Could definitely use some work on the dialogue, I saw one instance of name showing up as [undefined], When you go to wake up Lacey it says you're getting closer to Maitland's room not Lacey's then cuts straight down to you in the kitchen talking about what you saw in Lacey's room, could use some more introduction to the characters the stepsisters get like none, also can we clarify whether or not your dad had the heart attack because of what he saw or if the entire events of him driving home and going straight into the bedroom were him in the process of having a heart attack the entire time. The premise would be nice for a character filled game since you have the potential of 8 wives and potential stepsisters and stepaunts though technically I don't believe they're step-anything after divorcing your dad.