I like the basic concept of the game, and I think it's a good basic premise, but mastery of the english language/better translation along with a comprehensive vision of where the game is going both from a mechanical standpoint and a story telling standpoint would go a long way. The framework is there for this to be something interesting, but it is just a little rough right now. Good luck, dev. Initial reception and first build was not good, but this game can become something great.
I'm not going to delete it, but when there are more events, I'll make a button to exclude those that aren't family-related, but then most likely 80% of the content for them will disappear.That's right sir. We all love ntr very very much
Edit: Wait no, don't remove ntr. They are just the loud minority!
Спасибо, я постараюсь. Я учу английский, но мой уровень всё ещё на уровне Google.
Not a programmer, yet attempting to make one of the more difficult AVN formats similar to a sandbox, but without a map, as a first project. I guess we were warned that it wasn't really ready for release but damn, took me like 5 minutes to figure out how to even start it and get something beyond just the camper on the road image. Oh well. Not a fan of sandboxes (or AVNs that try to pass as a game) so I ended up deleting it. Most 1st-project devs with no prior experience just make a kinetic story or perhaps the next level with some choices that guide it in different directions toward different endings/LI's.
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Since the dev sked for feedback: I haven't tried the game yet, maybe I'll do when the bugs people comment about are fixed, but I checked the game exclusively for the family title and the incest tag.
The dev mentioned in comments that the family are step-members. If that's the case there should be an option to choose real family. Otherwise the immersion is lost and you're better watching a video on the internet with a plethora of lame fake incest.
The dev mentioned in comments that the family are step-members. If that's the case there should be an option to choose real family. Otherwise the immersion is lost and you're better watching a video on the internet with a plethora of lame fake incest.
Kim's BJ the in his suit, would be slobber and precum all over the crotch, if done as depeicted.
Dont apologize it is YOUR game. No matter how good a medium-rare steak is, some people will still prefer to eat grass. That said, the game is clearly in its early stages and lacks a sense of direction. I haven’t run into any error screens, but I did lose interest because the progression relies on mindless clicking just to see what happens next, instead of actually making me feel involved in the game.
Also, some parts of the game’s text need polishing. For example, I understand that “Charles” translates to “Karl” in russian language, and using either would be fine if the game stuck to one version consistently. But it doesn’t, and during the playthrough you end up double-taking with a confused “huh?”.
Overall, the foundation is there, but it needs refinement, engagement, and consistency to keep players invested.
Good luck to you!
Does anyone know how to delete a page? I realized the game isn't ready yet, so I'll have to rework it.
Hi dev your game looks promising. Here’s an idea you could use. A government or group that has access to government override program that turns the tracking device on your cellphone on has been hunting down all the female survivors for their own pleasure and your women in your family is next. The phone is the best way to find survivors from natural disasters to man made.
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Don't worry keep it, my first game or 2 started just like yours, 1 star reviews NTR complaints etc, just make changes and push updates, ignore hate, keep a few suggestions in mind of what people do want, but also work on what you think is most important or what you like, i was very surprised when my scuffed html games turned from 1 star shithole comments, into people begging for updates and people event telling me I make their favorite games. you have a good foundation. i played around for 5 minutes so far I can say Maybe bold and color character names to read easy, slow down the progression to where the milf isnt ready to fuck on the 2nd encounter, build it up a little, and that white screen is hard on the eyes during events.
also patreon banned me careful its hindered my production ever sense. Somthing like family in the name will be a big red flag and you will be taken down quick, learn to do the land lord generic names with renaming etc its not hard.
It's another Condemned Town-like (which is not a bad thing at all, that game's great) but it misses on some things that make that game great.
For starters, that game is an html (made in Twine?) and this isn't just something the dev decided was easier, it contributes to the form and flow of the game, something this one isn't getting quite right yet. For example, the driving x sleep x exploration mechanic is a bit weird, in a way an html game might not get since it would have different structures and such.
Second, the characters and premise are not very well established (not to mention the English and naming mistakes all over the place). From what I gathered, the main character is called Karl, right? At least some times, that is. Other times, his name is Charles. Seems like the dev is russian, judging by the language ticks you can pick up (and by the russian error message that popped up in one of the events), and that might be what causes this odd name variation.
Again, the game is based on a really strong reference (going for a PVE/Rival NTR mechanic is not a bad idea at all, as long as you can interact with the characters during events), but it needs a lot of polishing. Regardless, godspeed, Dev!
For starters, that game is an html (made in Twine?) and this isn't just something the dev decided was easier, it contributes to the form and flow of the game, something this one isn't getting quite right yet. For example, the driving x sleep x exploration mechanic is a bit weird, in a way an html game might not get since it would have different structures and such.
Second, the characters and premise are not very well established (not to mention the English and naming mistakes all over the place). From what I gathered, the main character is called Karl, right? At least some times, that is. Other times, his name is Charles. Seems like the dev is russian, judging by the language ticks you can pick up (and by the russian error message that popped up in one of the events), and that might be what causes this odd name variation.
Again, the game is based on a really strong reference (going for a PVE/Rival NTR mechanic is not a bad idea at all, as long as you can interact with the characters during events), but it needs a lot of polishing. Regardless, godspeed, Dev!
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Well let's be honest bro they are zombies they would not rape anyway they would just be eating you alive.LOL
Is zombie ntr really ntr though? I mean if they're undead?
buddy how can you think everyone likes that stuff? What thread did you look at as most don't like it and most games on this site don't have it or make it avoidable through the players actions. Hell, there have been wars on many threads because game makers didn't warn about it or added it latter and make it not avoidable. It got so bad to the point they added a new rule for it. with that said it is you game and I wish you good luck, but I am out as I am not a cuck or into the shit.