Since I don't know where you've gotten to, try opening the quest box in the top right corner and clicking on Isabella's icon for guidance!
This is the staff entrance to "Gray Hole." You need to do Lucas's quest first so he can introduce you before it unlocks.
It might just be a display error. Check if you have received the note in your inventory, then head to "Gray Hole" to start working there
If you get the message (update), it means this version is complete. Please wait for the next version.
You need to raise your mood by eating something sweet from the icecream dealer. You can stack groceries
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Dear timephu,
I like your game overall, but . . . there are a few things that could make it much, much better.
Some suggestions ...
Many people are confused by the quest instructions.
For example, "continue to receive entrustment" has no meaning in English. After lots of frustration, I now understand that you mean "continue to do small jobs on the post board at the company for this character."
In the maze, "skip Vipers" doesn't mean what you think it does. Instead, you mean, "go magically to the Vipers." Same with the toy shop: "go magically to the toy shop."
Also, for Jimmy, when he is sitting in the bar, you should write in quests: "Continue to work as a waitress for Olivia. And wait until she says . . . (whatever she says)." Also, explain how you can begin to work as a waitress by going to the post jobs board at the company. Normally, you'd get a job by talking to Olivia, but not here! So, this should be explained!
There are many more confusing quest instructions. Almost all of them are confusing.
Without the guidance available from you and from players here on f95zone, I would have never figured out this giant and confusing puzzle. Only people who like frustrating puzzles will play your game, unless you make the quest directions clearer.
Also, please allow the player to sleep for eight hours, or at least not have to put sleep clothes on a second time to sleep for another four hours!
Although your game right now is frustrating, I'm glad I played as far as I did because it's genius to have
And there are other excellent details in your story. You have created an interesting world.
The problem is ... too many clicks to do anything. Too many returns to the home to change clothes. Too many clicks to sleep. Too many clicks to work. Building the first room in the apartment building was tedious, but not too bad; building a second room was tedious tedious tedious.
I don't regret playing your game. But . . . it has these frustrating problems.
It seems to me that you have an excellent game inside this game, a game that could exist if you made adjustments.
Adjustments to the quest instructions (such as the changes I'm recommending above).
Adjustments to the number of clicks required to sleep, to work, to set up the apartment rooms, to put on clothes.
Adjustments to knowing where things are (player must guess that there's a shower in the bar that must be entered to get her clothes back! .... player can't easily find the ice cream store .... player can't easily find the entrance to the slum . . . )
Every time someone posts a question about this game on f95zone . . . that is proof that one of your players is so confused and frustrated that he doesn't know what else to do, thinks there must be a bug, and is about to stop playing without help.
There are many, many good scenes in your game. But triggering them . . . is a problem. And navigating to them . . . is too tedious right now for many of your players.
All my best to you. If you make adjustments, your game will be much more fun.
I like your game overall, but . . . there are a few things that could make it much, much better.
Some suggestions ...
Many people are confused by the quest instructions.
For example, "continue to receive entrustment" has no meaning in English. After lots of frustration, I now understand that you mean "continue to do small jobs on the post board at the company for this character."
In the maze, "skip Vipers" doesn't mean what you think it does. Instead, you mean, "go magically to the Vipers." Same with the toy shop: "go magically to the toy shop."
Also, for Jimmy, when he is sitting in the bar, you should write in quests: "Continue to work as a waitress for Olivia. And wait until she says . . . (whatever she says)." Also, explain how you can begin to work as a waitress by going to the post jobs board at the company. Normally, you'd get a job by talking to Olivia, but not here! So, this should be explained!
There are many more confusing quest instructions. Almost all of them are confusing.
Without the guidance available from you and from players here on f95zone, I would have never figured out this giant and confusing puzzle. Only people who like frustrating puzzles will play your game, unless you make the quest directions clearer.
Also, please allow the player to sleep for eight hours, or at least not have to put sleep clothes on a second time to sleep for another four hours!
Although your game right now is frustrating, I'm glad I played as far as I did because it's genius to have
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And there are other excellent details in your story. You have created an interesting world.
The problem is ... too many clicks to do anything. Too many returns to the home to change clothes. Too many clicks to sleep. Too many clicks to work. Building the first room in the apartment building was tedious, but not too bad; building a second room was tedious tedious tedious.
I don't regret playing your game. But . . . it has these frustrating problems.
It seems to me that you have an excellent game inside this game, a game that could exist if you made adjustments.
Adjustments to the quest instructions (such as the changes I'm recommending above).
Adjustments to the number of clicks required to sleep, to work, to set up the apartment rooms, to put on clothes.
Adjustments to knowing where things are (player must guess that there's a shower in the bar that must be entered to get her clothes back! .... player can't easily find the ice cream store .... player can't easily find the entrance to the slum . . . )
Every time someone posts a question about this game on f95zone . . . that is proof that one of your players is so confused and frustrated that he doesn't know what else to do, thinks there must be a bug, and is about to stop playing without help.
There are many, many good scenes in your game. But triggering them . . . is a problem. And navigating to them . . . is too tedious right now for many of your players.
All my best to you. If you make adjustments, your game will be much more fun.
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"Need update" isn't clear.
Instead try "finished for this character until next update."
Or write what you wrote here: "Please wait for the next update."
Thank you so much for playing the game and for your detailed feedback! I’m currently reworking all the images and mechanics from previous versions in version 0.4. I’ve also streamlined some quests to speed up progress and will be making additional adjustments based on your suggestions.
I’m also working on improving quest instructions to make them clearer and avoid confusion. Regarding the frequent outfit changes, I understand that it might feel inconvenient, but I can’t change this because the character can’t change clothes outdoors. This is to maintain logic and prevent issues with future outdoor events.
As for the house, I intentionally made it simple for now so that I can later add a house customization feature, similar to Michael’s quest.
Additionally, I can’t reveal too much about the game’s future beyond bug fixes at the moment, as I’m not sure if I’ll be able to implement all the planned features.
Lastly, thanks again!
I just checked on her quest, it says to meet her in club room 3 at 13-16, but whenever I go to that room it just gives me the same message, and checking everyone else gives me "None, Need Update, Next Update"
Maybe I forgot to add a note about that. Try excitation 10, and if you need to reach excitation 10, just wear the vibrating egg (obtained from Michael's quest) and move around or skip gradually to increase it. (You can remove it during this quest if you don’t like it.)
Yes, it's no different at all.
The public version will be updated in about a month or longer, depending on the release schedule of the paid versions.
The beach photo quest can only be done once at the moment, I will continue once I edit the images and some other things.
