Sounds like the author slipped by rushing the story. Gotta tease and build up as the focus cuz it's all about how good she edge you with the story. Sex scenes are never good in these its always how good of a context you can write.
packard1928
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I like everything you did. I love the NTR and swapping genre the most. You have not got to swapping yet. I think your art is top notch. If you did not like the progression in this release..... I agree with the above comment. you are way to hard on yourself. It flowed on all paths. Maybe there were some Things that did not fit... but you are not writing for a Pulitzer Prize. It is a Porn Game. What most want in the end is to see a hot lady get busy with someone to satisfy our own fetishes. This is still light in the writing ( Fun) . Do not go down the dark path please. I think the timeline of the release is perfect. 5 /6 weeks. We get something we love to see and you gain more exposure. Understand the you took needed time off with you family and did other thing . I hope this is kinda a hobby for you ...so please do not go off on yourself trying to please all on the thread. It can not happen. You do you and always...always put your need first ( Family and other stuff). We (most )understand that. Again, Job well do in my opinion.
MixQQ
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cmon dev. Don't be discourage by 2-3 bad reviews or few comments. You are not a newbie in this avn industry. What matter most - you have almost 400 paid members, very good numbers if you ask me.
The only problem i have in this update is 3some scene, she go all the way in other paths, so why not here?
and it's fucking great this game is not another endless teasing slow burn garbage. Now.. she break that "barrier" and did that with someone, who is not her hubby, you can fully focus on good lewd scenarios and amazing sex scenes
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I for once, was glad it wasn't year upon year of blueballing which seems to be the norm in many games recently. Develop the story from here instead, it has so many interesting ways to go and still far above average, Don't give up Dev.
redoubt27
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You'll never meet everyone's preferences, especially in an "NTR" game...
Dust yourself off, take your time, focus, and get ready for the next at bat/update.
Despite other criticisms...
- The faithful/monogamous path is pretty solid, consistent. And of course, in an "NTR" story, likely to be the most "boring/vanilla" in comparison. This one is on track and going well.
- Cheating is not my "thing", but this one is pretty good. Pacing is ok, difficult to get exactly right as some like "slow burn" while others want to get right into the action... This one seems right in between. It's certainly a different perspective on how, why some women are seduced into cheating, but honestly, this isn't that far off from what can happen in reality. The "setting" is a bit forced, and the timing a little rushed, but all that has to be condensed. The "motivation" for the wife, dead on. She's doing it because she wants to, she's excited, she's chasing a thrill, even though she's married to a good, solid guy that she loves. Some women absolutely do this, even though it doesn't make sense, and it really doesn't have to... She only cheats if the reader allows it...lol
- The "sharing" paths are really good. My favorite stories are Lost in Paradise (the "bull" route wins...lol) with Permission a very close 2nd. This one feels like an "expanded" Permission... Husband and wife are exploring, playing with this fantasy, and the circumstances allow for it to happen for real. Even without animations, these paths, scenes, text/dialogue, and the subtle variations are smoking hot...
Overall, solid update and story. Could it be better? Sure. But certainly not a strike out or a "low effort" worthy of throwing in the towel. As another comment stated, it's still "in development"... So, there's still an opportunity to improve anything that you feel warrants the effort.
I would be interested to see your attempt in another genre. But as far as "NTR/S" goes, you've made some gems, this is/will be another. Each story has done something a bit different, shown the varying aspects of the genre from different perspectives.
I think the "negative" criticism is the result of your previous work, and people have developed very high expectations (or tolerances)...
Some are like drug addicts, looking for the next big "rush" or "high" to surpass the previous. And while this one is solidly good, so far, it's not exceeding the "high" they've felt previously...
Phat Tiger
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Nice update, it's finally getting to the good stuff
NewTricks
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Not every update is going to be a hit, but that is no reason to be so discouraged. This was probably the most important update and since so many routes were served it is probably best to measure the success of the update in the number of people that walked away unhappy. Because it is the finished product that is meant to make everybody happy and for a single update it is probably a sign that the narrative is well balanced if everybody walks away unsatisfied. A project like this is a marathon, not a sprint, and just because you stepped on the gas to speed things up this time doesn't mean you need to rush anything going forward.
Hey Dimajio 333. You definitely shouldn't change genres, as you are a master in this one. Mistakes or inaccuracies always happen and I don't think anyone in your fan base will hold that against you. I know the pressure is high, everyone expects you to provide a perfect and quick update and unfortunately there are also reviews from people that aren't so good just because they don't see what they want to see in the update. But that usually has little to do with the quality of the game. So don't let it demoralize you and carry on like this, your fan base is growing and that is the best encouragement for your work.
The downside of non-Asian NTR games is that when choosing a player, they are actually just asking "do you want your girlfriend to fuck another man?" This immediately puts the game in the netorase realm. But the netorare route shouldn't be interested in the player's opinion, women cheat because THEY want to, not their boyfriends.
Congrats to the developer for regular and fast updates!
elbro
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Everything you have said only inspires me more confidence in your work, we all know that it is a work in progress so there may be certain problems, but the fact that you show that you care about doing better is very good.
Puma1978
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Me i cant complain about this update ...its still better than several other games of this genre..the complaints are really on a high level but i would suggest if yourself think that improvement is needed you can improve and add or updated some dialogues and scenes in a later release. And if the game is getting too big and too complex just take your time and maybe let people test it before release it officially on patreon. There are thousands of Devs who have much a longer time between updates than you and cant match your quality. Even their game is by far not as complex. You are doing a great Job here and folks here also like your work.
KarokaKOHORT
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...there is cheating in this game? Where?
Tbc, the game is very good as male protag's angle and Patrick's fall into (or not) cuckolding theme. It's well written, with good graphics and more importantly good shot selections, interesting version of corrupting meter. The only aspect where it doesn't deliver is in the female protag department - there isn't one. There's a toggle for her pov, but it's Patrick who fully controls her actions in each day and has all the agency. So unless it's some un-obvious pathing that I'm missing, it's just this site's misleading tag being an issue, nothing else really.
Filipis
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Nah man, the update was good, the game is still great - but this update showed the clear symptoms of rushing to complete & include content. You are the master of the NTR/NTS genre, so don't doubt your skills in regards to those - you know what they say: "happens to the best of us".
If what others say is true, and this was always intended to be a shorter project, then having 4 different routes was a bit ambitious, as well as dangerous - satisfying so many routes on such a short schedule was bound to cause a 'leak' somewhere, and the cheating/sharing route suffered the most. Things simply escalated too fast, with Emma deciding to cheat in the next room to the MC (cheating usually starts further away from the spouse/partner), and each path only got a few renders to look at (the anticipated action ended too fast for it to have "weight" as the next step in their relationships).
For me, this update is still a solid 7/10, so nothing to be embarrassed about; just lessons to learn.
Don't give up on us yet, Dimajio333 !
I think you are being too harsh to yourself, everyone makes mistakes (I don't even know if this one counts as a mistake) but just learn from it and move on. I think you should focus on just NTS part of your game which I think you execute the best out of all other branches. There are plenty of cheating bull shit, what makes you different IMO is your talent while scripting NTS.
Focus on your strength, reduce the branches so that updates will have more content in only one branch and move on!
I really like your communication with your audience please keep it up <3
xcalibar4
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Firstly, I though last update told us if Emma's corruption meter goes beyond red zone it won't come down or something. But in this update it goes down to pale red zone bottom if I choose to cockblock Martin too much. So I guess the corruption bar doesn't have that much impact in this update, Right?
So, Here's all the scenes that I found in this update, please let me know if I missed any:
Also I noticed other than pure route Emma is more into Martin, like in Share Route She couldn't tell if Patrick Climaxed or not but had an Orgasm the moment Martin blow in her mouth.
Though I enjoyed Ep 04 but to me Ep 03 was great because dialogues and scenes changed depending on choice and Emma's Corruption level.
So, Here's all the scenes that I found in this update, please let me know if I missed any:
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Also I noticed other than pure route Emma is more into Martin, like in Share Route She couldn't tell if Patrick Climaxed or not but had an Orgasm the moment Martin blow in her mouth.
Though I enjoyed Ep 04 but to me Ep 03 was great because dialogues and scenes changed depending on choice and Emma's Corruption level.