of the demon lady in her natural form, especially during any sex scenes, as I do have a weakness for that.
Strongly feels like every choice is pointless, most of the convo ones are just the same thing phrased 2 ways... and there's no choices for the important stuff like if you'd want to get with the elf lady or not, if you were truly joining Eris or just lying about joining up with her... I was kinda annoyed that the MC was always going to be really curt with the elf, even after hooking up with her, and there being no control over it at all. Then in the later parts it corrected this not by giving impactful choices, but by there being none at all. So yeah, this is my primary grievance.
It's weird that the character is repeatedly called Magnus, including by people they're close to, when that's just their surname (and not the part you can choose, so might be immersion breaking)... for a while it threw me thinking it was incorrectly using the default until I remembered he had a surname.
The convos sometimes felt a little off too, like people trying to be too cryptic or poetic or something and it just came off a little ehh, but that mighta been on purpose to convey their personalities or some such... but did make me somewhat lose interest in the dialogue in places.
The sex scenes were a bit flash in the pan, is the best way I could describe it.
I hope we get a bit of the demon lady in her natural form, especially during any sex scenes, as I do have a weakness for that.
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No Elves or Witches today, a war table however, yes. Starting Chapter II, you'll be able to finally start influencing and shaping the events in the world. For good or bad remains to be seen. From political backstabs, to allying yourself and more. Thought it was something fun to mention!
Since DevinHesi can't share when I embed specific things on my discord, here you have it. Aria doing a little Q&A regarding War Table Ops starting Chapter II. ( I know, she's a lovely host. Piss off Lyria fans. )
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Too many Elves and Witches, too little Goddesses. ( I'll sneakily leave one here. )
ohhiimfox
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I'm a Lyria fan myself... i get it that you want to ppl getting pissed by your comments at Lyria.. but there is one thing thats called logic.. if you as the dev dont like the character then dont put her into your game/story as a Main LI...( I know, she's a lovely host. Piss off Lyria fans.
You couldve just put her in the intro as a one time off fling and be gone with it... but noooo you decided that you want her as an main love interest.. so please do us fans of her a favour and stop trying to piss us off..
Could bite you in the long run... btw i like the story so far and has potential!
Just dont like the Anti Lyria post from you ^^
Nope. I absolutely like every single one of em. Hundred percent. Im always attached to my characters each one for specific parts of their personalities.
I mean this is your first time interacting with me so I hardly judge. But there is no pissing off going on here. I suppose you are just not used on my level of sarcasm and joking manners when iy comes for my own stuff. But that is all there is to it.
I dont dislike any of em. One reason why I make specific harem type. I don't pick em for scenes either, they all get their time whenever possible and when it suits the story.
So relax buddy. Nothing so dramatic here I assure you.
P. S: if anything I want is people gettin in on joke or roastin another char in friendly manner if they want! Its all for fun's sake.
ohhiimfox
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If its in a joking matter then okay i can behind that. i'm blind to sarcasm if its writen so no harm done
I didnt mean any offense btw
Deboksi
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Oh yeah?
Did Eliot become a wizard at the age of 30
or did that happen during those 500 years?Neither mate, neither. All gucci!If its in a joking matter then okay i can behind that. i'm blind to sarcasm if its writen so no harm done
I didnt mean any offense btw
Can't answer that one. He isn't a wizard at all
Content_Consumer
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Why is the MC wearing an archery shooting glove?
Makes no sense, particularly as he's supposedly a swordsman and this glove would actually make weilding a sword harder, not easier, while also offering no protection.
Makes no sense, particularly as he's supposedly a swordsman and this glove would actually make weilding a sword harder, not easier, while also offering no protection.
Dark Silence
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You're actually wrong. There are gloves for sword weildin. You can research that if you'd like.
Content_Consumer
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I don't need to research it. I own swords, I have trained with swords. I first began fencing when I was 14.
No swordsman would wear a 2 finger glove in an actual combat setting.
Dark Silence
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I didn't say they would wear a two-finger glove. Just gloves in general. I don't use or own any swords. I prefer axes.