VN Ren'Py Eternum [v0.8.5 Public] [Caribdis]

[MAGO-DAG]

If Cari is going to link Chop-Chop to Chang, then the better twist would be to have them as father and son. Chop-Chop did say he's working to pay for his son's college.

Are you trying to give our caveman Ungawa a heart attack with another cliffhanger?

 

[JLucci]

Yeah but that son later dropped out of college so...definitely not Chang.

Ah, forgot about that line. Too bad. I would have loved it to see Chang finally get to "play" Eternum, only to run into his father who then immediately puts him to work in his shop.

 

[Finuee]

EX-President. His term's already done, buddy.

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True! I gladly stand corrected.

 

[The.World.According.To.Me]

Just curious... am I the only one who would like to see Eva more. Maybe bump into Orion in town, get to talking and become of the group? She looked good in western wear (and of course naked in the beginning)

Also running into her in town? You do realize she could technically live anywhere in the world, right? Having her by chance also live in Kredon which isn't even supposed to be that large to begin with, would be awkward. Sure, Cari could write it that way, but it would feel pretty contrived in my opinion.

Yep, you're quite right about the different structure. And Eve obviously was there at the beginning so there could be a sex scene when none of the main cast could have one without it being contrived.

I'm not even saying I'd want Eve to join the cast. Just that the argument that Cari has had secondary characters join the "harem" before has some merit to it.

But yeah, there's way more central characters this time around, so I agree it's probably not gonna happen.

Sigh.... damn, some ya'll need to add "Dream Killer" to your signature bar.

Some of those replies came in fast too. I mean it's not like Eva is in my Top 5 girls and as long as I have Nova (& Annie) life is good still, but...

...It's not like I asked for there to be pineapple on your pizza or something like that.

 

[Takkatakka]

True! I gladly stand corrected.

I mean...technically even a former President is often still called President...

So "President Stabb" is not wrong.

 

[Dorfnutter]

I mean...technically even a former President is often still called President...

So "President Stabb" is not wrong.

I mean sure, but it still gives the false impression that he's currently active when he's out there somewhere prolly continuing his vigilante work (or enjoying his retirement).

 

[walker188]

I mean...theoretically maybe, but both Eternum and OiaL are structured very differently. OiaL hat basically two main LIs (Judie and Lauren) and various secondary LIs, some of which contributed almost nothing to the actual plot. In Eternum all the girls are main LIs with the only special case being Calypso. But all the girls know each other and all had and have their roles during vital plot points and story parts.

Eva was originally just a reminder to the player, that Eternum indeed is a porn VN.

And the point still stands, that it will be reasonably difficult to write the harem as is in a believable way, never mind adding another girl to the bunch that the others don't even know. It would make look Orion even worse. Even if the main LIs are all okay with being part of a harem, him having yet ANOTHER girl on the side? Nah...

If we're taking votes on who to add as LIs then THERE CAN BE ONLY ONE! Say it with me now!

Wenlin Wenlin Wenlin Wenlin Wenlin Wenlin

There can be no other.

Also, as an aside. Orion is a bit of an admitted pervert and a filthy scumbag, so him cheating on a partner or even cheating on an entire harem would fit and/or only add to the sexyness of those of us who enjoy such content.

 

[Takkatakka]

Also, as an aside. Orion is a bit of an admitted pervert and a filthy scumbag, so him cheating on a partner or even cheating on an entire harem would fit and/or only add to the sexyness of those of us who enjoy such content.

By now part of the story seems to be (or to become) why that wouldn't fit to his character anymore. Honestly I'm not sure it would fit his character right now, to be honest...

 

[Dorfnutter]

Also, as an aside. Orion is a bit of an admitted pervert and a filthy scumbag, so him cheating on a partner or even cheating on an entire harem would fit and/or only add to the sexyness of those of us who enjoy such content.

Early Orion, sure. Now? Right after his hubris made him bleed out in a dark alleyway and he's being prepped for his humility/redemption arc?

Doubt. Big fucking doubt.

 

[KanyeT]

Do we think the Polyjuice Potion will be used for the plot, or will it be used to unlock an extra spicy scene with one of the LIs?

I also hope we see more lewdness with Wenlin. I don't need a full scene or her to become a LI, but just some nice nudity and flirting in the future would hit the spot.

 

[sexypeanut]

Do we think the Polyjuice Potion will be used for the plot, or will it be used to unlock an extra spicy scene with one of the LIs?

I also hope we see more lewdness with Wenlin. I don't need a full scene or her to become a LI, but just some nice nudity and flirting in the future would hit the spot.

I've paid almost 1000 eternals for it, so I fucking hope it will!

 

[Dorfnutter]

Do we think the Polyjuice Potion will be used for the plot, or will it be used to unlock an extra spicy scene with one of the LIs?

I also hope we see more lewdness with Wenlin. I don't need a full scene or her to become a LI, but just some nice nudity and flirting in the future would hit the spot.

With how much build-up the Polyjuice has as an item (I mean we placed an order for it as far back as 0.4) it's highly likely that it's going to be story-related.

 

[e6mill]

Do we think the Polyjuice Potion will be used for the plot, or will it be used to unlock an extra spicy scene with one of the LIs?

I'm not brave enough to ask a girl if she'll be a different girl so we can bone. That just sounds hazardous.
I can imagine some less straightforward uses for it though.

 

[Skep-tiker]

I'm not brave enough to ask a girl if she'll be a different girl so we can bone. That just sounds hazardous.
I can imagine some less straightforward uses for it though.

So no Mikaela scene?

 

[Dorfnutter]

So no Mikaela scene?

Likely no unless Cari adds a scene where Orion walks in on Chang and her doing the snu snu.

 

[Finuee]

I mean sure, but it still gives the false impression that he's currently active when he's out there somewhere prolly continuing his vigilante work (or enjoying his retirement).

Or running another cartel. Or creating a cult around himself. Or who knows what! The man has no limit!!

I'm not brave enough to ask a girl if she'll be a different girl so we can bone. That just sounds hazardous.
I can imagine some less straightforward uses for it though.

I'm thinking it's gonna be Orion who's going to be drinking the potion when the time comes around to using it...

 

[Ashira13]

Or running another cartel. Or creating a cult around himself. Or who knows what! The man has no limit!!


I'm thinking it's gonna be Orion who's going to be drinking the potion when the time comes around to using it...

yup, Orion will get his first female experience

 

[Finuee]

Sigh.... damn, some ya'll need to add "Dream Killer" to your signature bar.

Some of those replies came in fast too. I mean it's not like Eva is in my Top 5 girls and as long as I have Nova (& Annie) life is good still, but...

...It's not like I asked for there to be pineapple on your pizza or something like that.

Only playing the guessing game here.

I'm now curious, who would you want to be promoted to main LI from the secondary characters' cast?

 

[Finuee]

yup, Orion will get his first female experience

Now, that would be something really fun to watch!

 

[Skep-tiker]

Orion x Chang, taking Changs V Card?