Thanks for the info.
I know how to use the search function
I did read all of WLS's responses, but didn't get an answer to the above questions I asked.I know how to use the search function
I did read all of WLS's responses, but didn't get an answer to the above questions I asked.
acehigh
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I've fixed some typos/grammar errors and the mother and aunt references. Also, a few other things.
Things I did:
Keep in mind, this was only about 30 minutes of work. Not to mention, I did this for free, so don't expect me to have re-written and checked every word from Beginning to End Although, I have taken care of many instances. I used to write a lot of Literotica novels back in the day, so I am dusting the cobwebs off and would appreciate any reviews on my Aunt and MC BJ scene dialogue. It was done very quickly, but you should notice a vast improvement. I actually like Whiteleaf Studios work, and wanted to contribute something, even if it may be a one-time thing lol.
All that is attached in the file is the script.rpy file. Just unzip, copy and paste, and enjoy
Things I did:
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Keep in mind, this was only about 30 minutes of work. Not to mention, I did this for free, so don't expect me to have re-written and checked every word from Beginning to End
Although, I have taken care of many instances. I used to write a lot of Literotica novels back in the day, so I am dusting the cobwebs off and would appreciate any reviews on my Aunt and MC BJ scene dialogue. It was done very quickly, but you should notice a vast improvement. I actually like Whiteleaf Studios work, and wanted to contribute something, even if it may be a one-time thing lol.All that is attached in the file is the script.rpy file. Just unzip, copy and paste, and enjoy
cebs
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I think this game makes sense if it's step family because there's not even a single similarity of features (eye color, hair color, skin color) between them all.
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Then the "head of the family" is no longer valid to get pure family babies.
The "Head of the Family" is the main theme for this game and step family is not what the game is about.
Hey dev, on next mom's arts make her pussy more hairy, it looks more milfy!!
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Spermasahne
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4 Years? Awwwwwwwwwww.... so cute, you still have hope lol
This will be just another unfinished game.
It will be fully finished in 3 months4 Years? Awwwwwwwwwww.... so cute, you still have hope lol
This will be just another unfinished game.
acehigh
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Niels Holgersson
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Well, the last update was 50/50, we get some action, but then this stalling and thinking about another girl. The mc seems to be a bit dense, to put it mildly, but we are actually getting there. We still have no idea how large this clan is, might be another long drawn out and time consuming game, we will have to wait and see. I still can't wait to see the breeding part, but I think there will be more mechanics added to the game, management etc. Keep it coming, on the whole a game with a good future.
Raphael98
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Whiteleaf Studio I noticed the aunt still refers to her daughter/MC's cousin by the default name at least once even after it is changed. Might want to do a search on all of the default names and make sure the only place they're used is in the renaming prompts, and only variables are used afterwards. Also when Winter is first introduced the dad calls her 'Witner'.
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Not even any vaginal sex yet just a couple of BJ so far.
Leo D. Marstone
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I asked the dev about this some time ago and the focus of the game is breeding/impregnation and not pregnancy content.
So if I understood him correctly there is a lot of flavour text and scenes revolving around the breeding kink but don't expect any pregnant sex scenes. He mentioned some visible preggo bellys though. Take from it what you will.
Kinda meh to be honest because of course I had certain expectations coming from Tamas Awakening.
Check page 4 for posts I mentioned if you are interested.
Tama's Awakening was great and you had actual pregnancy content in it. Kinda thought that this was the dev's theme going forward in other projects.
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Thanks for your detailed answer!
I was hoping there were more content than just text too.
I'll look into the other game!