VN Ren'Py Elowen's Vessel [v0.1] [Elowenz]

blackmetal

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as a security guard in a fetish club I thought id seen it all guess not damn tacko tuesday abd burito sunday just got real
 

Elowenz

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I'm open to suggestions so it's up to you. But to be honest, I may favor the few other fetishes that I have at least a little interest in (having a hard time with more common fetishes, like feet. Hell even scat seems more popular). I will make the fart content optional for sure in the next updates, I could turn the few scenes into facesitting - breathplay - ass rimming without farts.

The rarest / weirdest / least socially acceptable the fetish, the more $ its few enjoyers are willing to pay.

safe game: 2$/buyer, 500 buyers
weird game: 20$/buyer, 50 buyers
I don't plan on making anyone pay for the game :)
I'm just a dude making a game I couldn’t find myself. Since fart fetish content isn’t exactly mainstream, I hope my game can help others who are looking for the same thing just like I did.
 
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Spikedjoker

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First off, a fart focused VN!? Yes! There should be more of these, the demand is there.

The game is in its super early stages so from what I can see... It's ok.

In my opinion the plot is a little convoluted, I don't think a fart focused femdom game needs this much drama in it. For example, Urao2sei is making an awesome game where you just collect women's farts, and it's silly, but it's a simple way to create a setting for fart scenes and scenarios. So I'm just saying you don't have to make it game of thrones, just a vehicle for good fetish material. But that's just my opinion.

What's really going to make or break this game though is the sound effects. And this might be my opinion again, but these sound effects ain't it. If you want to see an example of great fart fetish sound effects check out Black Rose Hotel. If you want great fart audio look into nounthesame, phantom202, hotramenaudio, and jd_choco_fac they all should have a file of options and if you reach out to them they might share.

Good luck man! I'm looking forward to what this evolves into.
 

Elowenz

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First off, a fart focused VN!? Yes! There should be more of these, the demand is there.

The game is in its super early stages so from what I can see... It's ok.

In my opinion the plot is a little convoluted, I don't think a fart focused femdom game needs this much drama in it. For example, Urao2sei is making an awesome game where you just collect women's farts, and it's silly, but it's a simple way to create a setting for fart scenes and scenarios. So I'm just saying you don't have to make it game of thrones, just a vehicle for good fetish material. But that's just my opinion.

What's really going to make or break this game though is the sound effects. And this might be my opinion again, but these sound effects ain't it. If you want to see an example of great fart fetish sound effects check out Black Rose Hotel. If you want great fart audio look into nounthesame, phantom202, hotramenaudio, and jd_choco_fac they all should have a file of options and if you reach out to them they might share.

Good luck man! I'm looking forward to what this evolves into.
Hey dude, thank you so much for the feedback ! I'll check those out while working on the next updates.

I definitely agree that the writing is still a bit confusing and messy. Being a new dev, I had a hard time "justifying" the fart content in the lores and stuff. From my own experiences with a few games, I find myself enjoying much more any scenes with at least a little convincing context behind. But I'll definitely take into account your opinion, I've played one of netralGD's game where the plot was literally you being a fart receptacle for your psycho girlfriend so I see your point.

Also massive thanks for the sound advices, you've really helped a dude out with your time.

Glad you’re looking forward to what’s next! Hope the next updates land better for you. Cheers!
 

DrAlta

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Hay! We all know the Japanese game show How To Escape A Fart gave use the one true depiction of a fart.
 

Mahgni Mada

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Really appreciate the devs that make these kinds of fun games for us poor non-vanilla lovers, thank you, Elowenz! :)

And remember, Elowenz, do NOT let people pressure you into changing YOUR game into something it's not just because a bunch of loud peeps aren't into it and/or hating on it. Not every game is meant for everyone, if you don't like it, move on and find something else, it's as simple as that!
 

Spikedjoker

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Hey dude, thank you so much for the feedback ! I'll check those out while working on the next updates.

I definitely agree that the writing is still a bit confusing and messy. Being a new dev, I had a hard time "justifying" the fart content in the lores and stuff. From my own experiences with a few games, I find myself enjoying much more any scenes with at least a little convincing context behind. But I'll definitely take into account your opinion, I've played one of netralGD's game where the plot was literally you being a fart receptacle for your psycho girlfriend so I see your point.

Also massive thanks for the sound advices, you've really helped a dude out with your time.

Glad you’re looking forward to what’s next! Hope the next updates land better for you. Cheers!
No worries, and don't get me wrong about the story, you can make the world whatever you want. The main reason I said that was so you don't go so deep into the plot that carrying the plot forward holds a higher priority then the content. And one more heads up for fart audio, @Orange_Zemenar just pinned a post on his X account with a huge audio file of stomach gurgles, fart audio, and more, should be useful. Good luck! (y)
 

Ninja Spire Landing

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Very promising start so far, definitely interested in seeing where it goes. You think there's a chance we can get an option to turn off the green gas clouds and just have the fart sfx, please? I'm one of those that prefer it without any visualization, in all honesty.
 

Elowenz

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Very promising start so far, definitely interested in seeing where it goes. You think there's a chance we can get an option to turn off the green gas clouds and just have the fart sfx, please? I'm one of those that prefer it without any visualization, in all honesty.
To be honest, I'm can't promise you I will in a near future but I'll write it down so after I'm done with the current tasks, I can tweak all the scenes I'm planning to add with the new option to disable fart visual effects.

Btw do You plan to add facesitting and/or BBW content?
Facesitting scenes on the next update !
I didn't think about BBW so this might be a character in future updates but the ones I will introduce don't fit in that category unfortunately.
 
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