VN Ren'Py Etlina's Principle [v0.03 Bugfix] [PipPoad]

[PipPoad]

Nice update! I like it!
Only real critique I have is that Clara and the commander we meet are a bit different in design compared to the rest of the people/environment and it's a bit uncanny.

Beyond that I wholly agree with focusing on just two routes.
I hope we get another update soon!

Thanks, I'll do my best to make sure it doesn't take more than a year again!
It would be interesting to know what exactly makes them uncanny.

 

[PipPoad]

Do you think to add a harem or we'll have to chose one and only in the end?

Heya. Thanks for the feedback, really appreciate it!
Well, the harem path is quite possible with the Nox side - if I can implement a “base” or “house” system, the player could live in something like a "nest" where loyal hybrids and infected could live.
"One and only" suits mostly for the Another's paths with the human girls because if you'll choose this route to revert Nox... Let's just say that not all hybrids could survive it.

And if we chose Solider and Another sides, we'll have to fight this cute girl from Corporation?

It's pretty likely, but it may not happen for a while yet. For now, UMF and FerTec's goals are the same, so the player may well meet Masami later on for some sort of mission together. But with that choice, she'll be extremely unfriendly.

 

[Niuul]

Heya. Thanks for the feedback, really appreciate it!
Well, the harem path is quite possible with the Nox side - if I can implement a “base” or “house” system, the player could live in something like a "nest" where loyal hybrids and infected could live.
"One and only" suits mostly for the Another's paths with the human girls because if you'll choose this route to revert Nox... Let's just say that not all hybrids could survive it.

It's pretty likely, but it may not happen for a while yet. For now, UMF and FerTec's goals are the same, so the player may well meet Masami later on for some sort of mission together. But with that choice, she'll be extremely unfriendly.

Just be careful with scope creep and how many diverging paths (renders) that might create. Especially with harem type stuff, normally it's all or nothing. Few games come to mind where the dev even added pregnancy and it could be different for each LI. Turned 1 render in to a ton because it had to account for each combination of LI being pregnant or not anytime they were in a scene together..

 

[RandomGuy99]

Heya. Thanks for the feedback, really appreciate it!
Well, the harem path is quite possible with the Nox side - if I can implement a “base” or “house” system, the player could live in something like a "nest" where loyal hybrids and infected could live.
"One and only" suits mostly for the Another's paths with the human girls because if you'll choose this route to revert Nox... Let's just say that not all hybrids could survive it.

It's pretty likely, but it may not happen for a while yet. For now, UMF and FerTec's goals are the same, so the player may well meet Masami later on for some sort of mission together. But with that choice, she'll be extremely unfriendly.

Gives us the satisfaction of having Masami as LI

 

[Ergonyashka]

it is impossible to play, an error occurs after each sentence

 

[hentai.galaxy]

I originally planned to make 3 paths - human (Nox should be destroyed completely, no hybrid love interests and maximum human love interests), neutral aka Another's path (some hybrids and human love interests) and Nox aka Siena's (no human love interests, lots of hybrid love interests with the ability to “convert” them toyur side)
After a survey of people, it turned out that few people will choose the human way, so now I will give up on it for now because I certainly do not have resoures and time to make 3 full-fledged root.
So, conder Anotrer's path as neutral.

Good call, I rather see polished game with fewer paths, than a big game which takes years to complete. You can always come back and create another game later. Good work so far.

 

[PipPoad]

it is impossible to play, an error occurs after each sentence

Try official build from Boosty or Patreon

 

[goulet1995]

Heya. Thanks for the feedback, really appreciate it!
Well, the harem path is quite possible with the Nox side - if I can implement a “base” or “house” system, the player could live in something like a "nest" where loyal hybrids and infected could live.
"One and only" suits mostly for the Another's paths with the human girls because if you'll choose this route to revert Nox... Let's just say that not all hybrids could survive it.

It's pretty likely, but it may not happen for a while yet. For now, UMF and FerTec's goals are the same, so the player may well meet Masami later on for some sort of mission together. But with that choice, she'll be extremely unfriendly.

so harem would only be an option if you do a full nox route but not the neutral you talked about in previous post?