VN Ren'Py Esoterika [v0.3a] [Inkshade]

[Kekekerkek]

I mean, the scene after the cavern was practically a proposal.

yeah they clearly understand that they are both in love i think

 

[Dessolos]

I mean, the scene after the cavern was practically a proposal.

ah I must of forgotten about that scene or just assumed it was mostly one sided but that's why i did say unless I forgotten something cause I had a feeling I did forget something

 

[Filipis]

It's not like I dislike it dislike it. I understand that it was a necessary event to show Celes's attraction to Cedric. But I think, for what the game has shown us so far, that Peter is not the kind of person that would accept his "wife" or love interest with who he is in a relationship being kissed by other man simply because is the game rules. The character of him that we have seen in the game doesn't strike has that kind of person, so I find it...odd?

Of course, it could be that I just misread Peter's character.


In any case, I love this game and it's one of two of the games I look forward the most in this page. I love it.

Their "marriage" is just for show, at the moment. It was easier to explain that than to explain who Celes is or where she comes from otherwise. There is genuine attraction between them, and sometimes (like during the game night), MC forgets she is supposed to be his wife and maybe doesn't quite act the way a husband is supposed to.

 

[giorgyo777]

this scene from the save menu, where Celes with smeared mascara, I understand that this scene is not in the game yet and it will be in the next update???

 

[giorgyo777]

Their "marriage" is just for show, at the moment. It was easier to explain that than to explain who Celes is or where she comes from otherwise. There is genuine attraction between them, and sometimes (like during the game night), MC forgets she is supposed to be his wife and maybe doesn't quite act the way a husband is supposed to.

if so then it's not really a true NTR because for that to happen they have to have attraction and love interest for each other and not just a fake marriage.
so i think the game can be slowed down a bit and give peter and celes a chance to develop their feelings before someone tries to steal celes from peter, that's kind of a slow burn and the proper NTR way and not a dumb perversion and turning from an innocent girl with honor and dignity into a dirty slut ready to jump on any dick....
so i would like peter and celes to develop a romantic relationship for some time or at least they should actually confess their love to each other and get married (for love) before any NTR happens.

 

[Inkshade]

this scene from the save menu, where Celes with smeared mascara, I understand that this scene is not in the game yet and it will be in the next update???
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That's just something I make for the save menu.

 

[wildride69]

Is their a path where the MC has slept or even made a real move on the blonde? I must have missed it if so.

The MC strikes me as some loser who starts off as a good guy trying to help someone but quickly turns into a jealous stalker with no balls to speak up and make a move. Then we are supposed to accept this as NTR from a guy who isn't dating or married to a single female that happens to be staying in his house...

Also this story started off great with her as a Warrior but it seems to be turning into a badly written soap opera episode. Maybe this changed in the last update but I'm not even motivated to play it.

 

[wildride69]

if so then it's not really a true NTR because for that to happen they have to have attraction and love interest for each other and not just a fake marriage.
so i think the game can be slowed down a bit and give peter and celes a chance to develop their feelings before someone tries to steal celes from peter, that's kind of a slow burn and the proper NTR way and not a dumb perversion and turning from an innocent girl with honor and dignity into a dirty slut ready to jump on any dick....
so i would like peter and celes to develop a romantic relationship for some time or at least they should actually confess their love to each other and get married (for love) before any NTR happens.

Agree the only people who should consider this NTR are the truly sad people who live vicariously through a game.

 

[wildride69]

That's just something I make for the save menu.

Could you make a GB scene next for the Save Menu? Just for science.

 

[giorgyo777]

Agree the only people who should consider this NTR are the truly sad people who live vicariously through a game.

As I already answered in another game to a similar post, I think it can be put here too)

And I also do not think that in a game with the NTR/NTS tags, the MC is necessarily a weakling, humiliated or subordinate, this is a stupid tendency, and if this is present, then in addition to the first two tags (femdom) is added to the game!

The presence of the NTR/NTS tag does not make the MC a weakling, but on the contrary, the NTR is a normal and adequate guy, he is generally against someone stealing his beloved from him - (although this happens in any case), and the NTS is a guy / husband - although a cuckold, but he shares his beloved girlfriend / wife without humiliation plus in both cases the MC and his LI love each other and are each other's love interests, otherwise if this is not so, then all the "magic" of the NTR/NTS disappears and complete nonsense turns out ...

 

[Inkshade]

if so then it's not really a true NTR because for that to happen they have to have attraction and love interest for each other and not just a fake marriage.
so i think the game can be slowed down a bit and give peter and celes a chance to develop their feelings before someone tries to steal celes from peter

That's definitely a fair criticism. Celes and Pete spending more time together and building up their relationship is definitely the main priority for the rest of Chapter 1

Could you make a GB scene next for the Save Menu? Just for science.

I'm not exactly sure what a GB is but if I can then sure!

 

[Joshy92]

That's just something I make for the save menu.

I loved it. Seeing her looking at me like that is really hot.

Well I pretend she is anyway lol.

 

[giorgyo777]

That's definitely a fair criticism. Celes and Pete spending more time together and building up their relationship is definitely the main priority for the rest of Chapter 1

I'm not exactly sure what a GB is but if I can then sure!

I really hope that by the second chapter, where there will possibly be NTR/NTS - someone will steal Celes or Peter will decide to share her, then the first chapter will end with them officially in a relationship and in love with each other - (not as friends or fictitious).

I really like your game, character models and the Story, Celes is definitely the most beautiful girl in the game with a perfect figure, plump breasts and wide hips, I'm actually trying to generate her portrait through AI, but I can't do it yet, other facial features come out, but I'm looking for a similar model)))

P.s. "wildride69" meant GangBang))

 

[Inkshade]

P.s. "wildride69" meant GangBang))

I'll come up with something, maybe something for the main menu too

 

[SamuraiFruitPunch88]

Their "marriage" is just for show, at the moment. It was easier to explain that than to explain who Celes is or where she comes from otherwise.

Yeah, I totally understand that. That's not even worth mentioning since it's pretty obvious.

It might as well have been a misunderstanding of mine, I jumped ahead and concluded that his feelings for Celes are greater than they actually are, and, based on my own understanding of Peter, constructed an image of the character that clashed with having no problem with the kiss in my own accord.

The thing is that Peter didn't strike me like that. But that's a problem of mine so there is no issue there.

Thanks for the answer.

I'll come up with something, maybe something for the main menu too

If I can throw my grain of salt. I think an image of Celes wearing an alternative version of her armor, but several times lewer, would be awesome. Nothing better than a sexy knight.

 

[desmosome]

I'll come up with something, maybe something for the main menu too

bro did you ignore my question because you don't want to get into talking about the routes and variables? If so, that's cool with me. But if you just missed it, I would appreciate some insight on it.

 

[Joshy92]

I think the MC's personality might change slightly in the future depending on what route we are on and choices we make.

 

[kikomascado]

Don't get mad just a question of curiosity. If there is mind control sex is that considered r**e. Just curious I personally assume yes.

I do consider it, but regarding tagging I think the r**e tag isn't needed. Same thing with sleep/drunk sex (if it wasn't consented beforehand).
The tag may be for those cases where the girl is actively fighting over it, I don't know. I tend to avoid both tags. Hahaha

Also, we don't need to censor these words in this forum, do we?

 

[Inkshade]

The thing is that Peter didn't strike me like that. But that's a problem of mine so there is no issue there.

Thanks for the answer.

Peter being drunk is part of the reason why he play along with it. But how he feel about it once the kiss actually happen is up to the player

bro did you ignore my question because you don't want to get into talking about the routes and variables? If so, that's cool with me. But if you just missed it, I would appreciate some insight on it.

I can confirm that the color code in that scene isnt flipped, and MC isnt "being naive" but more like "being in denial".

Also there isnt gonna be a "chad MC" route, this game is written entirely to be an unavoidable NTR/NTS game.

 

[giorgyo777]

I do consider it, but regarding tagging I think the r**e tag isn't needed. Same thing with sleep/drunk sex (if it wasn't consented beforehand).
The tag may be for those cases where the girl is actively fighting over it, I don't know. I tend to avoid both tags. Hahaha

Also, we don't need to censor these words in this forum, do we?

I think rape or sex in a dream/drunk would not be superfluous and even very exciting, but only if Peter and Celes are in a real love relationship)))

and yes, you don't have to censor the tag names)