Ren'Py Fashion Business [Ep.4 v10.00 Extra] [DecentMonkey]

[agn25]

Yeah.., but that kind of finale I definitely wouldn't recommend (I mean the finale of the last photoshoot in "The Office", haha.) Monica didn't experience anything like that even in the Falling Path finale, where she was fucked by a whole line of slum locals. But I'll be honest, I have some concerns about where these orgasms (in the main storyline) might take Monica. Of course, DM has already proven that Monica is indeed a woman of steel with an impenetrable will, but it's still a little unsettling..I'd like to see her continue to be like that no matter what. Otherwise it won't be Monica anymore, but something like Anna or Miriam.

My opinion on that office scene is it is one of the best scenes of the game. Seeing Monica orgasm from being teased and ridiculed by the press while openly showing all and having no mental excuse or hiding under an alias worked well. It fits with the themes of humiliation throughout the game. She is still consciously fighting her body's desires as she has from early in ep2 but with nowhere to consciously hide what she was doing and who was witnessing, her body's wants superseded her mental desire to be in control. In that moment it worked.

Now where DM goes with this from here is where I share your concern. If he keeps it like the office scene where Monica holds herself all the way until there is no reasonable way for her to deny she is not in control, then loses her fight against her body as in the office scene, these scenes will work, at least for me. If she however now starts thinking of this scene whenever she is interviewed and starts too tease and encourages the press too talk dirty too her from the beginning or starts to look forward to being humiliated then yeah, this will go the way of the Fred and Monica scenes. I really hope it doesn't go this way.

Another point to think about is having Monica loose control of herself and get off from humiliation in the moment is a good way of getting around the restrictions he would feel from Patreon. This might enable him some hardcore scenes many have been waiting for while not risking trouble from the moral police.

 

[agn25]

I actually really liked the fact that there are at least some situations that arouse Monica. The idea the Monica gets turned on during public events where everyone realizes that it is her, not some double or anything, is quite reasonable. She was always a powerful woman, was in control. And here she feels defenseless, vulnerable. It is similar to those stories of powerful man, such as politicians, who love to order people aroung during the day, but into submission during the night.

That notion that Monica is almost totally frigit (except for unexplained silly events with Fred) is all right in general, since some women are, but silly for an adult game. Actually, I believe that was expected from the begining - Monica was supposed not to be into vanila sex and all, but a player was intented to discover sexual things that Monica loves, and Monica, as the main protagonist, was meant to discover them herself.

I agree with your first paragraph not so much with your second. I liked the positive outlook you have here.

 

[Stan5851]

My opinion on that office scene is it is one of the best scenes of the game. Seeing Monica orgasm from being teased and ridiculed by the press while openly showing all and having no mental excuse or hiding under an alias worked well. It fits with the themes of humiliation throughout the game. She is still consciously fighting her body's desires as she has from early in ep2 but with nowhere to consciously hide what she was doing and who was witnessing, her body's wants superseded her mental desire to be in control. In that moment it worked.

Now where DM goes with this from here is where I share your concern. If he keeps it like the office scene where Monica holds herself all the way until there is no reasonable way for her to deny she is not in control, then loses her fight against her body as in the office scene, these scenes will work, at least for me. If she however now starts thinking of this scene whenever she is interviewed and starts too tease and encourages the press too talk dirty too her from the beginning or starts to look forward to being humiliated then yeah, this will go the way of the Fred and Monica scenes. I really hope it doesn't go this way.

Another point to think about is having Monica loose control of herself and get off from humiliation in the moment is a good way of getting around the restrictions he would feel from Patreon. This might enable him some hardcore scenes many have been waiting for while not risking trouble from the moral police.

That scene in The Office gave me mixed feelings.

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[Dragon94]

when will there be an update? Fashion buisness

 

[Dragon94]

There could be even more gangbang scenes than in prison. theater . photo sessions

 

[Dragon94]

sex scenes in a porn studio. prison photo sessions. Filip's blowbang could also be in the next update

 

[Wagdy75]

Anyone ever said that shell become sex addicted slut?

Well, isn't this what we are waiting for?

 

[Ostego]

Well, isn't this what we are waiting for?

Nope. I`m waiting for her humiliation, BDSM, bestiality. Not happy slutting

 

[TheLecher]

Well, isn't this what we are waiting for?

You might be, but I'm definitely not.

 

[Stan5851]

when will there be an update? Fashion buisness

The answer to this question can be found on the previous pages. And don't spam one phrase in each post/comment. All that you wrote in 4 posts, could well fit in one, without cluttering the thread with unnecessary posts.

 

[Stan5851]

Nope. I`m waiting for her humiliation, BDSM, bestiality. Not happy slutting

Me too, but on the bestiality thing, I'm looking forward to it more from a canon narrative perspective. You know, just like, for example, "There must always be a Lich King", so the Farm 218 should be as it was originally conceived. It just needs to be done (say, as a separate DLC), if only so that no one can blame the DM for teasing the players for so long but not doing it (even if for reasons beyond his control (moralfags from patreon)). But I'm not likely to fawn over the act of Monica copulating with some dog or horse, haha. That's not what turns me on.

 

[PickerLewd]

I wonder what this game would have been like without censorship? And I'm not talking about sex or nudity, but the stories that couldn't be realised .

I want to read DM's drafts, I guess he must have written his story in text only before creating the images for the episodes.

 

[Ostego]

I wonder what this game would have been like without censorship? And I'm not talking about sex or nudity, but the stories that couldn't be realised .

I want to read DM's drafts, I guess he must have written his story in text only before creating the images for the episodes.

mb in year or two (after finishing game) he`ll discover smth.

 

[agn25]

But I'm not likely to fawn over the act of Monica copulating with some dog or horse, haha. That's not what turns me on.

What if the dog is trained too whip Monica while it and Monica are in some BDSM leathers? Would that turn you on?

On a serious note, the proposed beastiality has never interested me either.

 

[PickerLewd]

What if the dog is trained too whip Monica while it and Monica are in some BDSM leathers? Would that turn you on?

On a serious note, the proposed beastiality has never interested me either.

Yes, bestiality is banned content and I'm not interested in it either (tho we have it in Myriam's game and some people love it).

They can play to turn Monica into a bitch and do a little petplay for a few hours, or something darker and also banned, a ponygirl. Something more violent, I would rule it out.

 

[Stan5851]

Yes, bestiality is banned content and I'm not interested in it either (tho we have it in Myriam's game and some people love it).

They can play to turn Monica into a bitch and do a little petplay for a few hours, or something darker and also banned, a ponygirl. Something more violent, I would rule it out.

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[PickerLewd]

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[Ostego]

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Yeap Marcus not trully in 50% of his words. But thats not half you thought)))

 

[ihl86]

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There's one very good reason to believe that the threat is very real: how scared Melanie is. She disappeared for a short time when she did and now she is so scared of going back that she does everything Victoria says, and we can see how that is getting worse and worse (and public). Nothing short of a horrible version of the Farm would do that. Of course, it's still stupid that Victoria is the one doing the threatening, but that is the game unfortunately.

 

[Ostego]

There's one very good reason to believe that the threat is very real: how scared Melanie is. She disappeared for a short time when she did and now she is so scared of going back that she does everything Victoria says, and we can see how that is getting worse and worse (and public). Nothing short of a horrible version of the Farm would do that. Of course, it's still stupid that Victoria is the one doing the threatening, but that is the game unfortunately.

Thats why i'm continuesly asking DM for flashback of that arc. But he ignores me about that plot line QQ.

And Vicky has more power that is shawn atm.