VN Ren'Py Extra Credit [v0.9b] [Abere Lucifer]

[Son of Durin]

Thanks for releasing the alpha on Itch. I downloaded and played this evening.

Two points of feedback:

1) It was cruel to talk about Abere's towel dropping and not have the event in the game.

2) I think there's a bug with the Named Save toggle: I toggled named saves "On" and when I went to save, I got an error message. I was able to "Ignore" and save, but without naming. I also have the walk-through toggled "on". I doubt that would have any kind of interaction, but, who knows what will create strangeness. I've attached the traceback.

It was fun. The scripting of this AVN feels better developed than the other two (I also downloaded and played the updated CENSORED CENSORED CENSORED today - the gallery is working fine, now). Only saw a few little typos, but forgot to record them for feedback purposes - sorry. I remember a "her" that should have been a "here" and I think there was one other that was similar in nature with a "where/were" or something like that.

I look forward to the development as this goes forward.

 

[Son of Durin]

I did a history run through and found the two typos I remembered. Attached screen shots.

"screenshot0001", Niki's second line should be "where" instead of "here" (at the pier with the ghost).

"screenshot0002", April's "Does he live near her?" should be "Does he live near here?"

Otherwise, really clean!

 

[faradhii]

Damn you, why aren't you working on 23 sistes and.... I forget the name..... F shit, I guess I gotta download and play....

 

[Boobs Lover]

I'm still trying to find out how Abere and Niki both have video of me on that website when I don't have any camera's in my house.

You might want to ask Abere for a share of the money she's making off you on her website

They used drone to fly near your windows, probably Abere is selling what she recordered on onlyspies.com or faceb00k owner is buying that stuff

 

[Boobs Lover]

Thanks Doc for new update. As cheap bastard i have waited long for update

 

[Yandere Lover]

So Adopted? Guess I'll wait for an incest patch.

 

[Inve2]

So Adopted? Guess I'll wait for an incest patch.

Knowing the other games, you would be asking to yourself: "it is incest if the clone of a guy bangs the grandmother of that same guy, who she is also the alien clone of her own mother? And if the adopted daughter is also a clone of a clone of the same alien-demon-plant that bangs her own spouts?"



Can any incest patch solve those questions without destroying the fabric of our own reality? Is this post the sister of one I've seen on the discussion of another of this game? Aren't we all one big Family? You will not find answers, in the end you can only hope a giant Cock will not tear you apart with his massive, boulbous and beaked head.

 

[jstreet]

So Adopted? Guess I'll wait for an incest patch.

Doc already said MC's sister will show up at some point but Doc has to tow the line with his evil overload Patreon.

 

[Boobs Lover]

Doc already said MC's sister will show up at some point but Doc has to tow the line with his evil overload Patreon.

How you can remember most stuff told by Doc? Maybe you're Doc's clone or Grant's clone

 

[ImperialD]

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[jstreet]

How you can remember most stuff told by Doc? Maybe you're Doc's clone or Grant's clone

I keep notes of what the Dev's plan for the games like love to replay.

This reminds me I need to update the family tree for Mr.Mister's game Motherless.

 

[Abere Lucifer Productions]

Damn you, why aren't you working on 23 sistes and.... I forget the name..... F shit, I guess I gotta download and play....

I am working on those games. I just released the Alpha for 23S less than a week ago.

 

[jstreet]

I am working on those games. I just released the Alpha for 23S less than a week ago.

Doc he must be one of us Cheap Bastards who have to wait for you to be kind to us.

 

[Abere Lucifer Productions]

A 16 hour day isn't long, It's perfectly normal. I won't die of exhaustion.

 

[Abere Lucifer Productions]

the dialogues here are better than some of the games

Thanks. The other two are parodies and are purposely written bad to sound like a movie so bad it's funny. Extra Credit isn't a parody. It's supposed to sound kind of normal, but still use the Southern slang and bad English. We're working hard to write it better.

 

[jstreet]

A 16 hour day isn't long, It's perfectly normal. I won't die of exhaustion. View attachment 1943976

Doc if you have Niki waiting for you to drop from exhaustion lets push it to a 26 hour work days.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

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Work on your stamina.

 

[Abere Lucifer Productions]

I really wanna tell you who the new tomboy is. She'll make you love Abere even more.

 

[jstreet]

Doc you felt sorry for us cheap bastards so you released 2 Alpha earlyI see.

 

[Abere Lucifer Productions]

Doc you felt sorry for us cheap bastards so you released 2 Alpha really I see.

To be honest, a lot of times when games leak on sites that aren't F95 viruses are put in the games. I don't want my games to be associated with viruses and I don't want y'all to get a virus on your computer.