I agree with the observation that this now appears rushed. Eilayda was unaccustomed to sex and approached it cautiously at first, relishing the details of each encounter to see what humans saw in it and slowly discovering what she found rewarding in it.
All of a sudden she decides it's all great and now anything goes. I understand the developer wants to end it but there's more I'd like to see, such as adding anal and vaginal sex with the molesters on the street and especially with the audience at the dance club.

I wanted her to keep that superior demeanor but if you're going down the road to depravity, you might as well go all the way. It would be great to see the potion seller and apple seller get some before the game ends, but I don't see a placeholder for it in the remembrance room.