Even in the early stages I liked the game. If possible, work on optimization!
Okay, let's get to the real feedback/ideas.
- The size of the initial map is ok, regardless of the size (it doesn't need to be something big) even if it's small, what will really count is the number of events that exist or can occur. It would be interesting to work with this in mind.
- I think very similar to what the friend above said, it's interesting to work on some details to bring life to the game, like the example of the "landlord" he gave, and the part to bring a use for each outfit (not necessarily all) and that make events happen, etc. It would be nice to put a description for specific clothes that can do this kind of thing like the Otaku example he mentioned. Yes, it's obvious that cosplay would draw attention for Otakus, but sometimes people don't even pay attention to it, so a brief description for the clothes that do this kind of thing would be nice.
- Add Creampie
- More exhibitionism
- Different moans and speeches during sex
- I realized that it is possible to have two or more people seduced, but only one event can occur at a time. It would be very interesting if there were scenes with the protagonist and 2 others, or a bunch of people at the same time, like a menage or gang bang.
- As she is a succubus, I think there is a coherent possibility of adding some women for her to have relationships with as well. (if this isn't the initial proposal there's no problem, but I think it could be more than just men and women banging. If she is a succubus, she can seduce other women as well).
- Putting phrases into people's thoughts, whether they are lewd/sensual things (you are a extremely hot succub and they are looking at you, c'mon) or busyness with work, everyday things (then imagine a line of thought where the guy is worried about work, and after seeing you, he starts thinking erotic things for example). Remember the "details to bring life to the game"? that's about it!
- This one is a different idea now, but it would probably be something for the later stages of development. It would be interesting to include a few main characters that you can develop a closer relationship with, being able to go out with them and have sex in different places, including your own apartment or their house. I'm going to use Otaku again as an example, imagine that you start to show him a new vision of things, making him feel better and better, whether in relationships with other women or even in his life (he starts to become a guy with more self-confidence), and with that this relationship is developed, and so on with other characters with different personalities.
I think that's all for now, if I have another idea I'll definitely come here and talk about it.