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Zarkhy

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It's easier to delete the game from memory and wait until 0.15.0.
Where there will be a huge part and a walkthrough for at least 10 hours
Why would there be a walkthrough?

It's a visual novel with minor choices. TtP never got a walkthrough either.
 

NiktoAzure

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Why would there be a walkthrough?
This is not a walkthrough, but rather "the time of the game", so to speak.
That is, if the game takes 30 minutes, it means there are very few pictures, few options, or something that will draw you into the game process. And if it takes 10 hours or more, it means a lot of pictures, a lot of scenes, and so on.
 

Tjord

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I feel like the writing is the worst part of this game still. There's almost no ntr feeling. Bad writer imo, 3/10 update.

Be the judge yourself. Things feel off...

Especially the drinking scene, there is almost no effect on luna (after her drinking and the investigation scene, the drunkedness seems completely gone)... seems like it need some fix. Need more ntr and corruption and helplessness vibes, emotions are just flat throughout the game.

Animation and everything is good, writer is... I just wish for someone better.

PC:
 
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I feel like the writing is the worst part of this game still. There's almost no ntr feeling. Bad writer imo, 3/10 update.

Be the judge yourself. Things feel off...

Especially the drinking scene, there is almost no effect on luna (after her drinking and the investigation scene, the drunkedness seems completely gone)... seems like it need some fix. Need more ntr and corruption and helplessness vibes, emotions are just flat throughout the game.

Animation and everything is good, writer is... I just wish for someone better.

PC:
Even in chapter 2. "Are you the type to give up immediately?" or something along the lines. Maybe this is just a personal preference but I don't like it when the FL is taking the lead in an NTR situation... It just feels like cheating instead of NTR.

Not to mention how leeeeengthy the texts are. Jesus. So much lore dump and so much unnecessary details. I don't mind lore and building up the relationship but I feel like being concise about everything is a lot better.
 
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Tjord

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Even in chapter 2. "Are you the type to give up immediately" or something along the lines. Maybe this is just a personal preference but I don't like it when the FL is taking the lead in an NTR situation... It just feels like cheating instead of NTR.
Try to play this one and give me your thoughts.
 

Xenovos

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I feel like the writing is the worst part of this game still. There's almost no ntr feeling. Bad writer imo, 3/10 update.

Be the judge yourself. Things feel off...

Especially the drinking scene, there is almost no effect on luna (after her drinking and the investigation scene, the drunkedness seems completely gone)... seems like it need some fix. Need more ntr and corruption and helplessness vibes, emotions are just flat throughout the game.

Animation and everything is good, writer is... I just wish for someone better.

PC:
I completly agree on the drinking part. The antagonist even told Luna to finish the second bottle and the plotpoint just doesnt go anywhere. I was really dissapointed, because it had so mujch potential. I feel like it was written by 2 separate writers.
 
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I completly agree on the drinking part. The antagonist even told Luna to finish the second bottle and the plotpoint just doesnt go anywhere. I was really dissapointed, because it had so mujch potential. I feel like it was written by 2 separate writers.
Wait so she didn't even get taken advantage of while drunk? I guess patreon wouldn't like that...
 
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