story * 1 Star. The story starts out strong building lots of characters and interests. Feeling like the Dev could deliver an amazing tell. Its rudely and abruptly stopped for the addition of easy kink points. Breaking all immersion immediately. The story could be capable of telling that story without the far fetched reality breaking inclusion fetishes. Simply put it's not an issue that they are there but more of an issue as to how we get there. Two cops molest a teacher in front of the entire school and the reality immersion Breaking only continues from there.
Game play * 1 Star. I'm not sure why this project was allowed in the game section as it's not a game, you are offered 0 choices. Seems like something that should belong in the comic short-story section.
Characters ** 2 Stars. There are several well developed characters in the story but the all immersion Breaking police officers once again drag everyone else down. They are basically te reason I'm ofnthe opinion that this project isn't anything more than a fetish cash grab. The author is clearly capable of great writing yet has chosen not to incorporate their skills to the fullest.
Renders *** 3 Stars. The renders aren't the best. They are far from the worst but could be better.
Kinks * 1 Star. There are a ton of fetishes that Dev intends to feature and none of them really are so bad when well written. However the fetishes seemed very forced without reality taken into account. Some fetishes tagged aren't even present yet like NTR, it seems set up for the future. As far as I understand Fetishes should only be tagged once present.
Overall Score ** 2 Star. I can't rate this as a good story or a good game because its rushed to break all immersion in the name of a dark themed fantasy with no immersion. I can't believe the story therfore i can't enjoy the fetishes therefore I can't enjoy the game. This is very sad because you can easily tell Dev is capable of doing much better.
If you aren't into a darker themed story then this really isn't for you anyway. If you into it and don't mind the breaking of immersion and wanna just get right into it you will likely find this game allot more enjoyable as it offers a product that there isn't allot of on the Market. Which is a good thing. I rate the game *** 3 Stars if you are are okay with the immersion breaking elements.
Game play * 1 Star. I'm not sure why this project was allowed in the game section as it's not a game, you are offered 0 choices. Seems like something that should belong in the comic short-story section.
Characters ** 2 Stars. There are several well developed characters in the story but the all immersion Breaking police officers once again drag everyone else down. They are basically te reason I'm ofnthe opinion that this project isn't anything more than a fetish cash grab. The author is clearly capable of great writing yet has chosen not to incorporate their skills to the fullest.
Renders *** 3 Stars. The renders aren't the best. They are far from the worst but could be better.
Kinks * 1 Star. There are a ton of fetishes that Dev intends to feature and none of them really are so bad when well written. However the fetishes seemed very forced without reality taken into account. Some fetishes tagged aren't even present yet like NTR, it seems set up for the future. As far as I understand Fetishes should only be tagged once present.
Overall Score ** 2 Star. I can't rate this as a good story or a good game because its rushed to break all immersion in the name of a dark themed fantasy with no immersion. I can't believe the story therfore i can't enjoy the fetishes therefore I can't enjoy the game. This is very sad because you can easily tell Dev is capable of doing much better.
If you aren't into a darker themed story then this really isn't for you anyway. If you into it and don't mind the breaking of immersion and wanna just get right into it you will likely find this game allot more enjoyable as it offers a product that there isn't allot of on the Market. Which is a good thing. I rate the game *** 3 Stars if you are are okay with the immersion breaking elements.