VN Ren'Py Fake Father [Second v0.4 Full] [Netero3009]

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[bakaseye]

Too short for now, but story kinda funny and with potential. Will see after bunch of updates.

 

[don't censor it]

I've played a few games with a similar plot, but it doesn't hurt to try this one.

 

[Cirdon]

You're a very old man, your default age is 45, how old should you be?
*sigh*

 

[Cirdon]

Pretend to be me for at least 2 weeks so I can go settle this other business these guys were about to kill me for.

This is gonna be an interesting game.

 

[Cirdon]

netero3009 , you really need to work on your pronouns. Switching from having it right that "She just entered college, she's grumpy and ungrateful" to then referring to the middle daughter as he / him for the next passages.

 

[Before I Forget]

 

[netero3009]

You will be able to decide in the end whether the real father lives or not. Here we do not want to kill more dads.

 

[netero3009]

Engrish isn't horrid, but still needs a proof reader. Standard Spanish to English pronouns all over the place.

None of the characters presented, except maybe the maid, are likeable at all. IMO the dev went too far in making all of them complete cunts. Once you've seen the classroom scene, you've seen them all.

Given the choice, I'd be staying in the Beachfront apartment for the remainder of the game and hope the secretary is up to some extracurricular activities (if he hasn't made her a complete cunt as well).

I will keep it in mind. Reviews like this are what I need. Thanks. The employee is pretty because she is the 3d model of Anna de Armas.

 

[Sonico]

First we kill the dad, now we become the dad.... we are evolving.

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[KhaiFirst]

story is interesting... wish i found about this game 1year+

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

Ah, so we're playing "The Father in the Iron Mask". What's next? Schrödinger's father? He could be both dead and not dead!

 

[Gourdgone]

"You're a very old man.."

Ok

".. so your default age is 45."

... alright everybody, good luck and have fun while I go hang my old ass in the garage. Man, talk about starting the game with a gut punch.

Yeah "very old" at 45? What is this the middle ages?

 

[kaine3d]

"You're a very old man.."

Ok

".. so your default age is 45."

... alright everybody, good luck and have fun while I go hang my old ass in the garage. Man, talk about starting the game with a gut punch.

feel that shit. i'm old when i say i'm old damnit

 

[Xaninha]

i liked the story, remenber me of Rise of the shield hero, i hope the redemption will be good if the girls are this bitching on the start

 

[kawabonga]

Too short for now, but story kinda funny and with potential. Will see after bunch of updates.

Same for me...

 

[Green Rookie]

 

[neronwtf]

For a demo, is a landmine of game over.
Some of them don't make too much sense: So, for the dev, telling a daughter you love her is being a "coward", so is game over. Strange pov. Specially in this incestuous environment we are in.
A tip for netero3009, others pointed out your English, I will say the same for your Spanish. You don't use a single accent mark and sometimes you have to read again the sentence to fully comprehend the meaning.

 

[netero3009]

You should change the name to Payback, starting with the feminist who ended your career..
The daughter and future son-in-law and his secretary who adore him..of course..it's not too hard to find a snitch..
As already mentioned the choices (you lose) are very annoying.

Get inspired by the black heart games and (Help) your rich twin..and everyone around..
Apparently they deserve it.

I'm sorry for not understanding all the English, what is payback? I didn't understand you in that part.