Initial thoughts:
If I had to use one word to describe this game, it would be lifeless.
The world feels dull and barren, the characters are boring and emotionless, and the lack of facial expressions really exacerbates this issue.
Story: 1/5
It feels like nothing in this story is intertwined as a plot should be. I feel like each set of characters, Melanie & Tiffany, the sisters, Lucy and Jane are all supposed to characters from different games, and were just plucked at random and put into this one.
There is no cohesion, and 99% of the time, I just felt lost.
Characters: 1/5
The author gave himself a great base with the MC being a therapist, and yet, he has no legitimate patients (as far as I can tell), with the only person actually taking 'sessions' from him being Jane.
More so, I can't decide whether or not the MC is just an obnoxious, egotistical asshole, or the girls are overly whiny and pathetic.
Sound: 0/5
Not much to say here as sound is a nonexistent concept in this game.
For god's sake, at least add some quiet bgm, anything to help cut through the dullness of the game experience.
Art: 5/5
If there was one thing about this game I had to say was done well, it would be the art, and, in my opinion, it was done near perfectly. The girls are beautiful and realistically proportioned. The world itself - MC's home, Melanie's home, Lucy's home, the Café and MC's office - all of it looks great, if not a little gloomy, some brighter colours here and there would do wonders.
I love the UI and map. Both look great and are very minimalistic and unobtrusive, something that most authors on this site get wrong.
Conclusion:
I'm only giving this game a 2/5 because of the art, but other than that, it was, to me, a massive disappointment. If you want to give it a try, be my guest, and I hope you enjoy it, but it just isn't for me.