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Miriada
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Follow your dreams man, NTR tastes best when you lead a satisfied life, like a bitter note on a great cup of tea. Yes we are a bunch of degenerates, but I wish for all of you all the health and happiness you can get.
Rest in peace Dean
I disagree, the writing is very good, her corruption, which is proud and pure, is happening in the most natural way possible, imagine if after she drinks, she gives herself completely to Vargas, that would lose all the fun and destroy the naturalness of the corruption, because she would give herself because she was drunk, and not by her own will, that would be disappointing. besides she drank a little, not a lot.
For me the positive point of the patch was
- the new clothing store, with each victory of Vargas and Luna over other enemies, he should throw a party and send Luna to buy new clothes, increasingly sensual for the sex scenes between them. She becomes more and more comfortable at the party and preferably with her conscience, without having drunk too much.
-Hocklan
Luna could save Vargas in a fight against Hocklan, and kill Hocklan, saving Vargas, improving their relationship, or Vargas could save Luna from Hocklan....
What I didn't like
- The scenes with Hailey and Nevin are unnecessary, no one wants to see their relationship, I feel like it's a waste of time and art, which could be used to add more scenes between Vargas and Luna.
- Luna should have cum in this chapter, it's about time for that to happen, the first kiss between the two should have happened in this patch too.
This chapter was very good, we made great progress, but Luna still hasn't cum, a great opportunity wasted here. In the next chapter, we can't expect anything less than a blowjob, or a kiss, and her first penetration with Vargas. If none of these 3 come, the chapter will be disappointing.
MioNTR
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This seems cool. Is it worth giving it a shot or will I end up blue balled like trying out 75% of the most recent updates?
PsychoKayron
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U and me both m8, I feel like this could be one of the best NTR games out there but the writing is a little bit weak, no consequences or whatsoever for the interactions with ntr hope it gets better.
The art looks pretty good, but what is up with the girl's mask? it looks so weird, it almost turned me off from trying this out.
DekuTheGooner69
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I understand, but the dialogue itself hinted that she is a bit drunk at the very least, but it seems completely gone after that, idk if she is pretending or something. My lightheadedness towards alcohol surely doesn't end in like 5mins.
I agree with everything else you wrote though.
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ShittyAccount23
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This game would benefit to having the fat cut off the text a bit. It's a bit too much sometimes.
An example of this is after installing the spying device, you speak with Nevin and he says the broadcast isn't working.
Eventually the FMC enters the room, leading you and Nevin to confess your spying plan.
If the FMC was smart (in which she is portrayed as being smart)
The second they say they planted a spying device, she should have acted angry, got them to give her information and mention where it was placed and then fake a call or say you forgot to get something or do something instead of just talking.
But instead the second she comes into the event, they talk for 87 messages until the alarm rings.
87 messages is crazy.
I know this is going to be a slow burn game but please don't burn us with a lot of pointlessly prolonged conversations.
What most people want in a slow burn game isn't walls and walls of infinite text before the first scene and/or in between scenes, but more a slower burn in h-events scale.
An example of this is: that in 1 day she does from hating x person to then getting all her holes filled by him happily.
Instead stay on some scene scales but you can still progress in them.
Example: First BJ: you get to the blowjob stage, she can give him a quick shitty blowjob and be angry the whole time.
Second BJ: she gives a better bj, some deepthroat and not as angry.
Third BJ: she gives him a bj, they get interrupted and she hides under the desk, she gives him a bj while he talks to people
That example can be applied to anything.
Titjobs? first=shitty, second=she actually moves her boobs, third=she also licks the tip and swallows.
(Also in case I wasn't really clear, I didn't mean to stuff all 3 bj's in the example above in the same day. Maybe spread it over a week or two but make the days go by faster. Which will lessen the speed that someone can be fully corrupted and not look like they fell in 5 mins.)
It's your game and you can do it however you want but please try not to have 87 back and forth messages that could be 6 instead.
I really like this game and the art style which is stupendous.
I am really hoping you can get this to be even more amazing.
An example of this is after installing the spying device, you speak with Nevin and he says the broadcast isn't working.
Eventually the FMC enters the room, leading you and Nevin to confess your spying plan.
If the FMC was smart (in which she is portrayed as being smart)
The second they say they planted a spying device, she should have acted angry, got them to give her information and mention where it was placed and then fake a call or say you forgot to get something or do something instead of just talking.
But instead the second she comes into the event, they talk for 87 messages until the alarm rings.
87 messages is crazy.
I know this is going to be a slow burn game but please don't burn us with a lot of pointlessly prolonged conversations.
What most people want in a slow burn game isn't walls and walls of infinite text before the first scene and/or in between scenes, but more a slower burn in h-events scale.
An example of this is: that in 1 day she does from hating x person to then getting all her holes filled by him happily.
Instead stay on some scene scales but you can still progress in them.
Example: First BJ: you get to the blowjob stage, she can give him a quick shitty blowjob and be angry the whole time.
Second BJ: she gives a better bj, some deepthroat and not as angry.
Third BJ: she gives him a bj, they get interrupted and she hides under the desk, she gives him a bj while he talks to people
That example can be applied to anything.
Titjobs? first=shitty, second=she actually moves her boobs, third=she also licks the tip and swallows.
(Also in case I wasn't really clear, I didn't mean to stuff all 3 bj's in the example above in the same day. Maybe spread it over a week or two but make the days go by faster. Which will lessen the speed that someone can be fully corrupted and not look like they fell in 5 mins.)
It's your game and you can do it however you want but please try not to have 87 back and forth messages that could be 6 instead.
I really like this game and the art style which is stupendous.
I am really hoping you can get this to be even more amazing.
Agreed. The slow burn on this game is basically artificial. Especially considering how the scenes escalate too quickly. Chapter 2 already has handjobs and Chapter 3 already has titfuck. Where is the groping and harassment?(yes I am aware of the groping but only a handful of it? He didn't even give her a proper breast massage yet.)
The only thing making the game slow is the long text. The escalation is fast but the rate of scenes is the one that is slow with huge texts in between.
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This game would benefit to having the fat cut off the
