Be careful, I already had a post where I was critical of aspects of this game and someone had the post removed.
What can I say, the game has issues. While it does have great renders, the writing falls into pit traps all over the place. Monica being a "Bitch" and thus deserving the abuse is disappointing. It's ok to have a game where someone is being abused, but don't blame the victim.
If Monica is a CEO of a fashion business, then when her husbands accounts get frozen, that wouldn't freeze her work accounts she controls. She has a salary from her job, and thus the whole premise doesn't makes sense. I like the idea of making Monica desperate, but it's got to make sense.
I could go on but I don't want to harp on this point.
I highly recommend the game creator views his leaked content here as an advertisement. Sharing your game gets you good will, and I donate money to developers I like. Talking down to consumers probably will not get you liked.
I know you can't change the intro or things already done, but you can be more careful in the writing for future events.
What can I say, the game has issues. While it does have great renders, the writing falls into pit traps all over the place. Monica being a "Bitch" and thus deserving the abuse is disappointing. It's ok to have a game where someone is being abused, but don't blame the victim.
If Monica is a CEO of a fashion business, then when her husbands accounts get frozen, that wouldn't freeze her work accounts she controls. She has a salary from her job, and thus the whole premise doesn't makes sense. I like the idea of making Monica desperate, but it's got to make sense.
I could go on but I don't want to harp on this point.
I highly recommend the game creator views his leaked content here as an advertisement. Sharing your game gets you good will, and I donate money to developers I like. Talking down to consumers probably will not get you liked.
I know you can't change the intro or things already done, but you can be more careful in the writing for future events.