Unity Abandoned Exposed and Loving It [v0.1.01 Free] [Hat Jump]

[Revo]

Before anybody say something, I DON'T mean to be rude towards the dev.
1. this is just me practicing my art.
2. I noticed a couple of things from the original art that make me confused such as the floating hand, and the arm being across the body
3.... I didn't play this game I just copy the screenshots that were posted on the previews lol
4. good luck to the dev

 

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Before anybody say something, I DON'T mean to be rude towards the dev.
1. this is just me practicing my art.
2. I noticed a couple of things from the original art that make me confused such as the floating hand, and the arm being across the body
3.... I didn't play this game I just copy the screenshots that were posted on the previews lol
4. good luck to the dev

Thanks for pointing out this confusion.
First of all, I haven't seen anyone recreating my work before, so this is pretty cool!
Here's a look at my reference:

It's sort of an unusual pose with the front arm. I guess if the end result is confusing then maybe I should change it up. As for the back arm, you're right, it'll look better if you can see some of that arm. I'll put it on my to do list and hopefully work on it for a future update.
Thanks for engaging with my work! I'm a fairly new dev and have been getting better over the past few months but I have a lot of room for growth. Feedback helps me get better

 

[Revo]

Thanks for pointing out this confusion.
First of all, I haven't seen anyone recreating my work before, so this is pretty cool!
Here's a look at my reference:
View attachment 1651775
It's sort of an unusual pose with the front arm. I guess if the end result is confusing then maybe I should change it up. As for the back arm, you're right, it'll look better if you can see some of that arm. I'll put it on my to do list and hopefully work on it for a future update.
Thanks for engaging with my work! I'm a fairly new dev and have been getting better over the past few months but I have a lot of room for growth. Feedback helps me get better

that's her hand above her ass, not another cheek lol
Also, I probably recommend adding some background and maybe objects (bed, tables and whatnot) in order to know how things are being "handle" since I assumed that the preview image was in the middle of a bed, my bad on that one

 

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that's her hand above her ass, not another cheek lol
Also, I probably recommend adding some background and maybe objects (bed, tables and whatnot) in order to know how things are being "handle" since I assumed that the preview image was in the middle of a bed, my bad on that one

I guess I get carried away exaggerating my art assets sometimes Thanks for the advice!

 

[Revo]

I guess I get carried away exaggerating my art assets sometimes Thanks for the advice!

is all bueno, I'll be honest I'm not a patreon, so you can take my opinion with a grain of salt or just completely ignore it since some devs do that to their non patreon supporters. Either way, good luck with the game.

 

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is all bueno, I'll be honest I'm not a patreon, so you can take my opinion with a grain of salt or just completely ignore it since some devs do that to their non patreon supporters. Either way, good luck with the game.

Thanks! Since I'm trying to get better, I appreciate feedback from anybody willing to take the time to give it

 

[Naila]

The game that is linked here to itch is now a completely different one. It also has a different name.

I played it yesterday. Halfway through the story, you turn into a woman, you can take part in a golf tournament... I briefly considered whether I should post the game here, but it seems to have been abandoned for 2 years, which is a shame because it was really funny.

 

[Imisx]

The game that is linked here to itch is now a completely different one. It also has a different name.

I played it yesterday. Halfway through the story, you turn into a woman, you can take part in a golf tournament... I briefly considered whether I should post the game here, but it seems to have been abandoned for 2 years, which is a shame because it was really funny.

The dev said it's the same with a different name, actually.