VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Family at Home [Final] [SALR Games]

So, this is a tricky game.

Does it have interesting story? Nope.
Does it have interesting characters? Nope.
Is it just a simple, painfully dumb game with no challenge whatsoever? Yes.
Although I really enjoyed it.
If you want a simple game, with hot girls and good scenes go for it. It will be a nice time. If you want something more complex stay away from it. This is not that kind of experience.

aside from what others have said, i mostly just skipped through the story to see if things kicked up at all during the sex scenes... they didn't. i lost interests in those scenes because they where all the same but with a different girl. it just wasn't stimulating.

I didnt get very far, but I doubt any of the many problems would get any better.

Pros:
Literally don't know what to put here

Cons:
- Looks bad
- Story is horrible
- Characters are boring
- Lack of meaningful choices
- Horribly translated

Bad, really, really, bad.

1) The plot is HORRIBLE, seems like written by a 12 year old, not by the grammar, because we know the creator is not an English speaker, but because is simply stupid, It's so so dumb that actually you could think It is a comedy.
2) The grammar, yeah, as I said before we know the creator is not an English speaker, but believe me guys, I speak and read Spanish perfectly and the Spanish version is HORRIBLE also, so no excuse here.
3) There's a fuck-a-ton of clipping in the animations.

The only good thing about the game is some animations are good and some models are hot, but It has 0 merit since they're all honey select achievements, not the creator.

PS: About the ones forgiving the awful plot with the "It's a porn game" excuse... Then why the fuck play a game instead just go and watch porn or lewd animations...

Good variety of girls to fuck, art is quite good and the animation in the sex scenes is really really good. Story and gameplay don't have that much appeal, but hey, we're not playing lewd games for the story, right? So this one is really great on the lewd scenes side. Looking forward for next releases.

EDIT: Dev i releasing new content quite often, which is great. I believe this game already more and better content than many games that have been in development for years.

This Game has excellent potential to be Great I Like Thomas mom ( Sol ) content and MC mom ( Rebecca ) I wouldn't mind MORE content with Thomas and them I find it really hot . The Developer Should Definitely ADD a NTR Route for the people who enjoy The Thomas content i am very excited for each update.

Excellent game it gives us a look into a situation if you and a couple of people where stuck in a home and had to bone each other due to some virus the developer provides options for all kinks and I greatly appreciate that I can tell that this novel is going to be great

Shows a lot of promise for a devs first or second attempt at a game. Lots oft very hot scenes for such an early version too.
I love how extra lewd the character models and outfits are, and the story has a dark mystery element, which is more interesting than the usual harem stuff.

Holy Rngesus,

Im gonna put as much effort in my review as the developer 4 his VN.
Don't bother downloading, trust me even tho this game is horrible i tried to
"enjoy" it but that's simply impossible. Horrific writing, it also ignores the name given by u & still calls the MC Alonso. (Fuck you Alonso)
Female characters randomly get parts of their cloths removed, for a frame
& killing the mood even more, WHY?
H scenes end in the female being bukkake(ed?) on the lower body.
The renders are gritty and very weirdly lit. If i could id give it 0 Stars.
I mean as u might guess i'm not a native speaker either, but fuck me
this "VN" is terribly painful to read.
If he get's someone with even shity English skillz the writing would improve severely. IMO he shouldn't released it in English , or what he think's it is.

i make it short: crap game

1.) Story is blunt (No - i don't mean the english translation as i honestly accept that the author is spanish and therefore the VN is also spanish with translation, which sometimes is horrible, but acceptable)
2.) Renders are much to bright
3.) aside 2.) the renders are grainy and oldfashioned
4.) Looks of the characters are just awful and very few characters are really likable
5.) there are some more things wich maybe could be mentioned, but i better save the time and play some other games.

so overall i can't recommend this game at all

I really want to like this game and for the better part the premise for the game is okay and could even be great.

My problems with this by far is the translation to English and that is terrible, I really think that dev should get someone to translate or at least proof-read this.

While the first chapter didn't have animation the characters were all rendered within the scenes and for chapter 2 they are just shown on a blurred background image. The animation is back as rendered images so not sure why dev changed the style like that for chapter 2.

In chapter 1 the dev at least warned you of any trans content but didn't bother in chapter 2 and just hide everything behind a 'you hear a noise' do you want to investigate? Yes / No. For those that don't want to see those scenes you have to quickly scroll back and then select NO.

Okay, I understand that the virus is effecting the women in the game and that would be paradise for any male but why does dev has a problem with creampies or allowing the option to creampie?

Twice, he gets to fuck his aunt and each time dev has him pull out, why? If the girls or aunt is that horny then they wouldn't care if he cums inside them or not.

"For as large a download as this is, the graphics are rather terrible and the content is short. The text is rather difficult to see in some scenes and the one choice you get to make, the choices are still in Spanish.
If you are looking for good Futa/Trans content I would pass on this game."

Above was my original review back when Chapter 1 was the only thing out and it was over 1 gb. I've also changed my rating to 3 stars, as I just can't get past some of the graphical errors, where it looked like a penis was glued onto the MC's jeans to take a leak.

I am updating this review after playing through chapter 6. The developer has listened to feedback and fixed a lot in the game. Now the full game is only half a gig which is much better considering the quality. The animations are much better, and the dialog has been good for Engrish.

As far as futa/trans content, there is not trans on male, although in chapter 5 he does fuck her.

Chapter 6 didn't make sense because it said 4 days before, but I'm pretty sure he meant 4 days later.

The chapters are rather short, I don't know why the dev insists on 1 week updates. To redownload a game every week for 10-15 minutes of playtime isn't worth it.

story: As it is still a beta, the plot is still a bit vague, but I could understand where it goes ...
characters: I really liked their characters and their designs, with a reservation for the sister who was really cool, in addition to her personality.
grafico: Well, with regard to the graphics it's pretty average, but taking into account that it's a beta then it's acceptable.

The girls are hot
they dont look alike and have good bodies each is special for themselves the desings are nice

If you want a quickie and fast fab this game is ideal for you its in the material and gives you plenty of hot scenes

Good Points
+Renders and animations looks decent.

Bad Points
-Game main languange is Espanol so English languange is translation and its awfull... I mean its realy bad in lots of scene you cant even understand what they are actualy talking about. Like MC telling his sister ''Its normal we are brothers'' or telling girls ''he'' etc and generaly we have lots of grammer problem aswell. Even worst my grammer imagine possiblity of this!
-Aside from translations we have other languange problems like mixed dialuges. For example in that scene we are seeing MC's aunt talking but that dialuge actualy belongs to MC.
-Story looks pretty basic and unorriginal.
-Some character face are looks little bit unattractive.

For The End
Its pretty odd game... With good translation and fixed bad points it could be 3-4 star rate game maybe? But right now its just poor.

For a demo game lasting about 30 minutes there sure is a lot of sex scenes. Good lord!! That's cool

This game was created by Sebastian Alejandro and many will quickly notice Spanish is his first language. So for all the "questionable translation" to English I will give him a free pass on this matter.

This is a story of a young man (Alonso) who is quickly summoned to his Aunt's house to live there for a week with his Mom & Sister. Thing is this is no ordinary house. It's practically a mansion. More characters are quickly introduced as the Aunt has 3 daughters* varying in different types. There are 6 main girls in total so in future updates don't be surprise if Mr. Alonso ends up being The Harem King.

All the girls personalities are pretty much what you would normally see in an H game. From bitchy, to innocent, to naughty, and of course there's the nympho. Remember the * I put in the last paragraph? One of them is .

This "person in question" will NOT kill the onus's erection. The way it's used I find it tasteful. However during the final update the Dev may fully pull the curtain since he has nothing to lose at that point. Me personally I don't mind it, so that's where I stand.

Back to the story. As soon as Alonso lands on his Aunt's property everyone's mood immediately changes. Lust quickly kicks in and the Bro is checking out his Sister's ass saying "not bad!!" to himself, while checking out his Mom & Aunt a few seconds later.

Sex scenes quickly follows during and after the intros. Turns out there's something in the house that's making everyone horny. Yup. We have ourselves a Scooby Doo mystery!! The "monster" in question appears to be the Uncle.

Overall this game will consists of 5 Chapters, updates coming every month (I think) where answers to the sex drive mystery will likely be answered, while a whole lot of sex for the next 4 chapters.

The sex scenes are fine. I don't know if it's meant to be funny, but the first BJ scene I couldn't stop laughing. The sound effects was a bit over the top. I also had to lower the volume. Oops. My bad lol!! In all seriousness the animations were fine. Didn't really have any issues with any sex scenes.

There no Father figure in this game (might be later on), BUT there is an Uncle. He's very shady, and appears to be responsible for the funky air at his house. As for why this is happening is not answered in this chapter.

Verdict: Drop those pants, time to fap!! Like I said: lots of sex scenes in a 30 minute game. Fap & Go indeed. Well done Mr. Alejandro
Looking forward to see what's next. Give it a chance

Pros
- Sex! Sex! Sex!!! (also animated)
- Lots of hot girls, with different variety and figures
- Uncle/Father is alive, well, part of the story

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- The BJ sound effects
- Music
- Story

Cons
- it's pretty obvious, gonna give him a free pass this chapter
- Girls immediately turn into nymphomaniacs when they see Alonso's dick (it's a Trope, let's not kid ourselves)
- The "girl" may be a buzzkill for some F95 members