English: 3
User Interface: 5
User Experience: 5
Art: 5
Dialogue: 3
Story: 3
Opinion: 3
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Avg: 3.86/10
I'll come out the gates swinging with, I don't like any of the VNs from this dev. Every one has terrible English, nonsensical story, and really, you'd might as well just use HS yourself. It's just a ton of sex scenes with next to no concrete story between them. But I will turn off my brain and dissect this as well as I can. Honestly, if you're reading a review to see if you'll enjoy the story, you won't. Turn on Skip Unseen Text, hold CTRL, and do what you gotta do. I'm one of the unfortunate masochists on this site that are looking for a good story to go along with my smut. One big thing that completely deters me is listening to a braindead MC think lines like "What I wouldn't give to fuck her right now." or "God she tastes so good." It gives me feelings akin to either "Haha look at me, I'm better than you" or your dad cheering you on during sex, and both of those are not good feelings for different reasons. And since MC in this throws hissy fits at the drop of a hat and is an absolute lemon, it reminds me of the former and I just go "Please shut up you entitled little shit."
Anyway, you start out with a trope I don't like of a love interest introducing you, the reader, to the story. Then MC talking to his diary like "Let me tell you what happened last week" And it was just him having sex with his mom. And my issue with this is he talked about it as if it was the first time, but the first thing she said was "I thought you'd be tired from doing this all day." Then after the unearned sex scene happenes, it flashes back AGAIN to how it started. MC acts like a little creep and assaults his mom in her sleep. So she rewards him with sex. Skip forward past about 5 more unearned sex scenes and MC is randomly stopped in a grocery store and told, "I'm someone you've never met, also I think I'm your father." So instead of getting all sides of the story, taking it in and processing, or thinking at all; MC runs home, pushes his dad on the ground, says "You're not my real parents" cries and runs to mr. big business. Then a THREE YEAR TIME SKIP barring you, the reader, from learning anything about anyone, to when he lives with his billionaire family in the smallest house ever going to community college. Then everything snowballs as MC's perversions get him involved in trite bullshit.
Things in this "story": Murder, corporate espionage, family drama, corrupt teachers, and giant cover ups. Things that matter in the story: literally nothing. Every single time there's a scene change, it feels like it has next to nothing to do with what was happening before. What doesn't help is the terrible translation, spelling mistakes, bad characters, and completely unlikeable MC. And once again, it's all just loose ideas to let MC stumble into a girl to have sex with in a depraved or scummy manner. It's pretty boring and unappealing if you ask me.
Like I said, bad English, UI and UX is pretty much standard Renpy, Just a couple fonts. The art is fine. I guess. All but two of the women have the same exact body type and it's all straight from HoneySelect. The story and dialogue are big nothing burgers so I don't like this.
TL;DR: Hold CTRL to get to a scene you like then repeat if that's all you need.