Interesting so far, far too many examples of bad code not finding the MC's (re)name and using the default name, especially in the guild hall segment where you meet the guild master. This definitely needs looking at. Also unsure if you are specifically phrasing things differently or if it is a language issue, if the latter then that is also something that really needs fixing before it gets to Steam. Even for 'old English' as such, it's not natural and very much like a non-native speaker would write at times. However, as said, this may be intentional.
I like what there is so far though, keep up the great work.