onefingersalute
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Overlord070
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Oh well, MC gives soy cuck vibes anyway. Better to come back after 5 or so updates and see where it's at.
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It's not the best quality game by any means, but not every game needs to be super deep or whatnot. Sometimes I just want to play a game where I can turn-off my brain a bit and just enjoy the eye candy. I do wonder what the plot will be since it seems to be about whatever the father wanted to talk about with MC.
Ok - please advise - if this game will have NTR or any of those fetishes.
will it be a harem game
will any of the MC's LI be with anyone else, and yes will we have choices to avoid all the voyeur, lez stuff
Now we will see how fast the Dev responds as I have found those that do not respond within a reasonable time are NTR Dev's
will it be a harem game
will any of the MC's LI be with anyone else, and yes will we have choices to avoid all the voyeur, lez stuff
Now we will see how fast the Dev responds as I have found those that do not respond within a reasonable time are NTR Dev's
It was okay for the initial release. The cg are kinda generic, but still good and likeable.
The text in the dialogues needs to be corrected, there are often mistakes in addresses (mother, where sister should be, names with a lowercase letter, etc.). This is mostly because you introduced a whole bunch of female characters at once, rather than gradually.
cons:
1. Dialogues are weak. For example:
Shy people usually don't say that they are shy. They either remain silent or literally/figuratively avoid the conversation.
Here he himself in every second dialogue for some reason tries to say that he is shy. Also, other people rarely say about shy people that they are shy. They are usually more harsh in their expressions and call them idiots or weird.
2.
Problems with plot:
Why would he be shy at all, he has a complete family, he is a millionaire and he is not a virgin, judging by his backstory with his ex-girlfriend. Or is he embarrassed about something specific (the desire for incest, for example?)
3. It is unclear why so much attention is paid to some trip, it should be an ordinary event for the son of a millionaire.
4. There are scenes where other guys fuck your potential LI. Now you need to either develop this theme further (add NTR, sharing or whatever) or delete these scenes to hell, because they look dubious, unnecessary for the plot and at the same time unavoidable.
5. "They arr rook same". Many of the female characters are quite similar, when I'm away from the screen they are completely identical in my eyes. There needs to be more variety in hairstyles, hair color, clothing style and makeup.
The text in the dialogues needs to be corrected, there are often mistakes in addresses (mother, where sister should be, names with a lowercase letter, etc.). This is mostly because you introduced a whole bunch of female characters at once, rather than gradually.
cons:
1. Dialogues are weak. For example:
Shy people usually don't say that they are shy. They either remain silent or literally/figuratively avoid the conversation.
Here he himself in every second dialogue for some reason tries to say that he is shy. Also, other people rarely say about shy people that they are shy. They are usually more harsh in their expressions and call them idiots or weird.
2.
Problems with plot:
Why would he be shy at all, he has a complete family, he is a millionaire and he is not a virgin, judging by his backstory with his ex-girlfriend. Or is he embarrassed about something specific (the desire for incest, for example?)
3. It is unclear why so much attention is paid to some trip, it should be an ordinary event for the son of a millionaire.
4. There are scenes where other guys fuck your potential LI. Now you need to either develop this theme further (add NTR, sharing or whatever) or delete these scenes to hell, because they look dubious, unnecessary for the plot and at the same time unavoidable.
5. "They arr rook same". Many of the female characters are quite similar, when I'm away from the screen they are completely identical in my eyes. There needs to be more variety in hairstyles, hair color, clothing style and makeup.
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AnyName'llDo
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The story is a mess. There are sentences giving direction that were clearly part of an outline that shouldn't have made it into the game. You have to make decisions that won't make any sense to you because you don't know who the characters are. Your choices mostly don't matter. Things kind of just happen without much flow. Despite all of that, this could be turned into something decent if this were just a rough draft for the dev to get some ideas down. If the desire, though, was to simply keep telling a story like this, I can't see more than a handful of people finding any kind of enjoyment with it.
Adhdclassic
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What potential LI fucks other guys. I just saw his mother and father and his sister and her husband. Who else did I miss a part.
His family seems like a bunch of Douches his father wants to him to reconnect and have a better relationship with the rest of the family and start getting into the business. Hoping it will be some trip with a revelation like fathers dying thats why hes doing the trip.
Agree dialogue leaves much to desire.
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terrashock
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Yeah haven't you ever seen the movie In Time?? No one ages past 25 and currency becomes time remaining on your life. That is why everyone in this totally related family game appears to be 25
fishbrain
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Sounds vaguely familiar but I've not seen it and the voyeur/cuck shit already turned me away anyway.
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Here is the next one to be added to the abandoned list and whether or not you are the one to abandon from the lack of any info on why the chics are all the same in both looks and all seem to be more likely to be in a sorority rather than any believable multi generation family. The sister with a kid looks the same age as each other who both look the same age as the supposed grandmother who is the mc's mom that looks like he is the same age as them too. Add in the dumb idea to have your mc happen to come upon his same age mom getting it from the only aged looking character his dad but even that fails to be close since he is also meant to be old enough to have at least a 20 yr old grand-daughter and he looks nothing like it, but mc comes across his parents having sex and then his older sister & bro in law also getting it really is a bad idea if the mc is supposed to be making this change into the type of dude WHO IS THE GUY FUCKING THE WOMEN AND NOT BEING A CREEP SPYING ON THEM which makes this seem like here we go again with a sissy cunt mc that has no spin and will let the losers get the women we all came here to play as the mc and it us who is doing the fucking with all these same looking chics wanting to be on our cock and taunting the dbags that they are all our women and nothing you can do can change it incest or no! If this is the hopeful reality than great but if it is ntr future see ya there is plenty of that already! This isn't even one that can make noise if it goes that way compared to others in that genre. So dev go for mc being the guy cause there is some hope if so