Critcobain
Formerly 'PhantomViper'
- Feb 19, 2023
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Interesting theories, but I won't spoil Vinnie's origin. Just don't think of him as just the MC's alter ego, it's more complicated than that. You'll find out later.So is Vinnie supposed to be like a poltergeist, unseen and unheard by everyone except MC, but is able to manipulate the physical world (spoilers), accessing 21st Century knowledge and apparently able to teleport, OR is he a psychedelic version of Hobbes from Calvin and Hobbes, where his "actions" are actually Calvin/MC's actions that he compartmentalizes into a separate persona (but that doesn't explain the 2020's familiarity)?
Edit: The above was written after the Vivian Quest, not after the end of Act 2, which isn't helping.
Sorry about the script, man. I wrote it all myself without any AI involved. It’s just my own twisted imagination.Honestly, the render is good and acceptable in some part, but for the erotic scene require you to have gooner level 99 stat to find this arousing. I think dev already tried his best and this is comfortably and respectfully above low effort with the tech and medium he chose to work with, the problem is with the AI I think, it's difficult to make good H scene with the tech currently. The narrative story and the way characters speak, though... It's just ass writing, frankly speaking. It tries too hard to be a cinematic vibe, it makes a horse-shoe shape round around and landed squarely in comedy/parody box instead. I mean, I think if that's the intention from the beginning it could work, the speaking dog certainly help hint this is intentional choice and direction. But I don't know, it just feels 50/50 with dev prompting the LLM to also take big influence in the direction of the story writing, but classic LLM is that without direction they tend to be very noticeably exaggerated certain aspect or theme. For Dev, I think if you want to go comedy/parody, you need to lean harder to it and give clever self-aware punchlines here and there to make this project great. But if comedy/parody is not your direction for this project, then I think a big or complete overhaul on the narrative writing side is critical.
The setting is the 30s, but don't treat Vinnie as just an alter ego from that time. He's something more. You'll find out more details later. For now, just enjoy his dumb jokes (or mine, depending on how you look at it).well still finishing this but the biggest issue I have is that we're set in the 30s but we're making references to the terminator and laser pointers... get your shit straight with your setting
Sorry, that’s likely my mistake. I was in a rush before the holidays. I’ll double-check the Android version and fix everything. The Windows version is working perfectly fine, though.Trying to figure out after initially playing after the first release on pc, I saw that you did indeed add an Android port so I was trying it but still downloading now for pc but what is up with the Android one where I was going along and seeing everything and when it got to Loretta's first jerk n suck scene the entire act was all black scenes until he finishes in her throat and none of the act was shown. So I went on and when in the safe room & he is picturing Ruby bent over & mc fucking her again it goes black and back to seeing them soon as she tells him stop imagining them fucking? Is this on my end somehow or the apk is messed up or is it on purpose cause that would be odd to do so?
Try using JoiPlay on Patreon (a free update every 3-6 months, paid updates more frequently) and the Ren'Py plug-ins on your Android, and download the PC version to run in JoiPlay. I find this consistently more reliable than .apk versions.Trying to figure out after initially playing after the first release on pc, I saw that you did indeed add an Android port so I was trying it but still downloading now for pc but what is up with the Android one where I was going along and seeing everything and when it got to Loretta's first jerk n suck scene the entire act was all black scenes until he finishes in her throat and none of the act was shown. So I went on and when in the safe room & he is picturing Ruby bent over & mc fucking her again it goes black and back to seeing them soon as she tells him stop imagining them fucking? Is this on my end somehow or the apk is messed up or is it on purpose cause that would be odd to do so?
Nowhere was it specified with whom. Plus, in my opinion, it’s too early for only one of the lines.the part at end promising sex for next update, VIVIAN IS BEST IDEA 4 IT NOT LILY TOO SOON
Have you consideredv.0.15 — Dec 24, 2025
- WebP optimization (reduced game size)