VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Family Diary [Ch. 2] [CrisDark31]

The story is not very good, the renders are just ok but seem dated. Then there is the ridiculous click the moving camera to get a nude picture. After awhile I just gave up, just didn't seem worth the effort.

In a word... saggy

No choice who you fuck and every girl has the exact same alien proportions of a very old lady, with a young face. Definitely should be tagged differently.

Girls 1/10 looks like a lot of nightmarish surgery
English, pretty good,10/10 relative to the genre as a whole
Story 2/10 hard to follow
Interface 3/10 for the annoying. unskippable, jumping camera "minigame"
Freedom 0/10, all choices are inconsequential

I probably wouldn't bother with this one unless something i've touched on, scratches a fetish itch for you

I hadn't played the game before ch 2, the story is a little confusing about the MC's relationship with some characters, at least as far as I played ch 2, where it says some girls are family but doesn't specify the degree of kinship , or if it would be that they are family only for consideration without blood ties.

another point is that practically all the girls have voluptuous and similar bodies. I believe that if there was a diversity of bodies for them, it would be much more attractive.

There are 03 girls with the same hair type, where also a wider variety of hair would be good for the game.

Some small errors of speech in the English Language, where it refers to the female character but it is written in the masculine.

Girls are between average and good looking but what killed my interest was the weird pacing, the "minigame" of clicking on pictures ingame and overall, the lack of story focus, and the weirdness of some renders (like for example, girl in clothing, one render she is topless, next again in clothing: bug? feature? why? what's the reason for a random topless shot? is it related to the picture hunting thing? nothing is explained).

Mostly the game is translated in english but spanish is still present in some scenes/phrases.

Maybe the game will become better later, since it's still in early phase of developpment, but that will be to see.

For the love of god, please remove the flashing camera from the game. You're literally gatekeeping your own game with that trash.

The models in this game are really really good, but the English, and the fucking flashing camera, it's really bad.

Create a discord to get some help, or just read the forum thread. Get a proofreader or someone to help you with the grammar.

AND REMOVE THE FLASHING CAMERA LIGHTS.

Horrible English translation and the stupid camera flashing on the screen you are supposed to try to click on is ridiculous. But at least the renders are good and the girls are hot. Get a discord if you don't have one and get some native English speaking fans to help you out.

Only positive here are hot chicks/milfs...a lot of them.
Everything else is subpar.
Plot is uninteresting and generic, there are annoying and meaningless "photoshot" click-me scenes every now and then, as well as mcs "rendgen vision" aka imagination (being able to see/imagine almost every new chick he meets in nude)...
Player has no real choices thugh it isnt tagged as KN.
All chicks are just thrown at mcs feet, all chicks like/love him instantly ("omg he is so cute...such a handsome young guy, you are so lucky" etc).
Though it already has a few full sex scenes, those are made poorly (regardless of animated/not animated),
All in all, this game looks like as an elementary school level project .
If you are at that (right) age you might find it enjoyable. Otherwise hard skip would be recommended.

Very good new work , very good characters , there's less sex animation .
The story is simple and the girls are open , it's very comfortable to play .
From the perspective of the identity of the photographer and the excellent images of the girls, the author pays attention to the picture, which is very good .
I hope the author can finish this work, and good works will be found and appreciated by everyone .
Never make the game a sandbox, because the author has the idea of a sandbox in the future, judging from the parallel development of different girls in the story ,PLS dont .
As a non-native English speaker, I don't care about the minutiae of English grammar . People who play porn games care about grammar, which is always difficult for me to understand .

for me the big problem here is the translation to english,its pretty bad,text overlap itself between both langues ,i used a transparent mod to see better the renders and pretty much i needed to put my face over the screen to read it so i think also need a better font ,those are minors errors but the big one is the script itself i dunno if they are half family or all family or nothing at all women go in and out of the house and you dont fucking have a clue whats going on , e.g ellis tell you in fornt of your room she wants to have sex again and sometime later she says its the first time...../\? no prologue at all ,you dont know who the fuck are this ppl ,you repeat yourself a couple of times in the same scene ,so for me is hard one game have future nice renders nice models but lack of a story to tell

Version played: Ch 1, v0.1

Pretty short, you can finish it in 10 mins. The renders look a bit better than the average ones in other games (you know the ones with the grainy effect?). A few choices but have no visual impact for now since its still early for the game. Also no ambient music and only 1 sfx so far. The girls look great i guess that's 1 plus.