VN Ren'Py Abandoned Endowed [Chapter Five v0.3.8] [Expanding Universe Games]

[Tunak23]

There is so much wrong with this one, man. Probably one of the worst premises I've ever seen for these kinda games. A strip club owner with a literal micro dick so small you can't even see it in the second chapter when he gets head. (I am curious about the chuckle heads who actually like this crap. Much better games out there, man. I am sorry, I'm not sorry, but this is just not a good game. Facepalm all you want. Cannot rec this to anyone.)

A lesbian for the cover girl that you cannot bone in a fucking porn game for straight men. Who does that? A mansion like penthouse you don't even get goes to her right off the bat? And the club you don't even really own it because of odd stipulations where you have to wait a year and marry someone... Then this protagonist is calling women merchandise very early on and just being a general unlikable asshole, and that really shows how little control (,or how kinetic novel like,) over tone you the player have.

What the hell was the dev thinking? I can only assume they salvaged it somehow for some people judging by the two reacts to my post and perhaps much later because the updates are still rolling, but man... It's rough getting through those early chapters. There's not even anything interesting happening the first two chapters. No sex or interesting characters you would really want to date if they were real or generally unique ones at least. It feels very casual and low effort. Multiple chapters with little content? That's a lot of washed or filler content.

The animations are good, but the models all look pretty similar. Not a lot of variety in bone structure, skin tones, or blemishes. A lot of the time the models just sit in the scene fish faced and dead-eyed. I did like Maurice, and he nearly turned it around, but then you immediately lose that momentum by going back to the assistant. And despite me not promising the girl that comes in for an interview anything, they act as if you did. So your choices don't even matter? Sigh... I did try one more time, but this certainly isn't Eternum, Price of Power, Ripples, etc. Peace and good luck.

Gotta agree between the graphics being underwhelming and the plot just making the MC the most unimpressive dude you would be cursed to meet on real life...the game doesn't call to me either that the protagonist had the smallest dick anyone could imagine is even more of a turn off for me.

The redhead lass is cool but the Dev just had to make her a lesbian,the other redhead and the strippers are the only passable girls on the game,that Gabriela the game pushes in your face all the time is not exactly gorgeous and would have rejected her upon the first meeting if the plot ever gave us the chance.

The management aspects of the game could be very interesting but knowing the usual fan of adult games,the Dev better highlight the choices to any business related event we will screw up that casino pretty quickly,meeting the Yakuza was unexpected but fun overall the lass the boss had with him could look a bit more Asian to fit the thematic (the developer just seems to like the same character model and repeat it over and over).

Hope we meet prettier girls and the MC continues his path for self improvement but really the premise leaves much to be desired,after replaying it today the game just doesn't catch my interest and has a long way to go until it does.

 

[TheElwoodBlues]

When is the public release?

 

[Billyjoebill]

There is so much wrong with this one, man. Probably one of the worst premises I've ever seen for these kinda games. A strip club owner with a literal micro dick so small you can't even see it in the second chapter when he gets head. (I am curious about the chuckle heads who actually like this crap. Much better games out there, man. I am sorry, I'm not sorry, but this is just not a good game. Facepalm all you want. Cannot rec this to anyone.)

A lesbian for the cover girl that you cannot bone in a fucking porn game for straight men. Who does that? A mansion like penthouse you don't even get goes to her right off the bat? And the club you don't even really own it because of odd stipulations where you have to wait a year and marry someone... Then this protagonist is calling women merchandise very early on and just being a general unlikable asshole, and that really shows how little control (,or how kinetic novel like,) over tone you the player have.

What the hell was the dev thinking? I can only assume they salvaged it somehow for some people judging by the two reacts to my post and perhaps much later because the updates are still rolling, but man... It's rough getting through those early chapters. There's not even anything interesting happening the first two chapters. No sex or interesting characters you would really want to date if they were real or generally unique ones at least. It feels very casual and low effort. Multiple chapters with little content? That's a lot of washed or filler content.

The animations are good, but the models all look pretty similar. Not a lot of variety in bone structure, skin tones, or blemishes. A lot of the time the models just sit in the scene fish faced and dead-eyed. I did like Maurice, and he nearly turned it around, but then you immediately lose that momentum by going back to the assistant. And despite me not promising the girl that comes in for an interview anything, they act as if you did. So your choices don't even matter? Sigh... I did try one more time, but this certainly isn't Eternum, Price of Power, Ripples, etc. Peace and good luck.

Ok three things:
1.) Some portion of the male population is cursed with "white man length"...... it's nice to be represented for once XD.

2.) I'm going to go out on a limb here and say that it's likely that as time passes, the Lesbian "wing girl" is probably going to become more and more attached to the MC, probably enough to participate in some H-scenes.

3.) You're picking on the models.... exactly what quality are you expecting from a FREE game? I know some of them out there are surprisingly awesome, both in storyline and in graphics, but these are the expectation rather than the rule. As it stands, this game is pretty good, nothing in caliber like "once in a lifetime", but in its own right a decent story with good graphics. It needs a lot of time before an accurate judgment can be passed.

 

[ouroboros001]

Ok, three things:
1.) Some portion of the male population is cursed with "white man length"...... it's nice to be represented for once XD.

2.) I'm going to go out on a limb here and say that it's likely that as time passes, the Lesbian "wing girl" is probably going to become more and more attached to the MC, probably enough to participate in some H-scenes.

3.) You're picking on the models.... exactly what quality are you expecting from a FREE game? I know some of them out there are surprisingly awesome, both in the storyline and in graphics, but these are the expectation rather than the rule. As it stands, this game is pretty good, nothing in caliber like "once in a lifetime", but in its own right a decent story with good graphics. It needs a lot of time before an accurate judgment can be passed.

1. It has to be pretty rare to have that medical condition. It feels more like a dig at the audience playing to me. Like the creator has some misguided perspective on its own targeted demographic in a porn franchise and is trying to use it to pontificate their views when people don't care and are just there for a wank or good story in most cases. Of which to me, both are absent here.

I doubt they were trying to give you representation and I'm white by the way. That doesn't even matter, is a myth, and of course, it is all just genetics. I'm 6'2 220lbs and just got lucky with that. Been the only white guy in enough sports locker rooms to know that even before the internet became ubiquitous. Everyone is different but in a porn game, they probably shouldn't have gone under average at least, no?

2. It does not matter if she gets involved later. This is a porn game for straight men. It's a harem game, man. It was just a bad call. You either have them with a magic dick turning them straight or they aren't involved but pointlessly prominent. If she just got involved once for dominating some chick it still wouldn't justify her screen time as second only to the protagonist. I think they just stuck her in to piss people off as a dig at the audience again. I digress. The point is that in no way was that going to go well. If she was bi it would be one thing.

All you need to do to see how bad it is is to reverse the circumstances in your head or ask your gay friends how they would like porn like that. An all lesbian or gay harem with the one dude there prominently that they don't interact with for the main reason anyone is there in the first place by the tags. They are just right up there in importance to the main cast. It feels like what most women describe porn meant for guys.

I'm being blunt here, but I doubt in the only one that thought that was stupid gay, or straight.

3. I am not some arbiter of f95. I hold no authority here and was only giving my impression of the game. If you like this, more power to you buddy. I don't obviously but we can like different things and hold differing opinions, that's fine! You'll catch me playing Eternum, Summers Gone, Ripples, Price of Power, etc over this but I don't fault you for preferring this or not. I think some may have gotten the wrong impression there.

 

[itshowyoumetme]

1. It has to be pretty rare to have that medical condition. It feels more like a dig at the audience playing to me. Like the creator has some misguided perspective on its own targeted demographic in a porn franchise and is trying to use it to pontificate their views when people don't care and are just there for a wank or good story in most cases. Of which to me, both are absent here.

I doubt they were trying to give you representation and I'm white by the way. That doesn't even matter, is a myth, and of course, it is all just genetics. I'm 6'2 220lbs and just got lucky with that. Been the only white guy in enough sports locker rooms to know that even before the internet became ubiquitous. Everyone is different but in a porn game, they probably shouldn't have gone under average at least, no?

2. It does not matter if she gets involved later. This is a porn game for straight men. It's a harem game, man. It was just a bad call. You either have them with a magic dick turning them straight or they aren't involved but pointlessly prominent. If she just got involved once for dominating some chick it still wouldn't justify her screen time as second only to the protagonist. I think they just stuck her in to piss people off as a dig at the audience again. I digress. The point is that in no way was that going to go well. If she was bi it would be one thing.

All you need to do to see how bad it is is to reverse the circumstances in your head or ask your gay friends how they would like porn like that. An all lesbian or gay harem with the one dude there prominently that they don't interact with for the main reason anyone is there in the first place by the tags. They are just right up there in importance to the main cast. It feels like what most women describe porn meant for guys.

I'm being blunt here, but I doubt in the only one that thought that was stupid gay, or straight.

3. I am not some arbiter of f95. I hold no authority here and was only giving my impression of the game. If you like this, more power to you buddy. I don't obviously but we can like different things and hold differing opinions, that's fine! You'll catch me playing Eternum, Summers Gone, Ripples, Price of Power, etc over this but I don't fault you for preferring this or not. I think some may have gotten the wrong impression there.

Honestly I think people are overthinking this a fair bit.

Is the micro penis silly? Yes. Likely intentionally so before you take the magic mojo pills and get hung like a horse. It's the same zero to hero trope that a bunch of other games use, except usually they go from being fat and ugly to athletic chick magnet. The game dev's name is "expanding universe", focused on the whole expansion fetish, making their breasts and your dick bigger.

In a game where one of if not the primary fetish is going to be centered around "bigger is better" I don't think its that strange that you start off small before you become "Endowed" due to the mcguffin.

The dev might have wanted to make the theme more clear early on though. In the last game the theme was presented right away, this one might make people think you'll be playing an mc with a micro penis for long due to the build up.

Same thing goes for the roommate, I'd be very surprised if she didn't end up being one of the main girls of the game, either it turns out she faked being a lesbian to keep your relationship platonic or it will change by way of magic dick. Something similar happened in the last game.

Still might not be people's thing though just as long as people know what they're getting into.

You'll catch me playing Eternum, Summers Gone, Ripples, Price of Power

Sidenote, that is a solid list. Eternum, Summers Gone along with The Deluca family are probably the top 3 best games on here.

 

[ouroboros001]

Honestly I think people are overthinking this a fair bit.

Is the micro penis silly? Yes. Likely intentionally so before you take the magic mojo pills and get hung like a horse. It's the same zero to hero trope that a bunch of other games use, except usually they go from being fat and ugly to athletic chick magnet. The game dev's name is "expanding universe", focused on the whole expansion fetish, making their breasts and your dick bigger.

In a game where one of if not the primary fetish is going to be centered around "bigger is better" I don't think its that strange that you start off small before you become "Endowed" due to the mcguffin.

The dev might have wanted to make the theme more clear early on though. In the last game the theme was presented right away, this one might make people think you'll be playing an mc with a micro penis for long due to the build up.

Same thing goes for the roommate, I'd be very surprised if she didn't end up being one of the main girls of the game, either it turns out she faked being a lesbian to keep your relationship platonic or it will change by way of magic dick. Something similar happened in the last game.

Still might not be people's thing though just as long as people know what they're getting into.



Sidenote, that is a solid list. Eternum, Summers Gone along with The Deluca family are probably the top 3 best games on here.

That's fair, man. I just made that post coming off from trying a few chapters. I played hypnosis and liked it much more so my expectations might have been unfair to say the least. The only thing I didn't like about that one was Laura I think her name was.

 

[TreeFriend]

Pretty sure the new chapter is available in the non beta testing/complete version for patreons now btw.

 

[sevensham]

WHEN WILL BE A NEW UPDATE RELEASE?

 

[maximilium]

surely right now is the coming of new update. But it seems, the patrons are still not willing to give it here

 

[sevensham]

surely right now is the coming of new update. But it seems, the patrons are still not willing to give it here

i see .... so need to wait some more

 

[wulver]

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It says Version .3.6 Beta but the downloadable file is listed as Version 0.3.8

 

[blackmetal]

3.8 has been out a while now

 

[BogoHobo]

I have to admit, I have not played this game for a long time but did really take between August 2021 (ver 3.3) until a month ago to put put out an update for this? at least that is what I gather from the date on my saves versus the Change Log. Wow not a game I wpould wait that long for.

 

[barglenarglezous]

I have to admit, I have not played this game for a long time but did really take between August 2021 (ver 3.3) until a month ago to put put out an update for this? at least that is what I gather from the date on my saves versus the Change Log. Wow not a game I wpould wait that long for.

Dev is alternating between two games, and the latest update for the other game took nearly a year. The gap between that one releasing and this update was much smaller, so hopefully he's back to a normal cadence now.

 

[Pick_A_Name]

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[Spfjolietjake]

Note from the dev:
This is a leaked version of my beta tester update and is missing about 1/2 of the renders and visuals.
I highly recommend not playing this version and waiting until the full update is released

So um is the waiting over?

 

[Lavisor]

So um is the waiting over?

half way through, the full episode will be officially going public around November 1st.

 

[Spfjolietjake]

half way through, the full episode will be officially going public around November 1st.

Thank you

 

[blackmetal]

what you cant fuck and marry the red head assistant why the fuck am i playing this then !

 

[drifter139]

what you cant fuck and marry the red head assistant why the fuck am i playing this then !

she openly states she is a lesbian and not into guys. plenty of other girls to have fun with apart from her