Opinions are opinions, it's ok to not agree with mine...
Overall it's pretty good but it has a fatal flaw... It's a porn game with basically no porn.
I don't mind text based porn games, this is in the same vane as Female Agent. Saying that this game play is better IMO. There feels to be slightly more options in this game... but the sex descriptions are LAZY. Saying you had sex isn't what people are here for. They want to read some erotica... and this does not do that. The sex scenes needs to be erotic... I want to feel something when they happen, passion if it's wanted... or hate if it's rape, but currently I feel nothing sense there are almost no erotica in the game.
Another grip is that for a blackmail game, I'm surprised that there is no rape... I actually like that they 3 nerds don't rape the main character, but why not in the video game??? It's slightly detached from reality. It feels weird that the avatar gets kidnapped by pirates who talks about gang banging the avatar and then they don't...
I also don't like the forced tattoos. You say it's not permanent but they are... It feels off. While I didn't mind most of the corruption, the 2nd tattoo feels forced and artificial. I personally would remove it if I had a vote. They easy way out is to say get a henna tattoo, so everyone understands that it will fade in a month. Saying stupid ohh real tattoos can be removed 100% is a lie and breaks immersion. No need to make additional fake technology when you can just do something simpler that makes sense to begin with.
TLDR: Number 1 thing is to rewrite ALL the sex scenes into being erotic. More sex is the VR world please, I get if you don't include rape but then don't put yourselves where it should happen but the writer chickens out. Ohh and redo the 2nd tattoo scene or remove it completely.
Overall 6/10 If the writer makes the sex scenes erotic then we are looking at 8/10 territory. That's pretty crazy rare on this site IMO but until then it's slightly above average at a 6.
Edit: To be fair, there are SOME good erotic scenes that I would describe as hot, but they are rare and even those best scenes feel like they could be better. Not once do any of the blowjob scenes describe what the guy tastes like... So it feels like a straight guy trying to describe sex from a female perspective and is missing things. Not horrible but if you want that 10/10 level the writing really needs to be more descriptive. Read the sex scenes from Good Girl Gone Bad or Red String, a step down but still pretty good is Female Agent.