The setup is interesting:
What went wrong? Writting. The MC is supposed to be smart and formidable, but soon turns to be a 2 IQ soccer mom that every cock she see is the best in the universe and completely falls for it, even from teenagers.
Any plot about the CSI part is dead because the inspector is dumb as fuck and has no charisma, she is just a meat piece. It just turned into another family and school saussage fest without much sense at all, the same clichés as any other FMC novel, the "masturbation teaching", the pool lotion massage and the phone pic blackmail. Boring. What looked like an interesting setup turned into a quick fap novel that makes no sense.
Btw, it's not the averague visual novel, where you have paths and options. It's more a kinetic novel where you only click to see or avoid sex scenes, but if you don't click yes on everyone you will soon run out of corruption points so you wont see any other. There are no real branches and in reality there are no real options. That part is deceptive.
Pros:
- The setup
- Watching Linda 2.0 and Gail 2.0 is fun
- You are hookedd into what the paranormal side of things might bring
- If you like overly exagerated women, this is for you
Cons:
- Writting is inconsistent
- It's just a "situations" novel. Not a single character either makes sense, or have any real charisma, or deserves any emotional investment (unless you simp for some boobs or any shit like that)
- Light is wrong in every scene
- Scenarios make no sense. She has somekind of marble palace in her home, and then she has a full audience classroom for just 4 students...
- Some situations are cringe. The gym scene was really hard to see without feeling embarrased, too bad. The text and the bluring of the sunscreen was also WEIRD!
- Faces in general and sex scenes could improve a lotThey are like 5 years old quality. Very outdated
- You have to play it in "dumb mode - whatever, just fuck her dude!". Don't invest time thinking about the characters or the plot. You will be wasting your time. You should skip text to the corruption checkpoint. Really, text is not worth it
If you just want a quick fap to 2/3 scenes once every 2/3 months, its ok. If you are looking for an actual novel, don't waste your time, go elsewhere.