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Dessolos

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Just read, it becomes obvious.
I did it wasn't to me and English is the only language I know. It reads how I would write but im not a writer and I tend to use simple words , however I will say my grammar never been good. It probably has gotten worst ever since I started playing mmo's years ago ( I don't anymore). Yeah I see some small things I would change but nothing major.

Either way my point was I don't think it is important if he says English isn't his native language cause most dev's don't state it either and alot aren't.
 
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Most developers just repeat clichés, and the weak, stupid MC is one of them.
He should have reciprocated Celes's blowjob in this update instead of just sleeping, but he couldn't because he's so weak and stupid.
Unfortunately, this game's beautiful renders and characters are going downhill because the developer is relying on lazy, simplistic plot devices just for the sake of simplicity. With good writing, deeper characters, and more interesting motivations (instead of the obsession with big dicks), this game could have been a trending hit.
Well, nothing is stopping you from making that game. Sounds like it will be a trending hit as well. I will give it a try too!
 
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DeemLeem12

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Not fan of the use of AI. The render quality is so low. It's also so out of place. I'm not asking for full length animations, but images that show movement is enough, kind of like a powerpoint where there are multiple images to convey one movement to another. It doesn't have to be a high quality animation where there are a lot of images used in a short period of time.
 

Rahveryn

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NTR is generally incoherent unless the 'victim' of it has negative character traits. I'm not sure what you people are even asking for, a great or normal guy that is passed over for other men for no reason? Or netorase, which is just a different genre.

It has to happen for a reason, and short of blackmail or rape, it's going to be main characters personal failings. It's how the genre functions. It'd be sort of like complaining that an MC in a harem game is unrealistically charismatic or has too many positive traits.. How else is he going to create a harem.
That depends. I'm into and subbing this project because there is a promise of a solid MC that gets some. I'm not a fan of MC humiliation. And you glossed over alot of options for losing the FMC. It still depends on how the creators want to tell their NTR story. Personally, I'm all for the FMC getting railed by half the town, I'm finding myself drawn to Stag Content within this genre. I'm here for porn as well as story. Celes is a hot model. I'm really hoping The MC is s solid dude who is will find reasons to also spread it around. Double NTR. But also team up as a unit to deal with the Story plots. The Iskei fantasy elements have me hooked as well. Tell a good story, have all the girls getting railed freely by all the cocks in town, including he MC, Option some heroic shit, maybe some revenge. We'll see how many of my itches this story scratches.

Side note: Welcome Back Inkshade!! Glad I checked on this one today. Is your Editor still working with you?
 
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