Eternum [v0.8.6] Incest Mod

[BlueArrow]

I knew this question would come up eventually, but to this day I haven't found a satisfactory answer. But yes, I think Annie and Mc are twins in this case.

Replayed again with the 0.11.3c update (latest one?) over the weekend to see what changed. Cool to see you've implemented the Annie twin idea! That can actually work out, played further last time and at the restaurant date they do mention having birthdays close to each other; with a bit of rewriting it can made into the same birthday.


Back to my 11.3c rerun, noticed things got fixed but still saw a number of errors so I noted them down. Had too many screenshots so had to split into two posts. This first part goes over the simpler spelling and grammar typos.

Keep in mind I am playing with the Annie sister option so some if not most of these lines might only apply to that. This is up to the end of v0.4, after the meeting the founder at the Mansion.

Spoiler: typos/grammar part 1

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[BlueArrow]

Back to my 11.3c rerun, noticed things got fixed but still saw a number of errors so I noted them down. Had too many screenshots so had to split into two posts. This first part goes over the simpler spelling and grammar typos.

Spoiler: typos/grammar part 2

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Second art with the more story/writing-related issues and some suggestions. Again, since I'm playing with the Annie sister option most of these suggestions are for that.

Spoiler: Writing/suggestions

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I'll continue playing and taking notes later if you're okay with that. Sorry if it's a lot, since it seems you're still actively working on this. I'd love to help by ironing out some of these myself but I don't how the coding works. And thanks for making this mod in the first place!

 

[Lucifer_W]

Thanks a bunch I allways need Ideas and help proofreading dislexia man and I am not native Eglish so pleases if you find something tell me.

Also the changes you sugested where Implementet in the new patch .

 

[GreggoryLove]

I'll continue playing and taking notes later if you're okay with that. Sorry if it's a lot, since it seems you're still actively working on this. I'd love to help by ironing out some of these myself but I don't how the coding works. And thanks for making this mod in the first place!

I just wanted to say that you are amazing BlueArrow. You spent a lot of time and energy to help Lucifer with this project. Just wanted to let you know that your help on this is appreciated. Thanks bud!

 

[lesnO56]

I'm also one of those who thinks that the Ethernum would be hotter if Nancy and her daughters were Orion's mother and sisters.

The question about this mod is, does it just change "Nancy" to "Mom" and her daughters to "sisters"?
I hope there is some kind of change in the dialogues as well?

 

[Lucifer_W]

I'm also one of those who thinks that the Ethernum would be hotter if Nancy and her daughters were Orion's mother and sisters.

The question about this mod is, does it just change "Nancy" to "Mom" and her daughters to "sisters"?
I hope there is some kind of change in the dialogues as well?

I even made some changes to the pictuars shown while the dialog plays so I made a big efford.

 

[BlueArrow]

Thanks a bunch I allways need Ideas and help proofreading dislexia man and I am not native Eglish so pleases if you find something tell me.

Also the changes you sugested where Implementet in the new patch .

Glad to to help! I've downloaded to the new patch so I'll be using that for the rest of the chapters.

I just wanted to say that you are amazing BlueArrow. You spent a lot of time and energy to help Lucifer with this project. Just wanted to let you know that your help on this is appreciated. Thanks bud!

Thanks! As an incest and Eternum fan this mod is a godsend (or devilsend coming from Lucifer lol) so I want to help it be as great as possible!

 

[Xxavlt]

Hey there is a mistake at towards the start of the game during the photoshoot with Penelope , she say "and besides, what would MY mom say if she saw me posting those pictures? "
With the mod isn't Nancy supposed to be the mother of both of them ?
Anyway thx for the mod godd work

 

[Xxavlt]

Hey there is a mistake at towards the start of the game during the photoshoot with Penelope , she say "and besides, what would MY mom say if she saw me posting those pictures? "
With the mod isn't Nancy supposed to be the mother of both of them ?
Anyway thx for the mod godd work

And just at the end of the photoshoot when nora appeared she say " I was wondering why Nancy and her you shared the same last name in your follower list. Nancy is your mom !"
I think it would be better if spelled " Nancy, you and her "
( If I find more while I Replay the game I will post them later when I finish the game all in one for the sake of efficiency
( And just in case do not take my word for granted I may be saying dog shit because English is not my first language, I'm french)

 

[nogger]

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[nogger]

i collected a few more but i forgot to save the draft, sorry
i'll try and collect all the errors i can find throughout my gameplay so that this mod can be perfect
really do love the work you've done with the mod, and understand how hard it can be for someone with dyslexia going through a bunch of text but you, bluearrow, and all the other degens who are helping make this mod the best it can be are doing an amazing job
i'll be editing the message above with any errors i find during my playthrough and will try to use the right punctuation just so you can save some time by copying my messages