Everything OK, i understand it's still in the works.. just please don't say anymore that "I dont like your games" coz exactly the opposite is the case: I LOVE THEM! Otherways I would not spend 2 days to download a 8GB walkthrough from Mega (with it's limitations) so that i can go on playing it! I just hope this great game will once have a WT like your other great game, Willy had
As for your "professional english corrector" if he is also a native russian speaker he will have the same problems with the articles, that is not something only you have a problem with but ALL russian speakers, due to the particularities of the russian language in this relation. If your corrector is not a native russian speaker, he may just ignore that kind of correction in order to "preserve the personal note" of your text.
But it's not only the articles (or the lack thereof).. let me give you just one example from one quest at which i just am now:
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It should be: There is
AN inventor in Everlust (...) who may have blueprints for
THESE things. You should see if you can somehow get
THESE blueprints and make
THESE two things for Cecily.
I mean.. this is something like 3rd grade grammar level.. If this is a "professional english corrector", then i am the Pope! And if you pay him for this kind of work.. i would better not say what you are..
It's full of such grammar mistakes allover, which only a kid could do who never saw a school from inside..
But I repeat: This does NOT mean that I "don't like your games" , on the contrary, I love them and I would hope that my critical opinions would help to make them even better
Now would you please tell me if those 2 quests that i posted before which are red but don't have the mention "to be continued" are finished or not? Thanks in advance!